Comments ( 33 )

The cover art is #1460317 on derpibooru.

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Thanks, dude! I tried to give credit to the artist in my story description, but that's a great addition too.

Stunning work! Loved every bit of it. Looking forward for more trap fanfiction from you.

Damn dude, you outdid yourself!

If you're wondering about the downvotes, it's because people downvote m/m stories because lesbians are hot, but gays are gross.

I want feel like i should read this but also dont at the same time

This story makes me grin just thinking about but also makes me uncomfortable

I am very confused

And i havent even read it yet

Dont know if i will

Rumblelane? From VClaw?!

My prayers have been answered :rainbowwild:

Marmo #9 · Aug 14th, 2018 · · 7 ·

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its mostly cause the feature box is filled with smut stories

9110601
>2 1 out of 10
>filled with
check your math next time before posting.

Me reading the description:

This was a good read keep it up.

The Featured Box Troll. Great more pony porn in the FB . " I bet your momma is just proud of you"

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Aug 15th, 2018

More incest on the front page. Great.

9111443
Shut your whore mouth this is *art*

small penis humiliation

I will never understand this fetish.

Good story though.

9111443
I never understand these comments. There is a view mature switch... You can easily not see any of the smut.

I'm giving this a like before I've even read it.

Please make this a series

im not going to read it, but im going to like it

9112470 i think its i wont like it but i read it

This is very relevant to my interests and I would like to read more from you. Reminds me so much of my first twink boy. :scootangel:

9111279
You do realize there is an entire community dedicated to this, your kinda late to hate there bud

9110601
When is it not?

Don't wanna see it, then cut mature off

Wow...there's so much I want to say about this one.
story time
I saw that you posted the fic yesterday i'm like "no way i am reading this in broad daylight i'll wait!" cut to several hours later I was half way finish reading it deciding to sleep instead of staying up all night went to bed and the computer on sleep mode. the next day i turn on my computer and restarted it self - Argh #computer problems - anyways had to start the fic over again. that's all for now:)

You are a horrible person.

PS: Please write more

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Not hate just being a troll.

Blood relation of not

Ompfff indeed.
Joke aside, minor typo.

Epic. I love this story.

Well, I didn't know rumble could be such a cute femboy. :ajsmug:

Now that was great!!! Amazing writing and very erotic!

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