• Published 3rd Sep 2016
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Laybor Day - kalash93

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7540978

Oh I got a PM from the creator when he made it, but thanks for posting it. :yay:

7540238

Your wish has been granted.

Okay, when I saw this, I was a little worried because I had a similar idea but with different characters. Might have to check this out, at least to give me some ideas on how to transition to the clop.

The worst part about this story is that it's over.

This definitely needs a sequel.

7541236

Go ahead and read. Don't feel afraid to write your own story; how many 'Rarity falls for older Spike' fics are there out there, for example.

I concur with Rubakor! :raritywink:

Where's Milly? She was talked about and was said to arrive,but I don't see Milly. I swear to god if she's somewhere in there hiding like waldo I will flip my table.

7543260

Read the very end. :trollestia:

7543269 You sonuvabitch,you didn't let her get a sex scene. :twilightangry2:

Dunno if I should read dis

So that all was just a porn shoot, with the guy not knowing it was a porn shoot :rainbowlaugh:
Probably not. We'll never know.

Either way, Feather's incredibly lucky... and he knows it. Gotta stay humble.
Quite the read though, great job!
Though that ending seems a bit open... should we be looking forward to more? :raritywink:

Would love to see a sequel for this.

The two most beautiful mares you have ever seen in your life, one of them a porn star,

And i thought before that that Fleur was a model, Milano being the pornstar.

7549678

HOUSTON, THE USS MEAT ROCKET HAS ACHIEVED LIFTOFF!!! :moustache:

Why thank you! :rainbowlaugh:

Gods damn that was hot. So, was he set up as the unwitting male model in a porn shoot, or was most of it genuine, and Milano was taking advantage as the opportunity presented itself? :trixieshiftright:

Either way, would love to see a sequel to this.

7552704

The stuff with Redheart was genuine. She hadn't gone in planning on boning his brains out. Fleur went for the shoot, and the sex was just an opportunity she seized, though she does like Featherweight and Redheart. Milano just tool advantage of the proceedings to do some surreptitious filming, not really knowing that they we're not wholly acting.wholly

7552738

Thank you. I achieve the effect by including actual reasons for why characters may work together instead of just having them be controlled by horniness-inducing alien brain worms. That is why I put so much emphasis on the interactions prior to sex.

7554448

You may do that; to this is just a fun story for faps.

Oh hey, you're the guy who wrote Hot Button Beach Day? No wonder I liked this one so much! Excellent clop. :)

7562695

Wow, I am very glad you like this so much. I am very happy and surprised it's helped you with your photography class. I had to say I had a lot of fun making this and I really did look into photo shoots shoots.

P.S.: You're awesome, Bratan.

7606678

Indeed. U mad?

Comment posted by CuriousCurse deleted Mar 30th, 2019

7642773


Mm wow, I'm glad you really are enjoying it so much. :moustache:

7642773

Sooo, did you ever come back?

7788661 omg please some sort of follow up to this story please!

7798143

Thank you very much. :twilightsheepish:

Did you have something special in mind?

7788661
Now why would you want to know a thing like that? :P

7803336

Just interested in customer satisfaction. :scootangel:

7798173 idk maybe a follow up with the other characters mentioned throughout the story? Like Milano. Maybe even a multi chapter story?

7804396


Hmmm, so you mean perhaps write their first official porn shoot together or something like that?

7804724 that or something else I guess, as long as it feels like what you want to write I'll read any sequel to this lol.

7805103

Well, right now I'm working on a sequel to something Dirty Little Secret wrote with Luna and Pipsqueak. I don't know if I'll make it cloppy or not.

I made my cousin read this for the lols and on all three stories he put me out of the room about 2 or 3 times yelled YES YES GOD DAMN IT YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I asked him after. Did you like it i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/257/968/786.jpg

7828241

Sounds like fun :rainbow laugh: I'd like to hear the full story. :trollestia:

Anyway, there was his load all over my keyboard. I was like Really nigga you are feckin cleaning this

7831055

So you made someone read this story and then watched them jerk it over it? :rainbowlaugh:

7831370 no
he put me out of my pc room

7831370 and i use that to play oh i don't know unturned

7844725

Why thank you very much! Please enjoy the rest. :twilightsmile:

You are a struggling photographer fresh out of school. You meet with a model for a quick photo session.

Ah... I was going to write Featherweight with something similar (only in 1pov). You beat me to it. Hmm... I may still tempt it but not as M rating. I may check this out later.:unsuresweetie:

7894972

Do it do it do it! Do both. Keep the M rating.

If you'd like some help, I'd be willing to oblige... I like giving hands. Phrasing.

7895207 let me... rephrase my comment. The story was going to follow Featherweight but not under M rating. I don't write past T. But since your offering help... Would you happen to be an editor or at least a good proofreader?

7895264

Ah, I see, so no My Little Porny. Yes. Indeed, I can indeed help.

7895463 A)Nope... not my cup of tea. B)When you get the time, could you perhaps check out my stories and give your thoughts on them? I'm trying to get more reads/help so I can be seen and improve. Of course, I'm not asking for free. I'll read your stories and give my 2 cent on it although that will be difficult seeing as its... sex tag on there. Oh... no... :facehoof::rainbowlaugh:. Still, pretty nice pic I say(in a good way)

7895466

Alright, since you insist. I'll give you the brief thoughts, because I have the amazing ability to pontificate like a mofo and say shit in a form exponentially longer than is actually objectively necessary. I'll go through the stories you have under the "need help" banner.
Just how much are you willing to do for me? There's one story I'm thinking of reviving right now, but it's like 50K words long right now...

7895551 Well, I can give my thoughts on you stories. That should be enough. Or am no missing something?

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