• Published 13th Oct 2018
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The Load to Friendship - Clopficsinthecomments



Trixie and Starlight resume the magical show's travelling tour after dealing with some simple fixes that would make their travel a little easier. But as soon as they've solved the space and food problems... a new one crops up! Estrus!

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Just the title is hilarious.

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Hehe, thanks. It started as a working title... But I ended up keeping it.

Twilight would be the fifth biggest.

1. Celestia 26.5 in
2. Chrysalis 24 in
3. Luna 22 in
4. Cadence 20.5 in
5. Twilight 19 in

Fuck you stole my fic

Extra chapteer or secoul where they find out the Trixi is pregnent.


Please?:fluttershysad:

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Prooobably needed a comma somewhere. "Fuck, you...". Interjective expletive, not "fuck you".
I've been ruminating for a while on writing a Starixie fic that's basically this one

Epilogue/sequel where they deal with the kids please.

And don't worry Trixie, I'm pretty sure the spell has bigger effects the more it's cast on someone.

If not, I say Twi tops out at 8.5 inches but much skinnier than Trixie.

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Lol... poor Trixie is always going up against the most amazing, powerful unicorns to have ever lived in Equestria.

Sigh... This looks liked it had some potential to be a decent story to read, but then it just devolved into another "dick on a mare" crap clop fic.

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Sorry man, I know my style is pretty light level and doesn't get too deep, sucks that I missed the mark for you.

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The futa crap ruins it. Otherwise most of the stuff I read from you is fine.

I'd have to agree with Anon E Moose o.o

Twilight probably tops out around 7.5-8.5 inches but slimmer, though she probably beats Trixie by making creative use out of her magic... massaging teats, wings, horn of her partner maybe? XD She WOULD study all kinds of ''tips and tricks'' about it after all XD

It's not the size that matters~ It's how you use it XD

Otherwise neat story ^^ only problems I had with it are pretty much nitpicks so eh XD It was fun and sufficiently ''in-character'' XD though the clop itself was a bit on the simple side of things... Still rather lovely though ^^

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Woah..... Size queen much? O.o;; at 26.5 the only ponies capable of taking that kind of size would either be related to Celestia, adopted by her, or her mortal enemies XD Though I guess there's always room for Celestia x Nightmare moon ships XD

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This is Equestria, where we have Magicâ„¢. Guaranteed to make it fit!

9229200
Where's the cover art from?

9229098
Kind of the point.

That depends on who should Twilight first use it on?

I have two things.
"BUUUUUUUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhnnnnggggg……" is the sound a bell makes.

And since they are definitely in the world of pastel ponies, their gay relationship wouldn't do shit. Seriously.

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I know that feeling. With a cast that’s mostly female it is bound to happen. I might not believe that myself though because out of all the student 6 to get porn it’s just mainly been the males dicking each other. So I guess people really just want the gays?

I request more starburst fics. I know it won’t happen but I we’ll die with the superior ship if I have too.

I wanna see a sequel

Twilight? What have ya been teachin' yer student? :ajbemused:

9228141 It vexes me how envious I am of the title for this premise, and having not come up with it myself. That's about as high a complement as I can bestow.

Futa isn't really my thing, but that title is a... ahem—stroke of genius...

Literally the worst pun I've ever made.

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You really have to be thick to cum up with a pun like that.

All jocks think about is sports all nerds think about is sex lol

Wow. Hot Futa sex and beautiful feels. Loved it!

Starlight and Trixie, really do make great friends, awesomely hot mares and lovers!:moustache:

Good lord man, you're a saint and a scholar. That opening chapter :rainbowlaugh:
Cheers

With that ending, every mare they try that spell with is gonna be much bigger than Trixie, of course :pinkiecrazy:

And Twilight should be bigger than Starlight because of her Alicorn status :pinkiehappy:

Hmmmmm. Very nice, very nice. It's missing a little something though...

Mmmmyes. We need a scene where Starlight casts the spell on both herself and Trixie before they get down to the happy fun-fun times. Double the creaminess, double the fun!

I know, I know. We perverts are never satisfied. (for long) :raritywink:

:pinkiehappy:

There should be a chapter about the three of them where Starlight and Trixie double team Twilight, then Twilight strikes back.

Comment posted by NoLongerSober deleted Oct 15th, 2018

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Agreed. This NEEDS to happen.

This was... incredibly romantic. very erotic and/or hot, and pretty funny too. Bravo, good sir/ma'am, bravo!

Not being a fan of the mares I have to say this fix was undeniably amazing.

Excellently written, great clop, magnificent environment. I loved it.

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I dunno' about a series, but a recurring theme would be hilarious. Unless it was a story a la "The 4000 Year Old Virgin" that focused on Luna's relationship awkwardness. Either way, she can handle eldritch horrors, but lusty moans frothy coats are beyond her.

Twilight has to have a pencil dick, because book horse

Not particularly into futa, but this was great. Very emotional with how they bonded and the sex was vividly described. :pinkiesmile:

Great fic, love it.

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