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When a joyful picnic at the beach celebrating Discord's TRUE reform takes a dark turn, The mane six are left with one question in mind, what was Discord's history? What pushed him to conquer Equestria single handedly? Unable to answer it, the ponies go to Celestia and Luna to learn of their friend's traumatizing origins
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love it already and cant wait for more. Keep up the good work.
You fucked up, Everypony
yeesh, surprised they didn't pull knife on the dude.
Interesting. I like it, but I think, once everypony sees that Discord is getting upset, they would stop asking about his past. I could see Rainbow pushing him this far for answers, but never Fluttershy.
5407703 yeah ^^; I didn't really want to make the mane six so hostile. But I wanted discord to freak out so he wouldn't barge in when the sisters were telling them of his history. Lord knows he'd "alter" a few parts. If he didn't change them I'd think it'd be out tof character.
5407862 True, but, if you ever feel like editing, I think there is a easy way to fix this OOC-ness. With Rainbows hard headed-ness, and Pinkie easily forgetting about other ponies feelings ( see Filli Vanilli ), I think they show push Discord over the edge. While the rest of the Main six stop once Discord starts yelling.
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR :DDDD
awesome ^^
so excited for more
5412073 Hahaha!
5413400
oooooh! Sounds mysterious.
Oooh, interesting!~
And for the sake of Discord !
oh man so intense xD
you really managed too build up a lot of tension
daym
epic :P
5492947 thank you :D
And that's why I'm tracking it.
Whoa! I can't wait for more. ^_^
Yeah, update!
Hmm... Exitement (or whoever he is) does have a point, ponies are quite xenophobic at times. Ah well, more blood for the blood god, more skulls for the skull throne.
next?
5728621 My computer crashed when I had the file saved in it ^^; That was a pain in the flank. Plus Midterms and tons of studying got in the way. BUT I swear I won't put this story on hiatus. I already have the entire story start to finish in my head.
5728621 And the mono didn't help either ^^;
Wrong form of "Your."
Oh boy... This can only end in one way.
In tears.
6227605 thank you! All forms of help or criticism are welcome
6227745
You're quite welcome.
The question mark should be a comma.
holly shit
this chapter was 100 times more amazing than the others
daym its getting sooo good now
aargh waiting again now xDD
Hmm, who is this he that got a hold on Discord?? Only time will tell! ( I guessing that it's his dad or something )
holly shit this chapter was by faaaaaaaaaaaaar the best
shiiiit so awesome
but you really need a proof reader
there are more then a few typos and gramatic fails
and a pre-reader wouldnt be bad either
(i could pre-read for you in case you want)
6307347
A proof reader would be awesome! I will admit that I did rush this chapter out the door to show people that the rest of the story wouldn't take months in between each update. But if you could proof read for me, that would be amazing!!!! If you're up to it, I'd send you the story in advance.
6307230 Who got a hold of him indeed? But who did they kill that Discord is so distraught about?
6308186 naw xDD so sorry
im from germany
and because of that my english is definetly not good enough to proof-read :/
as said i could only help with details and ideas
which im very good at by the way
i was pre-reader for the story 'Good Company' and now im Co-author
you can take a look at that
im very good with emotions and intense moments
and of course with writing romance
Oh. My. God. Nice South Park reference.
Everyone kind of got jerkish towards the end there.
5407862 If Discord really wanted to defeat Twilight Sparkle, he never needed to discord her. All he needed was to tell her his origin story, then give her an assignment of writing an essay comparing his story to the contemporary record, what parts he's exaggerating or outright lying about and what parts are true, etc., all while citing her sources. Word it in such a way that she thinks she'll fail the Princess if she doesn't do it.
It would take Twilight the better part of several years before her
massive shelf of several dozen five-kilogram tomesessay was complete, and by that time Discord would be bored of ruling Equestria again.Sounds like Discord was basically a superweapon. Considering his reality-breaking powers, that's certainly what it would appear to be.
Dark and all, but unfortunately this chapter doesn't really compute. Two draconequui come in and pretty much kill the Queen Alicorn and dozens if not hundreds of Royal Guards and could easily have killed the King Alicorn. Sure, they're the most powerful of their species, but you set them up as so all-powerful that it stands to reason they could pretty much have wiped out the entire pony race by themselves. There simply wasn't any reason for them to need to create something even stronger than themselves.
Man, Discord's father was a dick.
Anyways, you need to do some more proofreading. For example;
Should be 'exception'.
Spike, meet Cadance.
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Noooot quite sure that's what she meant, Spike
6396142 Ooooooooooooo I was hoping someone would pick that out. Of course *mysterious voice* The Draqonequus cod have easily wiped out planet earth. But what if the Draqonequus didn't know Discord existed? What if Excitium and Dirus phad something bigger planed?
6403004 *Innocent voice* Of course not. (Loopholes have no affect on me.) Read the last few paragraphs VERY closely :3
Mooooore! :D
Well done Spike, you get a Spikestache for that.
Beautiful
Well done Spike, you get another Spikestache for that
Please!!!!!!!Don't tell me that you abandonated this wonderful fanfic
7530693
Oh no... I'm sorry to say this... but http://wolfrulez.deviantart.com/journal/Origins-of-Discord-explanation-625158155
7797397 Oh...yea...I understand
7800294
Wait! I take it Back!
http://wolfrulez.deviantart.com/journal/Discord-is-BACK-663400225
From the ashes, this story arises! Congrats on being able to write this again, I know that writers block feel bro
mother of god :I
So very glad to see this story didn't die, and I'm LOVING it, can't wait to read even more :D