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The Abyss


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Princess Luna is fed up with her life. She fears that her position of power dissuades possible romantic interests, and she's all but given up on finding love. That is, until she accidentally brushes against the dream of none other than Discord.

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Nice! I like how you've started this up! I'm gonna give this a hopeful four and a half out of five muffins, keep doing great things! ^-^
~SoDF

Oh, this is going to be hilarious and adorable!

yesyesyesyesyesyesyeeeees
take all of my yes
finally a new Lunacord story again
and it sounds really nice so far
im veeery interested in this one
like and follow right away ^^
keep up the good work and see you next chapter :DD

This looks amazing so far I hope it goes farther.

6842320 My words exactly, Tatsurou.

And thus sails my favorite obscure ship.:rainbowkiss:

Again a well done job at introducing the start of the plot, Abyss. I enjoyed the interactions between Luna and Discord, but I especially liked the interactions between Dash and Scootaloo. I couldn't help but smile at Rainbow praising her number one fan, that could also be because I'm reading a certain other story of yours...:twilightsheepish:

There is a trend that I keep on seeing in your works, though. That being that you tend to tell a lot but don't show. What could be just a couple paragraphs, again, is stretched out lessening my immersion into the story. Your grammar in this fic, though, has been better than the last I read. Didn't see any mistakes of note, so good job there.:twilightsmile:

I await what to see of Discord's and Luna's future high jinks, I'm sure they're going to get a laugh out of me. As always, I wish you good fortune upon your future writing endeavors.:derpytongue2:

I've been waiting weeks for this to fi slky arrived and so fare you have no disappointed. Post again soon please so I may keep enjoying this.

This is going to be the most delightful catastrophe. :rainbowlaugh:

This is going to be a chaotic ride, better be prepare Luna.

awesome!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I dont know luna..what have you done?:ajsmug:

The chaotic cuteness is real.

Hehehe, good start! I'll be watching this.

ChillOut

Love it already! please write more.:twilightsmile:

Immediately thought of this:

Looking forward to more

He reached out and yanked them back up to him, covering himself up like a mare who just got discovered wearing sexy lingerie.

This line reminded me of the cold open of The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 where Rainbow Dash rips the covers off of Fluttershy's bed and Fluttershy is embarrassed that Rainbow Dash caught her sleeping in the nude.

This story seems to be off to an interesting start. And although this is not a ship I have ever paid attention to, I would still like to see where you take this.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

THIS FIC HAS CAUSED DELAY ON THE UPDATE FOR MY FILLY, NIGHTSHINE! XD and another great fic from one of my favorite authors :)

6845483 Sure is! That's why I'm doing it.

6845142 Weeeeeeeeell, to be honest, I was gonna get the next chapter of another important story out first.

6846220 NUUUUU!!!!! Why must you torture me like this!? WHYYYYYYYY!? :raritycry::raritydespair::fluttershbad::rainbowlaugh:

6846321 Because the sequel to my biggest story hasn't updated in over a month and I feel pretty guilty because of it.:fluttershysad:

6846328 Then go and do it :D What are ya doin here!? Get them fingers clackin! since its the sound when you fingers hit the keys XD

Looking forward to the next part.

This will definitely go places.
Hilarious places.
D'awww places.
But still places - and I can't wait to read more :twilightsmile:

Must say that you have opened quite nicely an

This remains the only legit Lunacord ship fic I've read here. Hasn't anyone else written one worth reading/reviewing?

This shall be interesting indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

Please write more for this. I love this ship so this story needs more. I must know what Discord has planned!!!

LunaCord?

Okay, let's see just how far down this rabbit hole goes...:rainbowdetermined2:

Tracking

7368738 Later today! I made a blog about a new chapter yesterday.

Sorry, this comment has nothing to do with the story, but i couldn't help but notice your bio?

The Equestria After Dark fanfiction blogger who can't, and never will, get enough snuggles.

Don't you write clopfics? Doesn't that technically count as snuggles?

7369937 Equestria After Dark is no more, I'm afraid. The host had an accident and their data got deleted, and they didn't have any backups. :/ I still gotta change my bio lol.

And no, writing clopfics doesn't count as snuggles, unfortunately. :fluttercry:

7369945 THE SITE DEDICATED TO CLOPFICS AND PONY PORN IS GONE!?

THANK YOU FOR DELIVERING THIS NEWS TO ME ABYSS! OH GOD I COULD JUST KISS YOU RIGHT NOW IF THERE Wasn't a computer screen in the way...

Well then.
Luna, what have you done?

7369947 I can pull faces too, you know.

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That is my happy face. LOOK AT IT! LOOK AND IT AND WET YOURSELF IN FEAR AT MY HIDEOUS UGLY DISGUSTING BRITISH FACE!

7369951 Pretty much. If you would like to discuss it further, can you either PM me or comment on my userpage? I would prefer to only receive comments here if it's about the story.

7369959 Oh right, of course. I do not wish to cause a problem like I have done before in one of your other stories.

No, I am okay. I don't care nor have I ever cared about that site so talking about it would be pointless.

However, if you would like to chat about anything sometime, by all means send me a PM if you want. In fact, I'll send you my email address so you can talk to me that way if you want. Who knows? Maybe one day I can redeem myself to you and be of some use in the future.

Other than that, I'll give this story a glance. Looks promising if I might compliment it that much on appearance.

And it is good to see you are still around, good sir. (bows politely to you)

7369959 Oh and liking the new avatar as well. Just wanted to mention that as well. (goofy smile and double thumbs up)

Well I hadn't seen this one before. Must have been ere my time. Is this gonna be a one-off thing or do you plan on updating this within a month or two's timeframe?

7369977 As I mentioned in a blog, I had an idea for this story back when I published it, but I threw it out because it didn't feel right. A few days ago, I figured out a better way to write this, and the updates will definitely be more frequent than half a year haha.

7369988 alright. Thanks for the answer!

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