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Damn yo...

This was great; excellent job of describing Redheart's body!

Nice start! I can't wait until the next chapter!

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Thanks! The new chapter is due either tomorrow or the day after that.

7535533 I concur. This author has a great way of writing down descriptions!

Going just by the title, I thought this was a story about a mare going into labor.:twilightblush:

one of the reasons I like nurse redheart

Great start so far, as a few pointed out, the way you describe everything is pretty good, and I love the interactions between those two.
Can't wait for more :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, everyone. The new chapter is coming out very soon.

Read first chapter. Go to work. Come home. New chapter.
Excellent... ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°)

Question: Why does Fleur remove her bikini top twice? Am I just that blind, and missed her putting it back on before the end of his climax? You have her take it off when she goes to suck him off, then again at the tail end. I've scanned it like 3 times and found no mentioning of her putting it back on only to take it back off at the end lol.

7539072 Ah, you've noticed that too.
Unless she's wearing a very elaborate two-top-piece, then idk.

Featherweight is living the dream.

I also love the way you've written Fleur.

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I fucked up. I shall fix it so that instead she removes her bottom.

It is at thes moments where a single thought goes through my mind.... WHY MUST I WAIT FOR MORE???!!!.... absolutely wonderful job with this my friend, I can't ait to see what you have in store for us next

7539384 Okay! I just wasn't sure if I was seeing this wrong or not. It was like, 3 in the morning when I read this, sleep kind of drops my comprehension a bit. Still, good work so far, keep it coming.

So...while looking through the internetz i found this

Thought you might be interested.

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Oh I got a PM from the creator when he made it, but thanks for posting it. :yay:

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Your wish has been granted.

Okay, when I saw this, I was a little worried because I had a similar idea but with different characters. Might have to check this out, at least to give me some ideas on how to transition to the clop.

The worst part about this story is that it's over.

This definitely needs a sequel.

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Go ahead and read. Don't feel afraid to write your own story; how many 'Rarity falls for older Spike' fics are there out there, for example.

I concur with Rubakor! :raritywink:

Where's Milly? She was talked about and was said to arrive,but I don't see Milly. I swear to god if she's somewhere in there hiding like waldo I will flip my table.

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Read the very end. :trollestia:

“H-how did you know we…?” Your chest tightens.

It's kinda' ambiguous at the end of the first chapter, so I'm going to go with:

"You missed a spot, Redheart dear. There's still cum all over your tits."

:rainbowlaugh:

7543269 You sonuvabitch,you didn't let her get a sex scene. :twilightangry2:

Dunno if I should read dis

So that all was just a porn shoot, with the guy not knowing it was a porn shoot :rainbowlaugh:
Probably not. We'll never know.

Either way, Feather's incredibly lucky... and he knows it. Gotta stay humble.
Quite the read though, great job!
Though that ending seems a bit open... should we be looking forward to more? :raritywink:

Would love to see a sequel for this.

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That was... um, wow.

Uh... nurse? I think I have a bit of a problem...

m’lady

I… I can't… what?

The two most beautiful mares you have ever seen in your life, one of them a porn star,

And i thought before that that Fleur was a model, Milano being the pornstar.

HOUSTON, THE USS MEAT ROCKET HAS ACHIEVED LIFTOFF!!! :moustache:

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HOUSTON, THE USS MEAT ROCKET HAS ACHIEVED LIFTOFF!!! :moustache:

Why thank you! :rainbowlaugh:

Gods damn that was hot. So, was he set up as the unwitting male model in a porn shoot, or was most of it genuine, and Milano was taking advantage as the opportunity presented itself? :trixieshiftright:

Either way, would love to see a sequel to this.

For some reason, this fulfills so many self-insert fantasies without setting off any feelings of "yeah, that'll happen." Loved it, great job.

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The stuff with Redheart was genuine. She hadn't gone in planning on boning his brains out. Fleur went for the shoot, and the sex was just an opportunity she seized, though she does like Featherweight and Redheart. Milano just tool advantage of the proceedings to do some surreptitious filming, not really knowing that they we're not wholly acting.wholly

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Thank you. I achieve the effect by including actual reasons for why characters may work together instead of just having them be controlled by horniness-inducing alien brain worms. That is why I put so much emphasis on the interactions prior to sex.

I think I'll be stopping here. Quite frankly, this looks like something you'd only see in a porno, a very cheesy, blatant one at that. I know this is supposed to be clop, but it just seemed to go over the top with how quickly things escalate. Not to mention thetr are some things here that contradicted what was mentioned in the last chapter, leaving me more confused than turned on. I won't give a dislike, but I feel I should point out at least that much.

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You may do that; to this is just a fun story for faps.

Oh hey, you're the guy who wrote Hot Button Beach Day? No wonder I liked this one so much! Excellent clop. :)

Dude, amazing story, and also great delivery on the lesson. It actually helped quite a bit with the photography class I'm taking. We developed our first roll of film on Friday and I made my first print of the school year yesterday. Thanks a ton for helping me understand positioning and how important communication can be. And again great story bro.

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Wow, I am very glad you like this so much. I am very happy and surprised it's helped you with your photography class. I had to say I had a lot of fun making this and I really did look into photo shoots shoots.

P.S.: You're awesome, Bratan.

I had a feeling that red heart's would see that

“I wish. Some bitch of a dragon just suddenly roasted me when I was walking across the bridge.”

wait thats dark souls

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