It nearly took hold of her. The sheer emotional desperation. Discord had nearly broken her, but she seemed to triumph. But had Twilight truly forgotten what he had done to her emotions? Had he actually almost managed to break her?
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Celestia wasn't trying to help her by returning the letters.
She was Discord'ed, and trying to disown her by sending them all back
2571218 I know. Celestia was trying to help her get back to who she was through those letters. Therefore, she was trying to help her beat Discord's curse.
2578922 I know that's the canon thought, but my headcanon is that Celestia, while affected by Discord, decided she wanted to disown Twilight, so she sent all the letters back.
2579059 I know, but I didn't want to be TOO depressing.
Good story I guess, but it could have been better if you would have done some thing like twilight killing herself (or about to), Princess Celestia calms twilight down but feels unfaithful herself in return or something.
3447776 Well, I didn't want this to be that dark. I thought something like a hidden feeling of sadness between the two was enough. I think that attempted suicide just isn't my kinda thing.
That she was writing a suicide letter at first
I looooved this story! Pretty heartbreaking but verrrryy good!
3499415 Dang, you're really spreading your wings with checking out my stories, huh?
Yes I am(: You are a fantastic writer and I love reading your stuff!
3501119 Thanks. It means alot!
damn at first i thought she was writing a suicide letter.
glad to know that i was wrong.
good work. and dem feels.
3736072 Good Lord, man! Why does everyone think that this was gonna be a suicide letter!?
3739359
i dont know!
Very nice: I'm a sucker for short, atmospheric character pieces, and this is just that.
3746627 Hey, it's you! Well, thanks bro. By the way, you should check out, "Welcome, My Little One". It's my most popular story right now.
3747382 I'll try to give it a look, sure. It's a bit longer than the stories I most read, though, so it might be a while.
This needs to be longer, there needs to be a part where Twilight and Celestia talk about this. Well at least I would like to see that but its obvious you have no intention of doing that so im just going to say Nice job, I liked it and give you a like. Good day sir.
3777660 You know what, I might just do that. This was kinda just a what-if, but I can make it longer.
3777693 Wait...
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Conclusion:
Edit: By the way I added to favorites
3777841 THANK YOU, SIRE!
3739359
Probably because of the sad and/or tragedy tags.
....this needs an epilogue.
3787899 I'm gonna continue it
3788128 Ah, thanks.
Snuck in.
Pretty good story though.
3790853 Thanks. And sorry, snuck isn't a word. Thank you, English class!
3791697
http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/snuck-vs-sneaked
New words are added to the dictionary every year mate. It's word now, just not used very often. Sneaked sounds funny in my opinion. But hey, it also says your right, so I'll take this off as a learning experience.
3792757 We both will, I guess!
3792825 Those are the best moments *sage nod*
*Claps* Very well done and a very clever ending.
4119945 Thank you sir!
"Equestria would one day shine brighter than the sun, and darkness would flee once and for all."
"and darkness would flee once and for all"
"flee once and for all"
I call bullshit. Darkness never leaves forever, if it did, then the light would not only become pointless but would also transform into a twisted version of itself, ending in darkness regardless.
I'm... I don't know what to say...
This hurt. This really hurt.
I liked this, I'll never look at season 2 episode 2 the same ever again now.
However, I must gripe a bit too. That last bit, that... Epilogue, I guess... It sucked. That was way too cliche sounding. Sorry, like the story, but that last bit was rubbish