I...I am a monument to all your sins...
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This story is a sequel to Maid Up
It's said that turnabout is fair play - still Chrysalis would never have expected her arch-nemesis to flip the tables on her. She'd thought that she was finally done playing her little game with Celestia, but she'd been wrong - so very, very wrong...
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nice work
Devoured the story like a changeling would a stray lonely lil' pony
Some Leech throwing curveballs to the audience by reminding them that, yes, non-smut horsewords do exist
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So damn wholesome. I love this series so much.
I am quite happy to see a little more of this.
The story is so great.
It's hard to tell exactly what Celestia has planned for Chrysalis. But these always end with Celestia having no nefarious plans at all.
And that's the best part!
this is the most on brand thing Celestia could do, she brought snacks for everypony.
It's nice to get wholesome stories that don't need the M-rating or involve any sex. Sometimes simple is good.
And to think that this started because Chrysalis' infiltration - contrary to her perception of abject failure - has managed to worm her so deeply into the top echelons of the Equestrian government that's it's almost scary! First she convinced Princess Celestia herself to wait on her hoof and wing, and now she has the Princess debasing herself with mundane house cleaning and- shudders -personal massagery! When will it end?! (And will Chrysalis ever realize the impressive success of her unintentional scheme?)
Is there a sequel in the works.
Also nice to see wholesome stories here instead of the m-rated ones.
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True she would do that.
lol the sexual tension is palpable between these two
I'm loving this series and the interactions between Chrysalis and Celestia. Both wholesome and hilarious.
I wouldn't be surprised if, at some point, things progressed towards (TW: not for the pure of heart) a loving relationship and eventual matrimony between Celestia and Chrysalis
lets gooo
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I honestly couldn't ask for a better result. Unless Luna somehow also gets roped into it.
I hope story is not ended. I guess Chrysalis can repay Celestia with kindness... in her own way.
Understandable
Oh you have such a way with words.
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No, Princess Celestia and Chrysalis are not enemies, in fact, they are kissing, sloppy style, holding hooves together, etc.
Prench Maid not Prance Maid.
Didn't think a Celestia x Chrysalis fic would get this saucy but in hindsight all Chrysalis fic is saucy. Can't wait for more
Oh god they’re adorable
I ship it
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And that's what is so nefarious about her!
Nice. I shall CRAVE the next instalment
Cute story. I think it ends better here, but I see a lot of commenters disagree with that, so we shall see, lol.
Omg I didn't think I'd go for a summer bug, but they're so CUTE together!! Even if they just stay besties <3
Amazing story!
I absolutely love their dynamic!
And how Tia is too invincible, forcing Chrissy to have to deal with her cutesy shenanigans XD
I especially enjoyed that small moment when Chrissy felt the amorous energy and Tia's feelings for the mosaic!
I love this! I can't wait to see more of it and how things develop further between them!
Absolutely adore this series and I'm so happy to see it continued! Phenomenal work Leech, seems like Chryssie might be slowly developing feelings? She didn't immediately try to wound a hurt Celestia and it's been fun to see her character progress.
I absolutely adore Tia simulating a fight to let Chryssie save face. Seems like Sunbutt understands Buggo better than Chryssie realizes.
Excited for the next installment, thanks so much for sharing Leech!
Adorable
You know, besides the adorableness that I find quite charming, the surprisingly large vocabulary in this short story leaves me fascinated.
I may or may not have downloaded this story for word learning…
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> large vocabulary
This is what happens when you take someone who reads prolific amounts of high-fantasy, sci-fi, and Lovecraft and put them to work writing pony
I am absolutely addicted to this series! I can only begin to wonder how things will unfold from here! Kinda makes me want to see how a "stranded" plotline in this series would work out! Also I concur that your vocabulary is impressive and these two have some of the most endearing, wholesome, and adorable interactions I've ever seen EVER.
Very nice
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She's diabolically benign!
Any word on a follow-up to this?
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There are plans to continue this, yes
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Yay!
These stories are just beautiful. Celestia is working her way to "putting a ring on it", I just know it!
I bet Chrysalis is already very tempted to get back on vacation...
Chrysalis: "Okay, who is in change here again?"
That... doesn't sound so bad actually.
Let's be honest: would you really prefer doing it the Luna way?
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
But I still have questions:
Like did Chrysalis follow Celesta's request?
Do the guards and servants get regular snacks from now on?
When was Pharynx allowed to use regular armor again?
These ship fics being sandwiched between a bunch of smut is pretty amusing. Not that it's a problem given this story is too cute and this ship is underrated as hell.