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WittyNameTFM


Just a nerd who's ships have formed an armada. I like rare pairs, but the list goes on forever. Hope I can throw out a fic or two you might enjoy. The SunDigo guy.

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Ok first off? Love the sass on these two. Second? Trixie is adorably smug about herself and I love it

9341918
I try to keep them from not sounding out of character. :D
And the back and forth between these two is what made me love the ship so much, I'm just glad I can do them justice.

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Keep up the good work!

Awwwww aren't they just adorable! Suuuunny! Do a magic trick!

Oh Celestia what have you done

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I'll do my best.
This was literally just something I threw together the morning I decided to try and post it. Typing on a phone kills your hands. D:

Ok just finished and I have to say? Not bad but I'll kick it to my resident seductress to rate the sex scene. My personal opinion? 8/10. Dagi? If you would?

Trixie? For an inexperienced virgin has much untapped potential and room for growth. Her confidence may be shaky but it's adorable given her typical haughty attitude. A little more practice and perhaps a small push in the dominant domain? Mmmm I see great things I Trixie.

And what of Starlight?

Well if I am being honest? She reminds me quite a bit of my princess Sunset though Starlight here seems to carry a bit less baggage than my little pony and I do which is nice. She is CLEARLY the more mature one and has experienced her own body to know what feels good to tell Trixie she fingered to to sheer bliss. Nice touch darling. Very nice touch.

So what's your verdict?

I give the scene as a whole? Just as you. As a solid 8. A good start and it was sweet and to the point. Perhaps next time things will get a bit more kinky! I know for Sunny and I it will ;D

And there you have it!

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Even more impressive you typed this on a phone

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I mean, the seeds to 'dominate' were planted, if you remember the lyrics to "Tricks up my sleeve".

I think in this instance, Trixie would need to feel like she had control, shaky as it was, Starlight let her lead. And that will definitely build her confidence seeing how well she did.

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Oh I like the way you think. Dusty sweetie can we do a story with this one?

Perhaps Dagi. In due time

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Roleplaying is against site rules. You're not the fictional character Adagio, stop posting as if you were.

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It's just meant for comedy sorry geez :facehoof:

9342660
Lighten up man. This site's meant to be fun. Don't suck the joy out of it.

Wait, the sequel was here the whole time and I haven't noticed it until now. Holy crap, it was in december 2018, amd only now I see this 'o' in 2019... Okay, I'm excited to read this

Okay, I've read it. There was no advance in the plot, just sex, but it was nice and not boring at all. You got some real talent, you better stay that way. Only few people write fics like that, I'm glad you're still creating art. I wish you luck in your future creations. C:

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Oh, thank you so much! To be honest, I wrote this first...and made the backstory to fit afterwards. I'm glad you liked it, and I'm still putting stuff together. I gotta finish these next few parts of my ongoing story, but I kinda miss doing just one off fluff stuff. :twilightsmile:

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