Throughout her entire time at CHS,Twilight has kept a secret since she arrived. A crush towards one friend that gave her everything she thought she didn't need in her life,Sunset Shimmer. Twilight wanted nothing more than to be in the arms of Sunset,but Sunset pushed her into the arms of another. So the secret stays hidden until she finally works up the courage to deal with it herself.
Cover made by me.
This is inspired by a song entitled KAILAN which is english for WHEN so it may be obvious as to what the story is about.
Chapters (5)
Notice Sunset please...Notice her
Amazing idea for a history, I expect to read the next chapter soon.
I'm loving this story so far, it's hella cute!
Please update soon, I love the story so far!
do not worry, it's not always easy to update
Yo, hyped for the next chapter, this was cute af!
I can feel Twilight’s anguish here, the fear of confessing to a crush is far too relatable
Sci-Twi should show her feelings of action to Sunset Shimmer.
Nooo plz tell me they get together
I'm kind of having a debate about that too. I want them to be together but at the same time I want this to be close to reality hence Twilight gets regected by Sunset.
OH COME ON!!!!!
I am loving this story, it’s cute but also realistic which is a nice change of pace, hope to see more!
Definitely unexpected but this just made me more curious of how you will write the rest of the fic
I don't think you're supposed to do this kind of thing. <.< At the least, you should've taken this chapter out when you continued the story.
Timber Spruce will murder your whole family.
I'm honestly impressed they didn't end up together! This could use some better editing, but for shipping, it was cute and surprising. :)
love it!
GAY PANIC
That's how I feel everyday
Prep will ever be.*
And here I thought she'd stop bringing Spike with her now that she's a student at CHS.
Good, now hold on,*
face as her body*
So far so good story wise, but there's a lot of mistakes in regards to spaces in sentences.
awake as she felt*
tent's windows*
Well, glad to know those two are in a relationship of their own.
Awesome!
I did something similar to this myself for a story I did in 2021, but it's a bit different.
Prep girls*
that fit all of them.*
her body to face*
on her hands as her lips pursed.*
https://m.everyone of them falls*
Twilight might've thought*
but he'll take it.*
reputation on one of the popular kids.*
Sunset's mimd*
right words to say.*
took off*
I'll take it, I guess...
friend's*
After reading this a second try, I still enjoyed the story but wish Sunset accepted Twilight's feelings for her as imo they will always be a couple. My other complaint is the huge amount of spaces required for much of the story. Other than that I still enjoyed the story. Slightly.
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It should also be red/blonde head.