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This is very interesting. I LOVE IT!!!!
Please update as soon as you can.
Pinkie taking care of a baby? Good luck with that, Rainbow.
As a whole, this was a nice start. Definitely continue with this one.
You have earned a track.
FAVORITING
I have been waiting for this.
Rainbow Dash XDDDDD You killed the baby on the FIRST DAY? Go to hell! XDDDDD
Jk, this so awesome and funny! Can't wait for more!
Now here is my level of panic for...
Adagio(Boss) and Fluttershy(guilty punchbag ready to fight back)
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can't wait to finish.
Continue with this. It's funny. 9.5/10
When Pinkie's your mom, you better be scared.
Hmm, interesting. Twilight and Sunset taking care of a baby, why didn't I think of that? I'll track it for now.
Thank my lucky everything that I never had an assignment like this!
This describes my thoughts:
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This reminds me of an episode of Batman Beyond.
6075479 lol
I didn't even read it yet and I liked it! YAS! Sunlight forever!
EDIT: That was awkward...
That sounds like a really good drink name...
SOLD!!!
...there HAS to have been a better way for Cheerilee to phrase that. Unless she just hates being a teacher THAT badly...
Except that a same-sex marriage can NEVER result in an accidental/unwanted pregnancy on its own. Again, Cheerilee's presentation of her lesson plan is BADLY flawed.
I want to like this, because I like the idea of Twilight and Sunset bonding over the dreaded baby project. However, the execution is rushed, haphazard, and sloppy, and the entire beginning part with Cheerilee needs an overhaul to correct the points I mentioned above.
Still, I'm tentatively tracking this for now. I really think you should slow down, go back and rewrite this first chapter to even out the pace and fix the crippling issues with the opening.
6075826 thank you. I'll be sure to fix everything.
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If I were you, I wouldn't worry about the "two guys" part, because while they can't have babies together, they can adopt. This whole lesson is, assumingly, about learning how to look after a baby, not who gives birth and what not. They could've just adopted, so I don't think you need to worry about that. But it would be good to rephrase what Cheerilee said first, and then that would make the thing she said next make more sense.
Callin' it now, best siren and the shyness are gonna get caught making out like horny teens, and receive the highest grade in the class. This is my prediction, because it sates my needs for more DagiShy.
Back on topic lovely little slice of life idea! I'm pretty excited to see this one roll out!
i'm gonna love this, oh and Adagio and Fluttershy, what would they name there daughter... and you know it will be, Adagio would want her to take after her mama (her)
hmmm, there are so many names... i would think for her last name, Fluttershy would try to voice something in the line of her choices. so if Adagio is strong about having a musical name... it would have to be gentle music.
Canary would be a great choice
Harmony would also be good
Melody is also good
and the last one i could think of, is Viola
That doesn't really seem like the attitude she should have. The purpose of the baby assignment is to prepare you for having kids someday, not scare you off of them.
Cheerilee: "Girls, do you want me to pretend like I still have hope, or save us all a lot of time and just give you an F now?"
Are we going to see Aria and Sonata in this?
Good start, try not to get to much into the cliche teen-drama feeling of muchiness though, that would kill pretty much all of your credibility as fast as a redneck surprising his wife sleeping with his black slave in the 1700
This story suggest an interesting thing about this human equestria. Cheerilee's speach about accidental pregnancy and then the fact that a guy says "what if two guys gets paired" but there is no raised eyebrows about two girls pairing... that HAS to mean that two girls CAN impregnate each other!
I like it. the frank approves.
6076546 yeah. Everyone's pretty much in this story.
Who's Rory?
I've been looking forward to this. I love how all the 'couples' interact.
I don't think that random selection criteria works the way you've written it. It would only work that way if, say, the class was already divided into halves, one half had their names written down, the others would then draw a name, and you would have an spousal configuration.
As it is, while Applejack pulled Rarity's name from the bowl, Rarity herself would have pulled a name too. Which is not guaranteed to be Applejack's name. In a class of thirty kids, assuming Applejack is the first, and Rarity is the second, there is only a one in twenty-nine chance that Rarity would pull Applejack's name to have the corresponding pair.
While statistically unlikely, it is possible. But for an entire class? Astronomically impossible odds. Well, maybe that is a bit of hyperbole, but still, very unlikely.
As it is written, either they pulled a name, and found out it was already taken, or the class was divided into halves, as mentioned before. Your method works well for a secret santa 'pairing', because there is no actual pairing involved. Or the pairing is not exclusive. For an exclusive pairing, you'd have to change the way you've set up the randomization.
Fluttershy gets paired with Adagio, and then never seen again!
Seriously though, what name did they pick?
6076847 Aurora.
Applejack? *puts hand on her shoulder* Welcome to fatherhood.
Craine...
6077548 I'm getting to them haha
6077129 oh. i see your point. I'll fix that.
6076847
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Sorry, couldn't resist
6077644 I'd just have Cheerilee grab two names at a time from the fishbowl to determine pairs.
6077802 Favorite scene in the reboot. Just gotta say it.
I'm envisioning Fluttershy working with the Adagio from This fic. Her "eeep"ing just made it for me (despite the fact that Fluttershy eeps an average of 500 times a story. srsly, no hyperbole).
The students must be wondering what sort of shows Cheerilee's been watching when they notice that she didn't make any heterosexual pairings at all (we obviously don't know anyone outside of the main group, but I'm envisioning a very awkward class of people uncomfortably looking at each other and shuffling around uncomfortably.
Anyways, as an aside, I hate that baby assignment. Even if I've never actually done it, the idea of it creeps me out.
6078010 You read sucker for a cute face too?? That's why i paired up fluttershy with adagio!
6078017 It's criminally adorable.
Looking those exact words up on Google images does NOT result in the author.
Awesome
6078226 oh god what are the odds
6077555 Why?
6078359 Aurora... Rora... Rory.
I want one of the pairings name the kid "Banana Republic".
Oh, and the rewrite improved the story.
6078017 That story really is amazing, and I'm excited to see what you do with the S.S. ShyDagio
came here because of fallout new vegas lol
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... I can't believe I thought it would be a good idea to see what actually came up. Some warning next time? Sheesh, now I have some history to delete. I blame you
6078512 That's a bit of a stretch don't you think? Where did is start? (if you know like a past story or something)
Ahhh, the classic baby assignment. I'm glad you mixed up the girls. Makes for a really interesting story. Can't wait to see where this one goes.