Ever since Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash met, they always seem to have been the closest. But when they are called to the Canterlot Castle, they wonder what it could be for. As they come back to Ponyville, their friends and their selves decide to temporarily move in to the Canterlot Castle. Alas, before they can even leave, the pair are called back again.
The two are sent to the Crystal Empire, along with Princess Celestia and Luna, to defeat a certain crazed alicorn.
Starry Night.
Seems nice, huh? Guess what, it's not. Forget that old name, and grace her new one.
Starlight Flames, soon to be queen of Equestria. And her sisters and nieces? Ha! No chance.
After a crazy adventure they find themselves in, their lives will never be the same again.
This is my first fic!!!! So please like, comment, and follow!!!!
Congrats on publishing your first fic!
Dreadnought
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Thanks! I hope you like it!!!
-Pinkie
This story is really interesting, I'll follow it.
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Hope you like it too!!!
-Pinkie
An interesting liking start with Twilight and Rainbow being as sisters, you got my attention.
Also congrats on publishing your first story.
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Glad to hear that!!
-Pinkie
Aww I love this so far~
Can't wait for more chapters!
I was sad to here that Sisterly Bonds Run Deep was cancelled it was, well is a good story, but this story has piqued my interest and I'm looking forward o what happens next.
Interesting start, and I'm curious how this 'I have been on the moon for 1000 years but you two are my daughters' is possible.
Noticed two little mistakes, but english is not my first language so I'm not sure about the first one. So don't just assume I got it right, that goes for future comment from me as well
Shouldn't it me more like 'a pink colored aura' or 'a pink colored magic aura'? This way it sounds to me like the color itself is catching her.
Just a typo, should be write
Anyway, I will go on to the second chapter now, see you there
The foreshadowing is strong in this one...
Was a bit to fast in my opinion that they accepted that fact so quickly. Not even the sister part, they joked about it after all, but that Luna's their mother. Could have been explained a bit more before they ran out and maybe with denial. It is a world breaking news after all.
) I will keep track, and I'm still waiting for the explanation of how this is possible 
But still a nice idea for a fic, and even a first one. (Gratulation on publishing your first, btw
Needs a comma between the first two, and second should be 'our'.
Should be 'why'
Not a grammar mistake, but Twilight lived their as Celestia's student, so she should know the castle the best out of the Mane 6.
Doubled
Well, keep going with it, looking forward to more
Sorry bur isnt it the same fic.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/111833/sisterly-bonds-run-deep
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Well, I made this before I saw that one. It quite funny how it almost is. But, I will make it different. Trust me and my Pinkie Sense
-Pinkie
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Thank you I will the to fix it all once I do the edit.
-Pinkie
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I'm not very sure about the first one either. I will leave it for now and when I come around to the edit I will take a look at it. Thanks for reading though! Chapter Three will be out hopefully today.
-Pinkie
great story so far.
C'est tres interessant. You left out a word in the second scene first line. other than that it was pretty good. Next chapter.
Twillight wasn't the only one confused. you totally lost me here. I'll stay tuned to the next chapter but try and take things slow Twilight jumping the gun like that was just to jarring for me.
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Can you quote the sentence?
-Pinkie
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Explain where please? You kina lost me
-Pinkie
be careful, this fic is may be way to similar to night-mists fic, which can cause backlash making people think you stole this. I've been there, and learned not to do that.
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Thanks for the warning. Send me the link?
-Pinkie
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The scene after luna says she's their mom really that statement was it then Twilight goes and jumps the gun like that just left me going
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Okay I see it now thanks
-Pinkie
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Yeah... I didn't really know how to put it. When I do the edit I will fix it.
-Pinkie
Since you asked for them to be pointed out. I'm sure there are other comma errors but these are the ones that stood out the most to me.
No need for the comma between rare and fantastic.
Again, no commas here in either of the two sentences. The last line probably would be better phrased as: Right when she thought she was going to pull it off the cone stopped forming and sent her flinging down to the ground.
Due not do.
Uhm... what? Mere words could not what how she felt?
I think you mean secret.
The caboose is typically the last car on a train that is arranged as a place for the train crew to rest. A cabin is the little room like sections passengers ride in.
I just notice now in the cover art, Rainbow Dash has a horn on her head.
I thought that it was something else, but it looks like now she's an alicorn just like Twilight.
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Yeah I just did that. I'll be explained in the next chapter
-Pinkie
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Thanks for catching those. I will fix them in the edit
Hope you like it so far!
-Pinkie
Certainly better than my first publish. I'll read this a bit later.
this is a good story please continue it
Great chapter, it will be fun to see the reactions of pinkie, rarity, applejack and fluttershy xD
this is a great story. I enjoyed reading it. cant wait for more
It's a great story please continue!
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Will do my friends
-Pinkie
So that's how it's possible for them to be Luna's daughters. Sounds good to me, besides that if I'm not wrong they would still age and grow while in coma as far as I know. Maybe you could change it in something like that Celestia had to put them into a magical coma to safe their lifes that kept their bodies at the state they were in when it was casted.
But maybe I'm totally wrong in the first place
Now that this mystery is solved, let's go to the reactions of the public and of the rest of the Mane 6, and don't forget the incredible big 'You have been sisters all along and Alicorns on top for all this time and have been reunited with your real mother and aunt' party Pinkie will probably throw
Now some mistakes I noticed while reading.
First one 'have'
Second one I'm not sure, but I think 'I knew this would happen' is right
First 'your'
Second 'name'
First not sure, but I think 'I didn't realize that by using that spell, it removed...' is right
Second one is not necessary
Should be 'wake'
Should be 'have' if I'm not wrong.
First should be 'lit'
Second sounds strange, I would write 'Luna summoned a mirror with her magic for Rainbow to look at her reflection.' or something similar
Forgot the marks at the beginning (")
Well then, looking forward to the next chapter
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Thanks. I can't believe I missed those. I guess I need a proofreader
-Pinkie
I have edited this chapter for you guys! Make sure I haven't missed anything
-Pinkie
so far its good but im not really laughing lets hope the story keeps going tho
just the image of a pregnant luna craving cakes and tia despratly trying to keep her cakes safe is just funny to me
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-PINKIE PIE
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i read this chapter i said this is a good story and can ask you something when you get done with this story can you help me out on my please
ok the passing ist a bit of, and you need sereosly a proofreader. even for me there are to many grammar erors and eng. is my 3 language and i am not practice it very often.
but the concept is great
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I can help you out anytime! I'm not all that great, but yes I can help!
-PINKIE PIE
The politicians are going to complicate things and I do not really see twilight and rainbow leaving ponyville is their home after all.
great job on updating this. cant wait for more. keep up the great work
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You'll have to wait to see if they will or not
-PINKIE PIE