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Dreadnought


There is nothing as liberating, or terrifying, as a blank page.

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This story is a sequel to The Talk


Big Mac and Rainbow Dash's weekend goes awry - horribly!

Third story in the series:
1) Rainbow Dash Comes Out of the Closet
2) The Talk

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

Oh wow, I can't imagine how that could have been more awkward.

Huk

Hmm, the first part was very nice, but the second switched to a bit too ‘serious’ for me. Also, personally, I think that Bow’s personality was a bit off and too serious – in the show, he seems more of a laid-back kind of guy to me.

Still, a good read :twilightsmile:

"Honestly, we thought you were a lesbian.”

Well, that was a clusterfuck. Glad I wasn't there.

Awww. I like these! Hmmm who is AJ’s boyfriend?

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Thanks for the feedback!

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That sentiment is exactly what I was going for!

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I actually plan on revealing that crucial plot point in an upcoming sequel.:ajsmug:

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Have you dropped any hints? Care to give any now?

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They could have been in bed together.

Mac on top.

Rainbow screaming.

Bow bursting through the wall to "save" her.

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My money is on Zephyr Breeze or that she's secretly dating DJ PON-3.

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Is this through personal shipping preferences or do you have a clue leaning you in that direction?

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More random silliness and trying to imagine what shapes Big Mac would fold Zephyr into.

Jeez, that exchange got pretty heated.

I know I'm way behind here, but damn if this wasn't a fun little story. I love how Bow was able to cow Mac. Mac may be a big huge farm pony, but Hell hath no fury like a father protecting his daughter.

Loved this!

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Good to hear. I've actually been thinking of writing a sequel, so it's good to know people have enjoyed the series thus far.

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Oh for sure there's nothing more scarier than a father protecting their daughter or son.

Surprised I never left a comment here. Absolutely love this story! Such a fun piece! Love how Mac and Bow thought Dash was pregnant!

So, who is AJ seeing?

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Given how much I admire your work, I am really honored by your positive feedback to this story. In regards to whom Applejack is seeing, I plan to reveal it in a sequel. Once my military training is complete (hopefully by the end of the year), I plan on spending some serious time doing things I love - reading, writing and travelling. I'll be sure to let you know when I'm ready to post the sequel and other stories that I have in the works.

V/R,

Dreadnought

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