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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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Well, that was f:yay:king hot:twilightblush:

i loved it. i love the idea that as the Princess of Love Cadance urges and approves of Shining exploring his sexuality. Sombra as a former villain makes it even more taboo. can i suggest another villain for Shiny? Discord. you could make a series of SubbyShiny with dom reformed villains. Flim and Flam come to mind to. ooh! they could b a chapter for SluttySpike! sorry im babbling.

Ooh, this is nice to see when I first wake up on Canada Day. Thanks!

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I know it's been 15 years or so since I lived up by the border, but I reckon you're a month early, aren't you?

That touched me in all the right places o///o

Great fic, I love the sort of amusement sombra has towards the ponies fleeing from him at the moment, thought it was funny.

Sombra’s eyes narrowed on him with a grin as he said firmly. “Or I’ll jerk you off with my magic right here where everyone will see. And considering the fact that your wife is close by, I doubt you want her to see that, and then end up explaining how many times I fucked you behind her back.”

Well... someone's still a piece of shit.

Shining closed his eyes and took a deep, shameful breath. After a few seconds, he exhaled before feebly looking his Tyrant in the eyes. “S… Sombra is my King, and I… ”
Even with his cock throbbing, the Prince cringed as he said out loud, “I love… ch-cheating on my wife for him.”
While Shining shuddered in overwhelming shame, Sombra’s toothy grin remained as wide as ever, clearly happy with the blushed Prince’s naughty admission. However, he still licked his lips and made one last order. “Say that last part again~”
Shining winced guiltily before opening his muzzle. “I… I l-love cheating on my wife...”

A massive piece of shit...

....

Wow, that ending. Hahaha, top marks. I did hate Sombra playing the "Affair Card" over and over, but overall his venting of pent up villainy did add a delicious tension to the eroticism. Another great M/M, and they are so far and between. If I had the money I'd commission you rewrite a few on this site that could've been down so much better. Nice job.

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I know, right? That ending made this story. I was thinking, Sombra's really underestimating Cadance here. I mean, does he really think she doesn't know what buttsex sounds like? Or for that matter, her own husband's orgasmic moaning?

Then she knew all along. Perfect.

That ending though.

jxj
jxj #9 · Jun 3rd, 2017 · · ·

Wow, that was amazing.

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dude your Canadian how could you goof that up
you are a month off buddy

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Because I’m dumb.
Seriously, I make that mistake every other year. :twilightblush:

Meanwhile, Shining’s muffled groans grew louder as his muzzle went up and down Sombra’s shaft at a faster pace. The Tyrant started to bite his bottom lip while leaned against the bathroom wall, thrusting his hips in and out of his pet’s wet maw while groaning deeply. Even though that sign outside made sure that nopony tried to come in here, Sombra pondered out soundproof this restroom really was to the ballroom outside. As the sounds of Shining’s slurps and guttural groans echoed in the bathroom, a mischievous grin began to grow across the former King’s muzzle as a naughty idea sprang into his head.

you mean how soundproof

That was a good read. The bit at the end made it all the better. Shining's a double agent!

I hope this gets a sequel; this was both extremely cute and hot.

This was a great read, I always love Shining over Shining. I hope you will keep up with more of that

Gdammit V... Why do you always have to write the best frikken smut.

It's always so well written and believable.
(and I kinda like being shining in your stories too)

Time for me to Patreon i guess

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