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Oh god, here we go again.
7680158 You know it!
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Down voted. Anything related to that disgrace is automatically bad, especially that worst episode.
Ah, do I love the smell of Sparkle family incest in the morning.
Just here to read the comments.
7680194
>Sonic fan pretends to have a sense of taste.
Shining is adopted?
I see, so it's not incest, it's "incest".
7680202 Oh look a piece of shit fan that's trying to act tough. Sonic rocks and this Youtube Poop series is shit.
7680194
Well I appreciate you taking the time out of your day, and expending the effort to come by just to do that. It clearly indicates the quality of your character to not only do that on a baseless prejudice, but to then gloat about it. But hey, at least you are using your hatred to add to the view-count and the comment-traffic of the story you seek to lambaste, thereby actually increasing it's exposure.
So, you know... good job with that.
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7680209 And straight to name-calling.
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Please, do go on. We are clearly out-classed here.
7680223 Hey look closer, he started it. So why don't you address the guy that insulted me first? Then you can lecture me okay? Okay.
7680209 Hint. A little bit of respect in giving your opinion goes a long way. In life, and the internet.
7680214 Should've found a sonic upvote gif, just for added irony, if you ask me. More Twi/Shining incest, I'll have to give it a look over sometime.
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7680194
Oh no. He's retarded...
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7680244 See bby, that's the magical thing about the internet.
No one asked for my opinion, but I gave it.
Now stop being edgy and apologize before I get snarky.
A good story, Master Shakes. Fucked up, but extremely entertaining.
top tier banter
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I'm going to step in and nip this in the bud, as everyone can clearly see where it is going. Don't discuss your opinions on others in the comments, keep your comments relevant to the story, or kindly leave folks. Don't want things to devolve first, so please keep it civil.
7680227
...Quite. You did absolutely nothing wrong at all and didn't deserve to be mocked for it at all.
Autism is a hell of a drug.
7680214
Not gonna stir up too much drama, just doing what must be done.
7680258 kek
7680257 ok bby
luv u~
7680247 ok
much story
very good
wow
incest yes
7680258 The comment 7680257 goes for all, please.
Anyone who wants to 'get in the last word' will have some fun times provided courtesy of Meeester or Wanderer D. Cheers all!
7680268
The comment wasn't visible at the time.
30 second difference in posting time, so...
>Downvoted for not updating the comments section every 30 seconds.
Such a cruel fate ;-;
7680202
People could say that you antagonized him/as he put him "started it" by insulting him and every single sonic fan in existence, but his response to what you said is completely out of line, and what he said before that has literally no substantive reason to his choice to downvote. Neither of you had anything good or of substance to say, and neither do I really, but I'm not trying to be disrespectful.
*edit: I really need to reload comments right before commenting on something, don't I.
7680268 I need to ask. Did the author of this story asked you to moderate this thread? Or do you come randomly to different stories checking to see if the commentary is "civilized"?
7680194 Take my advice.
When you see something you don't like, just ignore it and keep you're mouth shut. Me I absolutely hate incest, but I've learnt to keep my mouth shut about it.
So basically. Shut the fuck up.
Shakespearicles I like you but I can't stand incest so I'm going to skip, till next time.
I'm so glad I came back to read comments. 26.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lunhvcpbJV1qgex26o1_500.png
Okay, just finished this chapter. All in all, it was pretty hot. However, the progression between sentences and paragraphs are quite jumbled, making this seem rushed. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it and am going to read the rest, but, as it stands, many of the sentences read like self-contained descriptions and actions. In short, it doesn't flow very well.
While this was obviously written to be a silly raunchy fic based on Friendship is Witchcraft's Twilight, a bit more effort could have been put into it. I know you can do better.
well... dont want to fight with haters... feeding trolls is bad (just watch south park)
IMHO its a good twiXshining fic with a nice idea of her being the older sibling and using forbidden knowledge she read in a book because most can imagine twi do that
I always love big sisters teaching litt' brother how to play with her.
That was quite good! I only noticed a few pacing and grammatical issues in this chapter, but it wasn't enough to detract from the experience.
Nice ending. I hope they get to share many, many mare and stallion kisses in the years to cum.
7680327 Thank you. I always appreciate your constructive criticism. I'll go back and give it a bit of polish when I get some more time. It was just an idea I had bouncing around for some time, and I wanted to get it out. A lot of it was written in a mad rush of creative outpouring. I guess in places it reads that way too.
7680298 Don't worry. I'll have more Stormageddon some time between now and soon.
[EDIT]
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Corruption - Check
Hornjob - Check
Vagainal to horn? That is so niche it's not even funny, but - Check
Blowjob - Check
Cunnilingus - Check
Underage sex - Check
Doesn't cover every fetish, but it's got plenty and this is just the second chapter!
Oh and pseudo-incest - Check
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And then Twilight discovers that Shining and her made a baby together. And then we'll segue into the next story Diaries of a Teenage Mom.
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7680362 I completely understand. The same need to write down an idea happens to me, but I tend to burn myself out pretty quickly if I don't finish it quick. As a consequence, I have around thirty to forty fics I either need to finish or rewrite. Too many ideas, not enough drive or time to go around.
Haven't had a chance to read it yet, but have a like and a fave anyway. Just because.
7680451 Might I suggest Redbull?
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Did a white pony fall face first in poop?
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7680592
George of the Jungle.
A white guy fell down in poop and they all laughed.
7680598 Ah.
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This isn't a precursor to Velvet being co-opted into some wild game of hide and seek with a missing submarine is it?
Also; Twilight is weird. And it is most amusing.
7680629 Oh, you.
Since we're not related it'll be ok,
So different now from what it seems, now life has killed the dream i dreamed
7680214 whats going on in the backround of that pic there?