A Zipp in Time

It was an average day, Zipp was out practicing her parkour skills when she happened to come across a pretty cool-looking stone. That stone's previous owner was one very special pony... a pony who once was, but now is.

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Velvet-Fresh

Velvet-Fresh #1 · Jan 2nd, 2022 · 1 · ·

Oh, I'd thought this be after the movie. But hope she able to get back to meet Sunny and others.

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #2 · Jan 2nd, 2022 · 1 · ·

Finally, after a few minutes of careful digging, Zipp held a lightning bolt-shaped crystal in her hoof, her turquoise eyes scanning every inch of it. As she did this, her mind filled with more and more questions, primarily why is this here and how is it in such a flawless condition?

So it looks like the Elements of Harmony have scattered around Equestria it would be very interesting if the elements of harmonies if it's been found by the main five

Flamewarrior02

Flamewarrior02 #3 · Jan 2nd, 2022 · · ·

I like this concept and would like to see more of this.

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #4 · Jan 2nd, 2022 · 1 · ·

Okay this is pretty interesting so far so this is before My Little Pony new generation and before Sunny and Izzy came along but it looks like Zipp really wanted to know how to fly by using the mountains as air support but after a little crash landing she found a stone but not just any stone it was a shape of a lightning she brought it home of course her mother got worried where she was including pipp and she even notice the stone but it looks like it was activated when it hit the ground and Zipp was trying to find a way to stop it but it looks like the stone is calling out for her when she touched it it looks like she's going through time and I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time

Dyressi

Dyressi #5 · Jan 2nd, 2022 · 1 · ·

I'd love to see this continued. Don't see a lot of stories set before the movie.

RushingWind-01

RushingWind-01 #6 · Jan 2nd, 2022 · · ·

Can't wait to see what's next... Does Zipp go back in time and meet Rainbow Dash?

Jmunoz13

Jmunoz13 #7 · Jan 2nd, 2022 · · ·

I can’t wait to see what you got in store for this story.

Chynya

Chynya #8 · Jan 3rd, 2022 · · ·

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6 elements for 5 ponies

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #9 · Jan 3rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

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I mean I'm sure somebody will find it hopefully somebody trustworthy

Winstance

Winstance #10 · Jan 4th, 2022 · · ·

This is a really good start so far! Nice work!

arc5162

arc5162 #11 · Jan 20th, 2022 · · ·

Can you continue this story, i want to see what happens next.

TankFBI

TankFBI #12 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · ·

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I am, progress is just a bit slow since I don't really have much free time with school and all.

arc5162

arc5162 #13 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · ·

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It’s fine, just take your time.

Dudofall

Dudofall #14 · Mar 3rd, 2022 · · ·

Oh this has good bones and I would like to see more. One quick note, where you have

Why does it even matter? Even if a unicorn or an earth pony saw me I could take them! Zipp thought as she continued down that vast corridor of the Zephyr Heights castle.

Sometimes it helps distinguish thoughts if you italicize them. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Teraunce