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Rarity and Twilight attempt to make their foals breakfast. It had seemed like a good idea at first...


This story has a reading here done by ajvasquezbrony28! An entry for the 4th RariTwi contest. The prompt was 'Interwoven Colours'. Proofread by NorrisThePony This has a review now, you can read it here! Contribute to the TVTropes page!

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Comments ( 17 )

Hahahahahhaahhaa, nice story.
That ending was glorious.

Aren't kids grand?

8189639 They most certainly are not!:twilightblush:

"Rarity please! It's almost seven thirty! I have no idea how to make pancakes!

What ?
What about Season 5 Episode 3 Castle Sweet Castle

8192940 I'm pretty sure it was Spike who made the pancakes. They never said, I do not think. It's been a while since I saw that episode.

8192955 http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Castle_Sweet_Castle



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Pinkie Pie: [slurps, gulps] Thanks! Twilight spent all night helping me pick the flavor! I kept thinking we'd found the right one, but she insisted I make even more to try. And more. And more and more and more and more! It was like she never wanted to—

Pinkie Pie: Exactly! [chomp] Eventually we ran out of time so we just went with every-berry-any-chip-surprise! [to Rarity, hushed] The surprise is I lost a measuring spoon in the batter. Somepony's gonna get a very special pancake!

8192961 Thank you!

And it seems Pinkie made them.

8192972 With T.S. !

Pinkie Pie: [slurps, gulps] Thanks! Twilight spent all night helping me pick the flavor! I kept thinking we'd found the right one, but she insisted I make even more to try. And more. And more and more and more and more! It was like she never wanted to—

Pinkie Pie: Exactly! [chomp] Eventually we ran out of time so we just went with every-berry-any-chip-surprise! [to Rarity, hushed] The surprise is I lost a measuring spoon in the batter. Somepony's gonna get a very special pancake!

8192978 It says she picked the flavor and describes them being together. The interpretation can go either way.

This was cute! It's always nice to see a married Twilight and Rarity with foals story. I like that they adopted too, it seems like that's something that is rarely done with this pairing. The kids are cute too, I like the idea of a serious foal and a kinda klutzy artistic foal. Nice work!

8259669
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed these little guys - they'll probably be making cameos in future stories. It always struck me as strange how 'magic lesbian spawn' was always the go to for offspring most of the time, especially when there's so much fun to write about ponies adopting... it seems like something that would thrive in Equestria, and Rarity's element makes it seem all too likely that she'd adopt if she wasn't able to have her own foal (i.e. if her partner was infertile or a mare).

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Oh god XD

8675993
I told you once to keep falling into the abyss of my stories. I am pleased by this development. Glad ya liked the piece!

Read, as promised, and entirely approved of. This is an excellent wee piece. :raritystarry:

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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

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