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Little_Draco


Young, Clueless, a dragon with hunger for a hoard of knowledge but my hoard is to be spread with friends, families and more.

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Once a Princess, now a Lord, Ember sends a letter to Princess Twilight to a situation that involves Spike. The letter seems serious and the dragons are already on their way. What could it entail about Ember's journey to Equestria? What does it mean for Spike?


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Comments ( 738 )

Good start. Needs some editing though as there are words that are misspelled and some grammar mistakes.

Wow, the episode only aired yesterday and ship fics have already been written? Wow, people work fast. Personally, I think you should expand on this more as you can't leave that ending there. We want to know the aftermath, or at least I do.

You should continue this story.

I'm in agreement with everyone, this story needs to go on. Especially how the new Lord(Lady?) and her consort is going to deal with things. And the detail that this is basically a faux diplomatic marriage and may help Equesteria get friendlier with dragons.

But going back to the present, the fic has some editing issues. The last line also is relatively confusing. I think you're trying to talk about not having enough oxygen going to Spike's brain. Once I'm free, I'll give a clear scan.

But for now, here's a follow.

Okay, this has quickly become my favorite shipping in the series. Not like that's difficult though considering that I only have two other pairings that I follow. I really hope that you keep on going with this story and I really want to see this story continue too. After all, I wouldn't mind seeing someone tackle the whole explanation behind Spike growing to former Dragon Lord Torch's size.

Wow, when I read this, there are 28 other people doing it too.
I must admit that I am very indifferent to shipping, but after watching the last episode and interactions between the two main characters (Spike and Ember), I believe I can make a big exception to this ship.
Great start and I waiting for a continuation.

This is pretty good as it stands, though it leaves room for expansion. I think if you're super inspired for this ship, keep writing it out. I did the same with my Ancient Rituals fic. Started as one chap, but I had to write more of the ship. It's your decision.

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Sorry a little joke, still a nice beginning to which I'm going to enjoy to the fullest extent.

There is a small mistake. In some places it should be safe instead of save

SFG

Please continue! :twilightsheepish:

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee keeeeeeppp going, this is awesome, the idea is perfect for one of the first Spender fics

This isn't bad but I think you could use an editor, once you have an editor it could be so much better! I have high hopes for this.

I think it's pretty messed up the way Ember is treating Garble. He's basically her slave, just for competing against them. She's worse than Garble was in the beginning of the episode.

*Upvotes externally*
More pls

I would love to read more of this. Hope you continue! :pinkiehappy:

Huh, though it would take another day before something like this came out after the last episode. Anyway, can't wait to see more.

well that escalated quickly.
someone fetch Rarity's jaw

I SHIP IT! I SHIP IT TO THE CENTER OF THE PLANET AND BACK! MORE! MAKE IT SAIL!

I can see gerbal just laughing at them.
Loved it a few mistakes here and there. But nothing that ruined the story lol
Can't wait to see more

Holy fuck, those Applejack lines... This story, in general, needs a makeover. There are several places where certain actions and lines seemed very OoC, and there are tons of basic errors. That being said, in roughly equal amounts, the story was almost as if pulled straight from an episode.

It isn't bad for a first chapter, but it isn't great either. In the end, I'm going to watch it in the hopes that it gets revised and continued.

Needs a bit of clean up but other than that it has potential. I hope you continue to write more to this.

Good story I loved it so please continue writing this fic :pinkiehappy:

It needs an editor, but overall nice work! :pinkiehappy:

Hope to see more soon! :yay:

Needs serious editing but all in all pretty good.

Damnit... The image I was gonna link isn't working.

I'll just say that "I ship it like Fedex" was involved.

7133946 Is that english? I am not even sure. :unsuresweetie: Not even sure this is english? .... huh? :rainbowhuh:

:raritycry:Noooooooooooooooooooo!
:moustache:No? only the way of the dragons - claw to claw combat!
:twilightoops: A claw to hoof fight?
:raritydespair: I've become a cat pony!
:ajbemused: a few goofs but it's got a future!
:rainbowlaugh: a fight to the finish
:fluttercry: cause Spike ate his spinach
:pinkiehappy: says Twilight and Fluttershy!
:derpytongue2: where's the pop corn!

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I fixed it, the image I was going to use didn't work :facehoof:

Huh. I like it. It flowed like at least first part of a two parter.

Not too shabby. Though Rainbow looks like a complete insensitive assh*le in this.

7133870 Pirates of the Caribbean style

7133476 Second that! Great start all the same. P.S. Fluttershy, is going to nave to suck it up some day be fore she insults someone.:ajbemused:

This pairing will send the Sparity folks into convulsions. I laugh with sheer evil glee.

Damn that ship !
It's growing on me so fast ! :rainbowkiss:
(And I'm supposed to be a pro F/F shipper...)
Nice story, can't wait to read more :yay:

I feel a new fanfic series on the horizon

Please continue this story! :pinkiehappy::heart:

Needs some proofreading.

save passage to you in Equestria. We are right outside of the boarders

Safe passage. Borders.

7133746 However Garble also was the one calling to loot and burn all of Equestria. By making him her bodyguard Garble at least has some power that should keep him satiated if not satisfied, and prevent him from going rogue as the scepter only has limited influence on the dragons.

Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.

In fact something similar happened in the expanded canon of the Star Trek verse (albeit not with the best results as shown by Star Trek VI the Undiscovered Country), it takes place in the Star Trek Klingon Academy game. Long story short there was a three way Civil War for the Chancellorship of the Klingon Empire the eventual winner Gorkon leading one, General Chang another, and Melkor a third, it eventually reached a point where Melkor destroyed any honor he had (The Ultimate Klingon no-no) and thus made him the target of the other two factions, but during the battles against Melkor Gorkon came to Chang's aide putting him in his debt thus ending his factions attempt to put him in charge and Gorkon making him his Chief of Staff as a way to keep him from going off against the United Federation of Planets.

Hammer it while the ship is hot! Needs moar TsundEmber!

I will laugh my butt off if Ember keeps Garble around as her personal jester. Y'know: "He makes me laugh."

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But he only mentioned he would do that if he became dragon lord, there was nothing stopping him from doing it before, and he probably didn't, now there's no threat of him becoming dragon lord. And Ember didn't seem too concerned about making every dragon listen to her or making sure no dragons antagonize ponies.

this is amazing!

please continue

Why does she need a mate in order to stay as dragon lord? Its not like she needs to produce an heir since leadership is handed through trial instaed of bloodline.

It's only a matter of time when we hear the legendary phrase, "I-I-It's not like I like you or anything... B-Baka!"

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