Rumble catches his brother's girlfriend, Rainbow Dash, in their kitchen one morning while his parents are away and his brother is staying over to watch him. Rainbow decides to use this as an opportunity to get to know the little colt better. Unfortunately for her, Rumble wants to talk about her relationship with his brother.
This takes place in the same universe as my other fic, Come Fly with Me, but this happens a few years before that fic.
Special thanks to Allonso Bronyguy who did the cover art and edits.
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No sex?
Being completely honest I only read this fic because I was hoping Rumbaloo would be referenced. It was!
Otherwise as a whole, I did like the fic, but I find it odd that the got to know each other before they actually said they love each other. It's really my only pet peeve with it, and it's just personal taste.
Dat' Flank.
Always on top eh?
Very enjoyable.
I like it! WHY DOES THIS STORY HAVE SEVEN DISLIKES?!
Absolutely Loved it, I would love to see a sequel of some sort as the writing and quality was absolutely excellent. And it just so happens that ThunderDash is one of my favorite pairings
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Wow, I love this ship
I dare say you should write a sequel of some sort to this!
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They are Rainbow's seven evil exes.
Thunderlane is going to have to fight them.
2933781 Correction. He has to DEFEAT them.
2785562 i think it is people that dislike this shipping
Love it it's a awesome story :)
should have a brothers/sisters double date scoots and rumble. rumbloo FTW
Um Rainbow Dash he has more pull than you think and technically it is his business because you're dating his brother. Just thought I point that out.
This was SO cute and I love this ship a lot! Thanx for the great story. :)
Good story
This was really cute! Great Job!!
Great job. Cheers.
Coltfriend and Fillyfriend
I've been left speechless... This was totaly one of the best stories ive read in a long time, even with its short length!
Dang dude!
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No need
This story perfectly resume the ThunderDash awesomeness and the stupid SoariDash ship.
The one is a love since child, the second a stupid felling because it's famous.
I really liked this as it had great moments between Rainbow Dash and Rumble.
Has cocky as ever go figures lol
“It was pretty obvious he had a crush on you when he was younger. In his entry about his cutie mark, he claimed that the best thing about it was that it looked similar to yours. He thought that meant you two were destined to be together,” Rumble told Rainbow Dash, causing her to snap out of her flashback.
“Is that so? That’s actually kinda sweet. Incredibly dorky and cheesy, but still kinda sweet,” Rainbow admitted as she chuckled.
Aww that is pretty cute
Well that was sweet of Thunder Lane defending rainbow after that little event from the Wonderbolts Academy
Lol aww he is so happy
Wow I got to say this was a pretty adorable chapter so Rumble was not supposed to wake up this early but he did and saw Rainbow Dash and he was confused why was she was here all day and of course he was too young basically told him that they were just having a sleepover Rumble also asked a lot of question even personal questions why rainbow did not say I love you to thunderlane basically she didn't want to say because after what happened to her last relationship then Rumble told her about Thunder Lanes diary and how he explained throughout his years how much he cared about her despite the ups and downs and rainbows start to realize how much he cares about her and when he came down he was surprised to see his girlfriend and his little brother talking with each other and he was about to cook something but she had to go but not before she said I love you to him which he was waiting for that moment for the longest time and to give a little boost she even shake her booty and it was pretty shocked but also happy that she return her love to him so this was a pretty good story and a very cute one keep up the good work