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I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)
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Aww. That ending was actually kinda tragic and sobering...
... Still clopped to it, though. Hot stuff!
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*morally conflicted clopping noises*
^.^ I seem to be growing fond of such things ... stories that make you think 'I really shouldn't be clopping to this ... but I'm totally not going to stop'.
Kinda wished there was a fight scene between Luna and Celestia and Luna hating her sister for awhile until Celestia realizes her mistakes.
Wait......
*gets on knees and begs* PLEASE MAKE THAT A SEQUEL!!!!!
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More sequels?
I’m never going to be done writing this, am I?
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Seriously?! I was figuring you'd do Cadence next then Twilight.
But please do a sequel. Please (use my idea)
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But the point is is little Alicorns. Twilight and Cadndce were never little and alicorns at the same time
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But didn't Cadence become a alicorn as a filly? That could be put into play
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Well, the point is years of sexual corruption in the body of an innocent young filly... That’s what Cadance and Twilight can never have.
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So this was all started by curiosity and then her denied love for Clover. Because of her never being able to play it out completely through so she doesn't understand her feelings... Well dang I like it
it make sense... Very nice Sir! Another master piece 
so if she was would she not have been the same?
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Yes, if this had gone differently, she probably wouldn’t have developed the same taste for young colts.
We’re all shaped by our experiences.
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Hmmmmm makes you think about what could have been...
this made you think one of my favorites of your work.
About 30 minutes ago, I clopped to this fic so hard that I can't feel my left leg.
They killed That Colt didn't they :-(
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No! They just didn’t let them meet up again.
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Take it easy, there, buddy! I don’t want any of my readers injuring themselves!
does this have a bad ending?
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Sort of, yes.
But that’s what makes it interesting.
How else is Luna going to learn about sex if you don't teach her about 'the birds and the bees'? Honestly - and she's reached adolescence too, so it's not like you can 'wait until she's older'; she's no longer a filly.
Royal caretakers are idiots.
Oh, and seriously - why didn't they copy Celestia's SexEd classes for her younger sister? Instead of flat-out restricting access to colts? Again, idiotic.
Yeah, I have to say the first Luna fanfic is better than this one.
This was strangely sweet. It had that complete honesty and acceptance that what she did was wrong, regret for her actions, while also showing the entirely understandable origin of her perversion. Luna's entirely sympathetic (even though she's technically 24, it's pretty clear that alicorn brains do mature more slowly than normal ponies... if not to the same degree their bodies do), and their interactions with each other shows a sweet innocence of intent, unlike the more predatory appearance from the previous story.
I just hope Clover Breeze was sent home in one piece. But I fear that he might have been sent back minus one of his heads
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Dang man I came to get my filly fix not to get some feels. I'm glad I got both though, I always like when along with the sex there is some story weaved in along with it. I actually feel bad that she didn't even get to reconcile with him. Course with how she put it in the ending I'm glad she did what she did for old Pepper Zest. He was apparently a favorite so imagine how he woulda turned out if she hadn't hooked him up. I can imagine a great deal of these colts having wildly high standards. I mean, after you bang a Princess, do you really wanna go "low"?
All onboard the dirty train! Because we are about to read some "bad" goodiness.
Me thinks the ending heavily implies another part.
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I am assured. ^.^
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Hm, I guess that is a bit of a plot hole.
But it could easily be explained by an overprotective older sister, yes?
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Oh, no. I’m sure he’ll be fine.
Except for the inexplicable moon fetish he’ll carry for the rest of his life. ^.^
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Yep... Over time, her actions become less and less excusable ... but she does begin to put more and more effort into avoiding the possible negative consequences of her actions.
Yay, moral ambiguity!
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This is going on my quote wall!
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Noooo!
You realize that Precious Little Cewestia was supposed to be a stand-alone one-shot, right?
But then my supporters made me do a Luna version.
And then someone commissioned another chapter of the Luna version.
And then a different person commissioned this prequel to the Luna version.
And if I remember right, one of the people on my commission waiting list wants yet another chapter of the Luna version.
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Well... it's kind of your own fault for implying an expanded universe.
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I can’t help it!
I think I have a problem!
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Yas!
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And I have no sympathy.
Toodles.
Oh my...
You know it is good when you feel bad afterwards but it was worth it! Best Princess is most perverted Princess!
I could write a lengthy explanation about how I believe that societal norms regarding sex are messed up, but I'd rather just say this instead:
👍
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Either one is acceptable. ^.^
Wow.. sexy Foal-clop, with a rather touching, and a bit sad and tragic story. Yeah it's easy to see how that could mess up Luna, doubly so with just how LONG that period of her life lasted. Living like that, it really is kind of hard, and Tia really has no room to bitch given what she does...
Still this was a great little insight into Luna, at least this version, and it, it really does make you feel for her. She knows it's wrong, controls herself, but can't deny that desire is there either, and it does likely stem from dealing with things so poorly.
Still, would love a fic of this Luna claiming one of her yearly virgins, bet it would be SOOOO adorable as she seduced him. Yet again another amazing, sexy, but character driven bit of clop.
ok this was cool lmao good story 👌👌👌
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Um... Have you not read Precious Little Woona?
Because that’s pretty much exactly what that is.
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Thanks! ^.^
What’s your favorite part?
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Them getting caught
8353173 Well yes, but as an adult, and with the full awe of being a Princess and Luna rather then Woona to add to things.
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Ah, I see.
Well, it’s not technically part of this series ... but it would put an interesting spin on the story if you imagine that it is: A Dreamy Encounter
Time to get back to writing ALL the stories!
8353791 Ohhhh.. that... that does work so so well.
Wow. Erotic, adorable, and amazingly bittersweet. Yeah, I could see how complete avoidance of the issue might hinder someone's ability to deal with it.
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Now that’s what I was going for!
I'm probably gonna sound like a sick bastard for saying this but ...now I wanna see Nightmare Moon bang a colt.
If Celly and the nanny didn't want this to happen, they failed spectacularly. Sex Ed exists for a reason, and simply saying "You'll understand when you're older" is just avoiding the problem and inviting disaster, especially when you say it to a young alicorn.
This makes me wanna find out what happened to Clover.
Also it's totally all your fault you're getting so many asks for continuation when you make these stories so deeply thought out, intriguing, and hot.
That was very sexycute, but also hit pretty close to home, interpersonally. Thanks for making this!
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Oh, that is so going on my ideas list to be voted on.
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I may have been slipping in some subtle socio/political commentary with that.
Even as a humble provider of pony smut, I can help cement the idea that ‘abstinence only’ or over-sheltering sex-ed schemes generally lead to bad outcomes.
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He lived the rest of his life with an unfortunately impossible to satisfy alicorn fetish.
His various mare-friends (none of whom stuck around for very long) were quite annoyed when he would insist on them wearing fake horns and/or wings during sex.
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Thanks! ^.^ I try.
I think this is one of your best stories. It has a very believable ending and a wise one. The first encounter of sex being porn isn't a good thing. Also Celestia was right to panic like she did but wrong in thinking she could ever eliminate it from her sister's mind. She should have just rolled with it and explained very well just what sex was. It's clear she didn't do that.
One thing I am curious about though: What sort of punishment did Luna receive? I would think she would be punished quite harshly.
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Nah, ‘she didn’t know what she was doing’ and ‘she needs protection’.
Sure, a lot of bad things happened, but all in the name of ‘protecting’ her, not punishing her.
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They would still punish her. They would do both.
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‘They’? This is her overprotective sister you’re talking about. ^.^
I look forward to whatever you come up with next.
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A sequel to Show Stopper is next. ^.^