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MyLittleGeneration


Don't let people stop you from using creativity. Some may be bad, some may be dreadful, but that's the thing with creativity. You create ways to make it even better. That's the creative truth.

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At Canterlot High, Rainbow Blitz, the new kid in school, goes through his new life, since his parents died. Now, he has to make new friends. And one of those friends? A tomboy named Rainbow Dash. He talks to her, and they become friends. Then, they start to hang out, then forming the most awesome couple there has to be!

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Fan Without A Face
Charles Spratt!

Art: JaquelinDreamz!

Chapters (20)
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Comments ( 180 )

r63 shipping? Meh, I liked it.

6107844 Many thanks. I hope this isn't a fail. I just seem to like this rule 63 couple very much.

6107849 It's not without flaws, but I'd give it a 6/10.

6107864 Do you know any good proofreaders that can help? I'm kinda scared and alarmed right now.

I really like where this is going. I want to see how blitz would react if rainbow dash or her friends found out about his brother's nickname for him.

Enjoyed. And looking forward to more chapters!

6108383 Many Thanks! I do believe I need a little fix with proofreading, so that my story gets slightly better. Still, you are awesome. #StayAwesome

I do not know if you have any comments on your story yet, however, I personally liked it, for me, the mark of a good author is a story that can draw me in, yours made that mark, so, not only did you take an upvote from me, but you got hung on my Favorites list.

Only comment I can make is there were some issues with Grammar, but beyond that, I really did enjoy the story, going to upgrade you to my readers choice level.

6108633 not too bad to start off. A few grammar issues but not too serious.:twilightsmile:

Aside from the fact that you switch tenses constantly, it's not too bad, from a grammatical point of view. It's certainly interesting, so... you have that. Anyway, I just finished editing the first chapter. It should be in your PM box soon. Cheers :pinkiesmile:

Im down cant wait for future updates

I'm pleased with what I'm seeing so far.

What kind of motorbike does he drive?

Wow, I'm surprised at the views to be honest. :twilightoops: Goin pretty fast. Also, don't forget to check out my other stories, too. :twilightsmile: It would be very much appreciated, so please, if you may, do so if you haven't already.

Hmm.

Not...bad, actually.

I'm pleasantly surprised at the quality of this story. It's not the best, of course, but it's pretty enjoyable.

Pretty interesting character, Rainbow Blitz. Reminds me of Batman. (Then again, I've been watching a lot of Arkham Knight vids lately; Batman's on my mind.)

You have my upvote and my Tracking.

6148899 I love Mr. Pyg in Arkham Knight. Don't have game, though. But thanks for review. :twilightsmile:

This sarcasm line though:

By the way, we have these things called breath mints. Try using them sometime.

I really like where this is going

need I say more...

6149491 I honestly think Charles made that one. :twilightblush:

Need next chapter! Must! Have! Rainbow dash's! Back story! With! Rush!

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The character can ride any bike you want, i mean my OC has the powers of ghost rider and he rides a Harley Davidson sportster 48. You could have your guy ride a GXR, a CBR double R, a Honda magna, or even a Harley. Take your time and find which bike you think you would ride, then use that as the characters bike. It will bring you closer to the character and you will gradually put more and more passion into the character.

Mm it appears the author loves Gatorade.:derpytongue2:

I do not like Gatorade.

...I'm dead, aren't I? Yep, very dead. I just signed my own trip to ten feet underground and in a nice suit.

6216625 Your not alone. I don't hate it but I rarely drink it.

you should introduce Twilight in the next chapter.

6216602 I drink plenty of the stuff. It's awesome. :rainbowdetermined2:

6216602 great stuff keep up the good work. Love the cover art.

Wow... :pinkiegasp: *gasp* oh my celestia I love this story so much x :twilightblush: you probably get this alot but..... :applecry: when's the next chapter..... :pinkiesad2: .... anyhow :pinkiehappy: GREAT CHAPTER AND GREAT STORY X :raritystarry: :rainbowkiss:

Well, this is embarrassing, considering that I'm the one who originally edited this dang thing, but... I noticed a couple of errors I missed the first time:

“What about you? What’s your name" I asked her.

Missing question mark after name.

"Trust me, it only gets better! When the events come, it'll be the best of the best!" Pinkie exclaimed with a wide grink,

What the heck is grink?

Why did Dash hate Rush with such a burning passion.

Missing question mark again.

Sorry bout that :twilightblush:. Cheers :pinkiesmile:

6316132 But hey, doesn't mean I'm eliminating you. :twilightsmile: You rock!

6316150 Thanks. Would you mind fixing those few grammar errors I pointed out for me? I'd do it myself, but... well, as I said before, I'm not a hacker.

looking forward to the next chapter!! :twilightsmile:

once I got the controls down, I'd have a field day with that class. but if its PG to mildly PG-13 rated, I'm screwed. I never was nor have I ever been good about filtering out expletives, then again I never really bothered to.

I love DashBlitz!! Please continue !

Say just a suggestion! Since all the players are mostly boys until now! There should be a part where the boys are happy because there is a girl now!

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo things are getting good!! :rainbowkiss:

Why do i feel like Rainbow Blitz would ride a ducati streetfighter 848? Speaking of which, are you going to have a chapter where Rainbow Blitz uses his bike?

When will the next chapter be out?

Im surprised this isn't more popular, it's really good! :rainbowkiss:

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