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naturalbornderpy


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Discord and Princess Celestia have been dancing for some time now. Not everyone can see it. Not even Celestia can, truthfully.

But Discord does. He sees every move and every turn. And he's not certain he ever wants their dancing to stop. No matter how much it might hurt them both.

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As usual, this was awesome! :pinkiehappy:

Oh god, Discord is a monster...and it's awesome. I think he loves her just enough to never want her to stop dancing. And immortals are only immortal because Discord doesn't want the dance to stop...

Well, that's hideously terrifying and kind of romantic.

Since this is dance between a hero and villain have this fan song that fits the story perfectly i hope you enjoy it.

Ever listen to Passive by A Perfect Circle? This fits that song near-perfectly.

TGM

So, as I understand it, at some point Celestia died during their fight— I mean, dance.Discord wasn't having any of that. The dance was too fun, and she means too much to him.So he brought her back, again, and again, and again, and again, and she dies every time.

How tragically romanctic.

This is an interesting concept. I think that, in fact, this could be very plausible. Like, in the canon Discord is just pretending most of the crap. Most excluding his friendship with Fluttershy.

..Oh damnit why aren't there any good Fluttershy emoticons :fluttercry:

Sad and sweet. :pinkiesad2:

Good fic. I like how unhinged Discord is in all this.

7023003 Thank you! :twilightsmile: I like my Discord rather unhinged.

7022806 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: Odd combo, right?

7022272 :rainbowlaugh: For me, it's "Let the coffee flow through you."

7022202 Basically. I promise I'm fun at parties, though! Seriously! :unsuresweetie:

7021911 Just did. I would agree. :applejackconfused:

7021703 It's a weird one, isn't it? :trixieshiftright:

7021681 Thank you! :rainbowkiss:

7021594 Thanks for saying so. :yay:

Celestia bars her teeth

Bares.
This was a really enjoyable story even in spite of its short length.
:twilightsmile:

Bravo!
That was music to my eyes!
Once again just the right amount of darkness, to perfectly accent another well written and engaging tale.
You still got it NBD. :pinkiehappy:

... Woah. Short, but powerful.

7023600 It's oddly romantic. You should expand on it.

7026654 Hmm. Interesting idea, just not sure where it could go. Unless Celestia figures out what Discord's doing or their relationship changes substantially. From hero/villain to the something stronger.

7026439 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: Glad you enjoyed it.

7024402 Was starting to feel a little cheap with all the goofy comedies lately, so I decided to change it up. Still balancing out my rate popular/personal fics, it seems.

7026744 TO ROMANCE!

I always did love Dislestia.

I think it would be interesting to have Discord just stop and talk to her. She rejects him. He leaves.

Paranoia builds.

Finds him starting on Bonsai.

7026744 As long as what you write makes you happy my friend. That's the main thing.:pinkiehappy:

That would be scary. I'd hate to relive the same dance over and over.

This was deeply and awesome at the same time. I liked how he loved her enough to never want to stop dancing.

:rainbowhuh:I don't like Discord. I despise Discord. You made me like Discord.
What sorcery is this? (In all seriousness, love the story.)

This is the first naturalbornderpy story (I can recall) reading. And of course being Dislestia trash* I remember seeing this one...and it's so wonderfully dark, insane, and good Dislestia! I'm so glad I read it and the first person narrative makes it even better. :yay:

*2nd favorite ship...

As I have grown, my fondness of the dark has grown with it.
Curse you, for you have given me the longest of shadows.

Short and sweet, a nice piece of character exploration, and a unique take on their relationship. Good work.

This is good overall, but the twist isn't very good. Discord's reaction of being angry felt weird and gave it away to some degree.

At first i thought this story was going to be weird, it did end up being weird but not the bad kind of weird. Nice job!

(Unless the publisher needs to drum up business, so they kill off another Robin or something.)

Or put Superman into a healing coma, or have Doc Ock take over Peter Parker's mind and do a (surprisingly) better job as Spider-Man than Peter does...

I got a weird reminding of Soul's playing during battle from Soul Eater. Just me? Just me.

Dark, poetic and chaotic

I find myself coming to this story all the time. Really nice written and the pace of it really allows you to feel the feelings of Discord in his own chaotic way.

Never had the opportunity to leave a comment until now. Great job, mate

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