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Ice Star


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The first worst part of loving somepony is that you eventually have to tell them, that nopony disputed. The second worst thing is that they will leave you, or so a certain mare thinks. Princess Celestia struggles to cope with both of these thoughts when she sends Twilight Sparkle to Ponyville.


An expanded version of my first submission to the Twilestia collab. My prompt was 'Chariot'. Preread by Cynewulf. Cover art is by Plainoasis. Contribute to the TVTropes page!

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Comments ( 17 )

Each word is for one of my sins. Enjoy, or something.

10259767
Crackle pop!

... Meh. It is good. But I don't feel much after reading this. And yes I do have a pulse. Maybe because I hate this ship with a pashion, I don't know.

10259839
This story is presenting a platonic version of the two. Not all the stories in the collaboration are romantic, just most of them.

10259848
That helps then.

I know some people ship celestia and twilight, and thats ok. I personally don't. I like them as mother and daughter.

Aww, it’s short and sweet, it reminds me of the part in ‘Celestial Advice’ where Celestia briefly tells the story from her point of view hinting at more intense emotions like these.

10259922
This story has them portrayed platonically.

10260633
Yeah I know. Thats why I said some. Good stuff tho m8.

10260834
Thank you for reading!

This was honestly very haunting. Excellent work!!

10261304
Thank you so much for reading! It wouldn't be an Ice Star story without some touch of angst. Or, uh. most Ice Star stories. I've probably written one without angst and melancholy vibes.

It's a good story, but it doesn't have that good melancholy feeling.

10261356
Well, I do have a lot of others that should give the feeling. Like, a lot!

This story is presenting a platonic version of the two.

Important distinction, and one I wouldn't have otherwise picked up on going off the description alone. I think it's refreshing.

(Also, that's a lot of Spark.)

10279054

(Also, that's a lot of Spark.)

I have to represent minorities like gamers somehow.

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