• Published 29th Oct 2016
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Bigger, Not Older. - Shakespearicles



What if Twilight Sparkle was actually the older sibling all this time. Shining might be her 'big' brother now. But what about when he was still her little brother?

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Comments ( 107 )

Down voted. Anything related to that disgrace is automatically bad, especially that worst episode.

Ah, do I love the smell of Sparkle family incest in the morning.

Just here to read the comments.

7680194
>Sonic fan pretends to have a sense of taste.

Farnham #4 · Oct 29th, 2016 · · 1 ·

Shining is adopted?
I see, so it's not incest, it's "incest".:unsuresweetie:

7680202 Oh look a piece of shit fan that's trying to act tough. Sonic rocks and this Youtube Poop series is shit.

7680194

Down voted. Anything related to that disgrace is automatically bad, especially that worst episode.

Well I appreciate you taking the time out of your day, and expending the effort to come by just to do that. It clearly indicates the quality of your character to not only do that on a baseless prejudice, but to then gloat about it. But hey, at least you are using your hatred to add to the view-count and the comment-traffic of the story you seek to lambaste, thereby actually increasing it's exposure.

So, you know... good job with that.
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7680209 And straight to name-calling.

Oh look a piece of shit fan that's trying to act tough. Sonic rocks and this Youtube Poop series is shit.

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Please, do go on. We are clearly out-classed here.

7680223 Hey look closer, he started it. So why don't you address the guy that insulted me first? Then you can lecture me okay? Okay.

Spacecowboy
Moderator

7680209 Hint. A little bit of respect in giving your opinion goes a long way. In life, and the internet.

7680214 Should've found a sonic upvote gif, just for added irony, if you ask me. More Twi/Shining incest, I'll have to give it a look over sometime.

Shocks #14 · Oct 29th, 2016 · · 1 ·

7680244 See bby, that's the magical thing about the internet.

No one asked for my opinion, but I gave it.

Now stop being edgy and apologize before I get snarky.

A good story, Master Shakes. Fucked up, but extremely entertaining.

Spacecowboy
Moderator

7680248 7680246 7680244

I'm going to step in and nip this in the bud, as everyone can clearly see where it is going. Don't discuss your opinions on others in the comments, keep your comments relevant to the story, or kindly leave folks. Don't want things to devolve first, so please keep it civil.

7680227

he started it.

...Quite. You did absolutely nothing wrong at all and didn't deserve to be mocked for it at all.

Autism is a hell of a drug.

7680214
Not gonna stir up too much drama, just doing what must be done.

7680258 kek

7680257 ok bby

luv u~

7680247 ok

much story

very good

wow

incest yes

Spacecowboy
Moderator

7680258 The comment 7680257 goes for all, please.

Anyone who wants to 'get in the last word' will have some fun times provided courtesy of Meeester or Wanderer D. Cheers all!

7680268
The comment wasn't visible at the time.

30 second difference in posting time, so...

>Downvoted for not updating the comments section every 30 seconds.
Such a cruel fate ;-;

7680202
People could say that you antagonized him/as he put him "started it" by insulting him and every single sonic fan in existence, but his response to what you said is completely out of line, and what he said before that has literally no substantive reason to his choice to downvote. Neither of you had anything good or of substance to say, and neither do I really, but I'm not trying to be disrespectful.

*edit: I really need to reload comments right before commenting on something, don't I.

7680268 I need to ask. Did the author of this story asked you to moderate this thread? Or do you come randomly to different stories checking to see if the commentary is "civilized"?

7680194 Take my advice.

When you see something you don't like, just ignore it and keep you're mouth shut. Me I absolutely hate incest, but I've learnt to keep my mouth shut about it.

So basically. Shut the fuck up.

Shakespearicles I like you but I can't stand incest so I'm going to skip, till next time.

well... dont want to fight with haters... feeding trolls is bad (just watch south park)

IMHO its a good twiXshining fic with a nice idea of her being the older sibling and using forbidden knowledge she read in a book because most can imagine twi do that

I always love big sisters teaching litt' brother how to play with her.

Nice ending. I hope they get to share many, many mare and stallion kisses in the years to cum.

7680327 Thank you. I always appreciate your constructive criticism. I'll go back and give it a bit of polish when I get some more time. It was just an idea I had bouncing around for some time, and I wanted to get it out. A lot of it was written in a mad rush of creative outpouring. I guess in places it reads that way too.

7680298 Don't worry. I'll have more Stormageddon some time between now and soon.

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7680362 I completely understand. The same need to write down an idea happens to me, but I tend to burn myself out pretty quickly if I don't finish it quick. As a consequence, I have around thirty to forty fics I either need to finish or rewrite. Too many ideas, not enough drive or time to go around.

Haven't had a chance to read it yet, but have a like and a fave anyway. Just because.

7680451 Might I suggest Redbull?

7680500

Did a white pony fall face first in poop?

7680592

George of the Jungle.

A white guy fell down in poop and they all laughed.

Since we're not related it'll be ok,
So different now from what it seems, now life has killed the dream i dreamed

7680214 whats going on in the backround of that pic there?

7680715 links don't work like that when on phone....

One question:
Why on Celestia's green earth would you go on holiday just a couple days before you're expecting a new foal?

Other than that, pretty good!

Fuck's sake Shakes, when it comes to kinks you go straight for the neck. Take my upvote you miscreant.

7680707 ah ok I saw a pony rump movin about was curious

I'm questioning whether I should look at this travesty. If it's worse than Straight to Belle (as that is the only porn I have read on this site, David Silver's work not withstanding) then I'm not entirely sure I want to know. On the other hand my interest has been piqued by the photo bombs and feature box and I'm scared to admit I wish to delve into this madness any further.

7681448 Does that mean you are in it for the plot? :trollestia:

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
3:27_10/30/2016

7680214 I love you for this comment.

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