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Oh Twilight, you are Best Pony.
846174 Indeed.
Kl story bro, cool story
Oh, Twilight
846294 Get off my story, you HERETIC!!!
846294 motherbucker.
This was good!
846311 Elitist scum perish in the fires of TwiDash!
846361 You will burn in righteous fire! Infidel, you are finished! Fall before the fury of HumanmalexDash!
846370 You must, or we will all perish!
846361 yes!
846370 TwiDash is best ship. Thou shalt burn in the pony underworld.
Only Twilight would turn sex into a completely scientifically documented endeavor.
846383 Alright i'll read it, but I won't like it, sahz.
846387 You shall burn in a fiery beam of imulsion powered laser!
846394 You don't have to read it. Not everybody's gonna love everything, and I don't expect you to read something you hate.
But if you still want to give it a go, that'll be pretty nifty.
But you don't have to.
But you can if you want to.
But I don't want to force anything on you.
846400 the power of twidash shipping shall protect me!
846403 AHHHH, THAT WAS FUCKIN' FUNNY! I'm just not into lesbians..... at all, but I always laugh at clop that i'm not attracted to....
I approve of this story with a bueno.
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Hold your humans...glorious line
846531 Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Very nice. I hope to see a sequal, this could really be a good little story if you want it to be.
846783 It's not a good story now?
846787
No, It's terrible and you should be ashamed!
No but seriously, of course it's good, better and more unique that alot of 'one-shots', however like I said, further additions can only compliment it.
846809 If I may be so bold, what might you want to see as far as continuations go?
846852 Clop?
846825
Of course you may
. The ones that immedietly spring to mind are the fairly obvious 'how it all started' and 'what happens next'. I think that the former could delve more into the intrecisies (on phone sorry for poor spelling
) of their relationship and their romantic life. This would add a depth to their relationship which would complement further scenes.
The latter of course is where they finally do 'get round to it', and with the addition of said ' relationship foundations' it could be a very romantic exchange.
It is however, all up to you. I can see already this is going to become popular soon, perhaps even get featured. So having possible sequals might be a worth while thought.
846882 I sure hope it gets featured. That would be pretty swell!
846888 It definitely could, and definitely should.
That was... good doesn't do it justice.
You, once again, have touched (metaphorically) many different emotions and values that many people vary to keep the same all while including them all. Hopefully my English didn't rape your mind like it did mine there.
I envy you sir.
~~Dezi94
This was a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing this with everypony ^^
847484 You are very welcome!
I'll admit I had reservations, but that was actually pretty good!
Oh not-particularly-sexual sexual comedy. You warm my heart so.
Even though this violates my headcanon.
lol I can totally imagine this "Twilight..your humping my leg." in the most MONOTONE voice.
847803 That's not the only thing it violates, if you catch my drift.
That was really creepy. Why would I say something like that?
That was cute
I'm not sure if it's scary or amazing that they seem completely in character.
Good story, though, whatever the answer to my mindless babbling is...
848262 Both. And they are so incredibly in character!
So, TBB, I saw this story on the feed searching for short, complete Twilight fics. Had I been reading the tags closely, I wouldn't have read this one. But I guess I have to say that I'm glad I wasn't paying much attention, because I would have missed out on a great story! There are some fantastic set ups and great one liners in here. Twilight Sparkle reading her notes over Rainbow Dash's shoulder. Dash liking sex, but needing Twilight. And my very favorite, Dash's wish for all of their dates to be so crazy! There were a dozen other points I loved as well, but for me, those were the highlights.
Just goes to show you shouldn't judge a book by its cover! Thanks for putting this out there for everypony to enjoy!
"Hold your humans"
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Some of Dash's talking sounded a little OOC (slightly bigger words than we're used to, I mean, not content), but actually made sense if she'd been hanging out with Twilight that long. Things tend to rub off, so I'll consider it intentional. All in all, I think it's a wonderful story. It captures the adorkableness of Twilight perfectly, and Dash loving her because of it only makes it sweeter. Aside from that, it's steamy enough to be considered a clopfic yet funny enough to be considered comedy and...it actually has character growth and a plot. Apparently a sensitive, erogenous zone of a plot, but a plot nonetheless.
Kudos to you.
848319 You are most welcome!
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As saucy as it is, this was very cute. Everything to like about awkward Twilight shenanigans too. Loved the part with the leg humping. In fact, I think you should write a story just about Twilight humping Dash's leg.
People would read that, right?
850944 Sadly, they probably would.
Rainbow spoke up. “Twilight?”
“Yeah?”
“You’re humping my leg.”
I FUCKING FELL OUT OF MY CHAIR DUDE!
THAT WAS AN AWESOME LINE
I would salute you if I had Rainbow's saluting image...and If i knew how to put them on fimfiction text box...but have a hoof.
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twilight, twilight, twilight
AH MEH GURD ITSH SHOOO FOOOONNYYY!!!!!
Seriously. Best TwiDash fic. Ever.
Or until there's a better one.
Or I forget.
....
Twilight is best pony.
God, only twilight can make sex turn into a science experiment
I actually found this to be quite enjoyable. Well done sir.
D'awww, I found this adorable more than anything
Oh, Twilight. Never change.
This fic was awesome. This is exactly how Twilight and Rainbow would probably be like as a couple.