Great chapter.

Read first chapter. Go to work. Come home. New chapter.
Excellent... ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°)

Question: Why does Fleur remove her bikini top twice? Am I just that blind, and missed her putting it back on before the end of his climax? You have her take it off when she goes to suck him off, then again at the tail end. I've scanned it like 3 times and found no mentioning of her putting it back on only to take it back off at the end lol.

7539072 Ah, you've noticed that too.
Unless she's wearing a very elaborate two-top-piece, then idk.

Featherweight is living the dream.

I also love the way you've written Fleur.

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I fucked up. I shall fix it so that instead she removes her bottom.

It is at thes moments where a single thought goes through my mind.... WHY MUST I WAIT FOR MORE???!!!.... absolutely wonderful job with this my friend, I can't ait to see what you have in store for us next

7539384 Okay! I just wasn't sure if I was seeing this wrong or not. It was like, 3 in the morning when I read this, sleep kind of drops my comprehension a bit. Still, good work so far, keep it coming.

So...while looking through the internetz i found this

Thought you might be interested.

“H-how did you know we…?” Your chest tightens.

It's kinda' ambiguous at the end of the first chapter, so I'm going to go with:

"You missed a spot, Redheart dear. There's still cum all over your tits."

HOUSTON, THE USS MEAT ROCKET HAS ACHIEVED LIFTOFF!!!

I think I'll be stopping here. Quite frankly, this looks like something you'd only see in a porno, a very cheesy, blatant one at that. I know this is supposed to be clop, but it just seemed to go over the top with how quickly things escalate. Not to mention thetr are some things here that contradicted what was mentioned in the last chapter, leaving me more confused than turned on. I won't give a dislike, but I feel I should point out at least that much.

Dude, amazing story, and also great delivery on the lesson. It actually helped quite a bit with the photography class I'm taking. We developed our first roll of film on Friday and I made my first print of the school year yesterday. Thanks a ton for helping me understand positioning and how important communication can be. And again great story bro.

7562695 photo me like on of your nurse girls

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“My core,” Redheart answers.

Core? What is she talking about?

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She has a svelte, slender body even taller than Big Macintosh, and yet she possesses a proud pair of at least C-cup breasts all bound up in a skimpy white string bikini top while down around her petite waist hung a tied short skirt which exposed her slender thighs and the faintest hints of a g-string bottom the same white as her fur, as almost a token measure for modesty.

Was the skirt ever removed?