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I'm not normally a fan of watersports, but you get a thumb for best "accidental" sex ever. :rainbowlaugh: It was convolutedly hilarious.

Um... Uh... Good show?

4367488 Don't think about this one too much. I certainly didn't.

Didn't see that 'cumin.'

This.... this is my OtP. Thank you Shakey-sama. A glorious wordsmith as usual.

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Yea, I made that mistake. Don't think I'll be reading clop for awhile.:pinkiesick:

The both looked over at her, as she looked back at them

I bet they never thought about the sink :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Thank you for this..

Bravo! :pinkiesmile:

You have created the ultimate porn! :twilightblush:

4367318 'accidental sex' for the win!!!!! :derpytongue2::rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh::heart:

4370576 It was an honor and a privilege to be crowned the king of smut.

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The crown is a ring of rolled up pony girlie mags, with a single large, floppy dragon dildo on the forehead. :trollestia:

I need to fav this more than once!

Found some things you may want to edit.

"Maybe they mistook you pretty pony flank for a mare's." Caramel joked as he set the barrel down. The other's in the circle snickered.

I think that should be you and others.

But it took every ounce of will she had just to keep from pissing all over floor herself.

"the" should be between those.

Each time her tried to jerk away, he got a little further.

And I think that should be "he".

4385615 Thanks for the help. This one never got to my editor. (She was busy last weekend.)

This story is a gem. It was full to the brim with sexy shenanigans, and poor decisions :rainbowlaugh:

Very well done! :twilightsmile:

Ha! I bet they feel stupid for having little apple bloom outsmart them. :heart::applecry:

4396034 Oh I'm sure they felt something alright.

:rainbowlaugh: This is both hilarious and hot. Practically every little thing was specific to my fetish :twilightblush:

One typo, though:

squatting in the bathroom sink as she began it pee

4465681 Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

I've never heard anyone else say "breaking the seal". Yay I'm not the only one!

Right near the end:

:eeyup: : Could this GET any more AWKWAR- (Apple Bloom Bursts in).... Eeyyyup... that done did it...

:ajbemused: An' wha did'n Neither of US think'o that?

LOLZ!!! all in all, loved it! Would I be asking too much for a sequel? maybe at a different event? they run into the same situation, only, the ciders been spiked a bit sooooo nothing seems TOO out of possibility...

4743828 I have a fic idea some weeks down the line that may have some applecest.

I've never been a fan of watersports. However, you've not only made this a lot more arousing than it should but it's also quite funny. Good job. :twilightsmile:

I'll be honest, I've never been into watersports, always found it gross. But this was still pretty arousing, somehow.

Hmm. That was interesting. Never read anything quite like that before. Quite absurd and rather funny. Nice.

About the only thing that could've made this better would be more build-up (ha-ha) for Applejack's orgasm, it seemed a little out of nowhere. Otherwise this is great.

I'm sorry but you did something bad. Real bad. I can't save you from what's about to come as a result of writing this story.


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When we had that kind of trouble the guy just done it in the bathtub and rinced it. And also this would be a shortcoming on Applejack part to not have prepared proper temporary toilets (four walls a row of buckets under toilet seats fixed to wood beams a slanted roof with a gap under to let the odor out). Of course there is also the fact they could you know... do it in the nature like everyone can do on a farm. Otherwise great story!

BRB gotta go take care of business.

And pee.

This is a new low for me. Bet they do stuff like this all the time in AAAAAAAAAPPALOOSAAAA

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That chapter title doh

This is one of my favorites from you, it's just too hilarious! :rainbowlaugh: Hopefully they can still look at each other into the eye after that ordeal.

But I'm honestly surprised nobody has EVER used that same idea anymore. Come on guys, think of the possibilities: Twilight and Shining, Fluttershy and Zephyr, Derpy and Time Turner, aged-up Apogee and Jet etc! Would bring some variety to common tropes of WS fics. :rainbowhuh:

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Fluttershy and Zephyr

Consider it considered.

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I was thinking that exact pic you mentioned, I guess it’s close enough. :rainbowlaugh:

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