• Published 22nd Dec 2015
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A Tryst in the Night - The Abyss



After failing to pick up a mare with a terrible pick up line, Thunderlane and Rumble are surprised to find Night Glider inviting them to her house further down the beach for a night of naughty pleasure.

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Well... That was fun. :pinkiehappy:

So hot. 10/10

Christmas has come early everyone


...or should I say "cum" early? :raritywink:

6757554 *Throws an apple at SparkBrony*

6757516 IGN best clop ever

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What am I gonna do with all these apples? :rainbowhuh:

6757806 *Opens mouth wide* Ohhhh!! Over here, over here!

6757811 *Throws another apple at Star Cloud*

6757840 *cries while munching* You guys... You guys are the best :raritydespair:

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*Dumps basket of apples on Star Cloud's face* :rainbowlaugh:

6757967 THE RETURN OF THE WHY BONER WITH A VENGANCE:pinkiecrazy:

Good writing, good pacing, excellent sex scene... You never fail to entertain, Abyss.

6758814 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

God I'm starting to recognize the names of people who comment on these sort of stories...

Excellently written, all things considered. Better than anything I could've done, that's for sure.

Super sexy! Could have used a bit more 'winking', but I say that for every story I read.

When he looked down and saw her mouth full of his cum, she swallowed it all in one gulp, then opened her mouth again to show that it was empty. He simply stared down at her, his mouth forming a small ‘O’.

Sometimes I feel like I am the only one who finds this gross... Not enough to get me out of the mood, but enough for me to pause. Just wondering if it really is as loved as I think it is, or if it just seems that way. Strangely, it's not the swallowing or anything that I find gross, just the showing it off before swallowing.

loved the pacing, kept me super into it, keep up the great work!!!

Meh. Should have left Rumble as is and not aged up. :raritywink: This should have the alternate universe tag.

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Should have left Rumble as is and not aged up.

Absolutely not. I don't like foalcon, so I'm never gonna write that.

This should have the alternate universe tag.

No. Why should it? It's not an alternate universe at all.

it was good that rather if cloudchaser than her.:twilightblush:

6760080 Intentional. She was talking to Thunderlane first, then she addresses both of them.

6760027 But Rumble is aged up, so it isn't the same universe! :flutterrage: I might be nitpicking! :scootangel:

6760279 I think you are nitpicking a little too much. Just because someone is aged up doesn't mean that it's an alternate universe, merely the future. And what about the stories based off of earlier seasons? The characters are younger in those stories, or hell, they could have been written as being older. Those don't need the alternate universe tag, so my story doesn't either.

everytime he hilted inside of her, and every time he hilted inside of her

Not sure if intentional or not.

6760882 Yes, that was intentional. I had to double check, though. :twilightblush:

That was wonderbar.

Damn! I'm exhausted just from reading this.
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This was a pretty good story and would intrigued if this turned out to be more than a one night stand.

Abyyyyyyss~ ;~; I thought when she said that they had to finish her, then she would make them eat out her messy cunt~ bonus scene maybe?:trollestia:

Also what happened to those messy panties?:twilightblush:

I'm such a disgusting fuck aren't I? Meh I'm fine with that

I can easily see how this got featured on severall sites, great story

Well, I do have to say at least one thing - wow.
And then more things - while it's nothing more than a shameless clopfic, it is a really well written one. Enjoyable right from the start, and the scenes themselves were pretty damn hot.
Seriously, great job! No wonder this got featured.

wish Night Glider and Sugar Belle had their own tags by now... :flutterrage:
Their stories are hard to come across...

I think you accidentally activated derp mode right here:

end every time he hilted inside of her, and every time he hilted inside of her, he pr...

But yeah, me like

6762855 Nope, that was intentional.

ok this story is really good ok super good.
it rates a 10 out of 10 in my book.

Cloudchaser says "  ・・・。 "

How can I trust Thunderlane? That...that monster...
Wait...
This isn't 'The Camel'.
Alright then...

not bad for a clop fic

Wow...I'm truly speechless.
That was great! Thank you!

Another great clop story from the Abyss:rainbowwild:

jxj

Wow, that was amazing. Best I've read in a long time.

This was fucking amazing.

There's never enough Night Glider.

6770136 Lol dude, I know what you mean. Camel left me scared too, but I like this Thunderlane, this story in general is freaking amazing. It's not often I'm left drooling over writing

I christen thee H.M.S. THUNDERxGLIDER, may she sail the seas in all of it's greatness.

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