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  • T Camping With Rainbow
    Thunderlane plans on proposing to his girlfriend, Rainbow Dash, on their camping trip but he starts to question if he's worthy of her after a few incidents, including a bear attack.
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Rumble catches his brother's girlfriend, Rainbow Dash, in their kitchen one morning while his parents are away and his brother is staying over to watch him. Rainbow decides to use this as an opportunity to get to know the little colt better. Unfortunately for her, Rumble wants to talk about her relationship with his brother.

This takes place in the same universe as my other fic, Come Fly with Me, but this happens a few years before that fic.

Special thanks to Allonso Bronyguy who did the cover art and edits.

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I loved it! That was beautiful <3
I really like ThunderDash??? (Is that the Shipping name? XD) There's not enough of it around these parts of the woods. Lol

Being completely honest I only read this fic because I was hoping Rumbaloo would be referenced. It was!

Otherwise as a whole, I did like the fic, but I find it odd that the got to know each other before they actually said they love each other. It's really my only pet peeve with it, and it's just personal taste.

Dat' Flank. :yay:
Always on top eh? :rainbowlaugh:

Very enjoyable.

I like it! WHY DOES THIS STORY HAVE SEVEN DISLIKES?!

Absolutely Loved it, I would love to see a sequel of some sort as the writing and quality was absolutely excellent. And it just so happens that ThunderDash is one of my favorite pairings :twilightblush:

Wow, I love this ship :heart: I dare say you should write a sequel of some sort to this!

2785562

They are Rainbow's seven evil exes.

Thunderlane is going to have to fight them.

2933781 Correction. He has to DEFEAT them. :pinkiecrazy:

2785562 i think it is people that dislike this shipping

Love it it's a awesome story :):raritywink::pinkiehappy:

should have a brothers/sisters double date scoots and rumble. rumbloo FTW

“-No, I don’t want to hear another word about this from you right now. Stop being so nosy. My relationship with your brother is none of your business! So stop worrying about when we’re gonna.....if we’re gonna get married or if we say ‘I love you’ to each other!”

Um Rainbow Dash he has more pull than you think and technically it is his business because you're dating his brother. Just thought I point that out.

This was SO cute and I love this ship a lot! Thanx for the great story. :)

This was really cute! Great Job!!

Great job. Cheers.

Coltfriend and Fillyfriend

I've been left speechless... This was totaly one of the best stories ive read in a long time, even with its short length!
Dang dude!

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