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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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Good start and we need more stories like this with Fleur.

Any chance your next story will feature Rara?

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I'll include Rara, but I still gotta finish up Fleur's story and a few others

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Fair enough. I just wanted to know if you had a story with her planned out.

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Cadance is already married. I can't interfere with married couples. Especially since she and Shining already have Flurry

Just noticed something strange. When (me) told Fleur that i shot my dad, She seemed to understand what i meant by "shooting" since she didn't question it. What im trying to say is do ponies possess firearms in this story or what?

Great story. Giving it a follow

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She knows that the guy and his dad shot each other, but he never explained what they shot each other with, so she thinks that they both shot each other with a "fatal magic blast," but if you want, I can have the character explain it in the next chapter after their night of passion

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I'll include them, but the order is going to be random.

The runt of the litter?! Now that's messed up. And they call themselves parents?

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I'll let you know after I've finished some of the chapters from my other stories. I'm way overdue with them

Cant remember when was the last time i read a Fleur story, nice job.

I wanderer what fleur and me have some plans for the future?

I wander what Fleur dis Lee going to react when I took her with me to the USA :ajsmug:

🇫🇷Fleur dis Lee🇫🇷 :heart: 🇺🇸BRONY USA🇺🇸

Looks like I'm living with my wifu now. [Note to self: put a USA flag on the flag pole]

I'm going to have kids when fleur was prengnet. (And throes kids are French/mexican American)

What about a clopfic for Gilda and/or any of the other female gryphons?

"Just because I'm a model, doesn't mean that I'm someone's property!"

I think this will be a inspired Quoth for Women that Fleur Gave.

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Yeah, I wanted her to be a strong, independent mare while having a nice side to her

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Well genus, I think she serves as a Example for Women are Strong and Brave, and Independent and in the meantime I think her Independents will slap The Rat-haired Fool and the Unstable monkey in the Face on how they Treat Women like that and I think she will slap Moises the Second in the Face for Treating Women like there Slaves and Property.

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And you know what Genus. I think The One that is similar to Fleur's Independents kina Reminds me of The Simpsons episode called Homer's Night Out.

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And also I know that How she want's to be Strong and Independent, that's a Reference to Modeca

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Question, is this pink mane pony is a strong, independent mare while having a nice side to her like in the show because I don't see it since she's a background character.

I would give anything to be this guy. Fleur is certainly a caring mare, loving, passionate and beyond sexy....beyond Cadence sexy and that is saying a lot.

"What's the matter, darling, don't you like what you see?" she asked, placing her hands on her hips and twirling around, showing you her beautiful hourglass figure. You could feel your pants getting tighter and she could tell her seductive charm was working. "I'll take that as a yes. Now show me what you're packing underneath that suit of yours, my darling Fortis." she demands in a sultry tone.

You might want to divide this into two or three paragraphs, like below:

"What's the matter, darling?" Fleur teasingly asked before placing her hands on her hips and slowly twirling around, showing you her beautiful hourglass figure. "Don't you like what you see?"

You never replied as you took in every detail of Fleur's beautiful body. In fact, you could feel your pants getting tighter the longer you stared at her, which caused your cheeks to blush a darker red. Of course, Fleur could tell her seductive charm was working on you.

"I'll take that as a yes. Now, show me what you're packing underneath that suit of yours, my darling Fortis," she demands in a sultry tone.

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