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Holla Jolla


I'm that one black guy. "Easy reading is damn hard writing." Nathaniel Hawthorne

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Best... cover art... ever.

So sweet. Will there be any more of it?

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ME GUSTA. Both adorable and super hot. Tribadism is crazy.

All you need is love...

That was Hawt!

Awwwwww

:twilightblush:+:rainbowkiss:=:yay:

257075 MY GOD!!!! FLUTTERSHY IS THEIR DAUGHTER!?!?!?!?!?!? :pinkiegasp:

dramatic plot twist right there

zeh devilblade demands a sequel to such a vonderful story

Wow.... :rainbowderp:
This was beauty,sexiness,and D'awwwwness rolled into one amazing experience :rainbowkiss:
And I have to agree that you pulled off a perfect showing of this pair together :twilightsheepish:
Great job, Ill really have to look at your other stuff :pinkiehappy:
All My Fav and stars

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Ha! Actually, when I make a story, I usually draw inspiration from a song; Music is like a passion of mine. I didn't draw from that song, though. I actually kinda used Secrets by OneRepublic as the base of this fic. I'll probably include those in the description from now on!

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Have I ever mentioned I love every comment you make? 'Cause I love every comment you make. All my brotherly, totally-straight-and-non-homosexual love goes out to you.

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My God. So the Da Vinci Code really is true.

Another great read from you.

Chapter one... The end. I think it's funny when people put that "chapter" label on a one-shot story. No offense meant by that comment.

I probably shouldn't be in school while I read this huh...oh well, This is the perfect clopfic here...it has a sort of storyline, not focused completely on the sex and has fluff in it

I... I think I'm in love with Rainbow Dash now.:twilightoops:Oh my god, that was so hot. RD was just so... oh gosh, I don't even know, but she kept making me blush whenever she smiled, let alone when she said she didn't care about the book because Twilight was crying.:heart:

Jesus. Rainbow Dash, I freakin' love you.

I loved how you added emotion, romance, and fluff within clop :twilightsmile: I realize it isn't clop I don't like, it's clop with pointless sex I don't like! And this wasn't one of them. There were even cute moments that manage to make me d'aww, so bravo :yay:

This was nicer than I thought it would be, good feels and nice clop all around.

2 words to describe this: EPIC & AWESOME!!!:twilightsmile::flutterrage:
i loved the way you intertwined romance, heated moments and clop. :pinkiehappy:
and i like your sweet & beautiful ending.:pinkiesmile:

What she needed was love. There had never been any kind of rugged yet misunderstood stallion for her. No beautiful but troubled mare. There had never been any ‘Knight in Shining Armor’ or ‘Cinderella’. They all just left her to be stuck in her tower of loneliness. She wished that for once, just once, somepony would love her like she wanted...

:rainbowderp::rainbowhuh::rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh::pinkiegasp::twilightsheepish::twilightblush::trollestia::moustache:

For a moment, I thought you were actually going to make a story where the "shooting star" actually had magical properties and influenced Dash's mind so that she "loved" Twilight. Would've made a good story too.

My word for this story? "Sweaty", Cus i got sweaty thinkin about them getting sweaty :rainbowkiss::twilightsheepish:

Littlepip was defiantly not reading this :twilightoops: Maybe... Don't say anything!!! :twilightblush:

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