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Some Leech

I...I am a monument to all your sins...

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Another Rumble fic! Is this a sequel or a series or something?

Just a one-off

Nicely done! Colts and stallions really need more love in General.

Hm only thing… Element of Loyalty?

A part 2 or sequal where we see this play out from Thunderlane's perspective would be interesting.

Ngl, I'm not normally a fan of netorare, but damn if you don't make it spicy, Leech. Only thing that'd make me any more hot and bothered by this scenario is if Rumble gets Dash pregnant and Thunderlane is convinced to claim the foal as his.

Maybe she's open to the idea of open relationships

Man, I dunno
It's porn logic :fluttershbad:

Could be cultural. Like, if half the population intermittently becomes unbearably horny, shit like this is just gonna happen sometimes.

I think there were a bunch of places where you mixed up the pronouns, like

Keeping an eye on her face, she steadily bore down upon her diminutive mate.

still hot tho

Heh, perhaps Thunderlane actually did catch her signs and was coming back early.

Eyeing the figure in the hallway, knowing full well that he’d be ready for another round in a matter of minutes, Rumble grinned. “I’m sure we can go one more time…”

You do realize that this statement basically DEMANDS that there's a sequel! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!

I like to leave open endings for just this purpose!

Definitely wouldn't complain if this got a sequel!

( raises hand ) I would love a sequel too!

Maybe somewhere mid-pregnancy?

If these sorts of happy accidents are simply 'shameful' for mares, not criminal, I'd rather Dash buck convention: giving Rumble full credit for ruining her figure. Basically saving him the trouble of bragging to everypony around, reveling in the lad's confidence growing by the day, seeming to keep pace with her belly.

It would be embarrassing enough for Thunderlane to keep flying with her, if she was simply too talented and big to kick out. Even better if he kicks Rumble out instead, who promptly clouds up with Dash.

Hey, that works for me!

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