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Fuck. Known one day as 'Mistress Spectrum'.

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Twilight wants to learn how to play guitar and Sunset is her only option. But Sunset has a little problem about it. She really can’t teach anything when Twilight keeps being so… adorkable. Things escalated quickly. And Sunset could only blame the adorable girl, she was a dork.


Title inspired of course by: The Rolling Stones - It's Only Rock 'N Roll (But I Like It)
This is a gift for my amazing friend and editor (yes a second gift because I could) VitalSpark, that is doing 35 years in June 1!
Edited by Exterminate Regenerate, thank you very much guy!

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Gaah! Too cute! Im probably gonna go on a pancake and bacon binge now :pinkiehappy:

Let me guess... Maud's favorite song is a certain song by Bob Dylan?

Thank you so much! I love it! :pinkiesad2:

Sunlight is best ship. :twilightsmile: (why does this site still have no Sunset icon for me to put beside her?)

6039279 :rainbowhuh:

6039347 Congrats this will be put in my page

6038583 Yes :rainbowlaugh:

6038316 I love the smell of bacon and pancakes by the morning :heart:

6039759 sorry, my tablet fucked up and posted and registered a click to post a comment even though I didnt click it.

6038849 That's all you deserve and more. If I could I would give you a real present tomorrow :twilightsmile: Always remember yourself of how many your awesome :rainbowkiss:

6039759 The adorkableness is strong with this one. :derpytongue2:

So adorable, I love Sunlight stories :heart:

Typo: "It feel really good sometimes."

At first I thought it was pony Twilight in the story and then when I read this:

Sunset had been friends with Twilight for a while since she came to the school, she always said she reminded her of someone. Actually all of Sunset's friends and Flash Sentry said she reminded them of someone. Twilight didn’t really understood who, but after doing some search she had some answers for it. Really weird ones. Of course she found all the answers for her questions stupid and physically impossible. A talking pony from an alternate dimension… She was one hundred percent sure that that was impossible and it never happened. It was just things from her head.

I was like "OOOHHHHH! I'm such a dumbass! XD"

It was good and rather cute.
~Tobben

“No, it’s by The Rolling Stones actually, Maud always listens to it when we hang out at Pinkie’s house,”

Really, Sunset takes these kinda things for granite, especially rock and roll.
Your desc said you had bad puns up your sleeve.
I respect that.

6078238 I warned you. But this came from a kind of old comic from past year. I blame the person-who-I-don't-remember-the-name-now! :moustache:

too fluffy :applejackunsure:
now I have nothing against fluff, and I read it knowing that it was going to be fluff, but I dont think you made either of them awkward enough
i mean, these are two of the most awkward characters in the fandom! and they're bound to be super awkward with each other :twilightsheepish:
but hey
it was still good :twilightsmile:

Not as good as Missing Piece. Not nearly as good, in fact. A lot of the issues I saw in MP were here, but exacerbated a decent deal. S'pose that means you improved in the two months between them, though.

I'll check out a few of the other things you've written as well. Let's call it returning the favor.

Its pretty good has some weird wording in some places but its still good.
well done.

It feel really good sometimes.

Felt?

but other than that. This was really cute. I would have liked it to be a bit more buildup behind their feelings but still this was good ^~^

I've been reading your work for a bit now, and I have to say something. I think you might have a slight obsession with leather jackets and motorbikes :P.

7418996 Girls with leather jackets and motorbikes are great, okay? Don't stare at me like that :twilightblush: Well, Sunset does has that jacket and the motorbike thing simply came from Long Road to Friendship, 'cause... af, that fanfic is my favorite :3

But in fact it wasn’t okay. It was bad, very very bad. And at same time good and amazing. Twilight Sparkle was coming to Sunset’s home to learn how to play a guitar in some minutes. If you weren't Sunset Shimmer then you won’t be worried, but Sunset was freaking out in her mind. She was going to stay all alone with Twilight. Trying to teach her. Teaching the most beautiful girl in the school would be hard work for her, even more so since she was her crush.

I hope sunset shares this with twilight soon since it be best to.

But everyone's got a heart and Sunset was no exception to that, everyone has to love someday. Then Twilight came to the school. It was amazing how she was so different, but at same time like Princess Twilight. She still loved her anyway. Sunset wanted to confess to Princess Twilight, but she was gone. Luckily, Twilight was there for her.

Imo sci twi is a better girlfriend choice for sunset.

Sunset always had a hard time with her feelings, even more so when it was with Twilight. And Sunset wasn’t really ready to say something to her about it, she was almost sure Twilight would go on a date with Flash Sentry in some days. He asked her. Meanwhile Sunset just watched it, she knew she didn’t have a real chance with the girl, not at all. But doing that, Sunset felt like a coward hiding the truth; maybe it was better like that. After all Twilight from this world wasn’t completely like the other, she didn’t like that.

In the end sci twi only found flash as a friend instead of a girlfriend like it is for him and princess twilight. Which is perfectly find imo.

She walked downstairs, the house was quiet as always. Sunset didn't live with anyone, after all her parents were back in Equestria and she was alone there. She just hoped Twilight didn’t ask about it. Explaining that you are actually a pony from another dimension is obviously kind of hard for any person. Sunset finally opened the door to see Twilight standing there with a smile, “Hi, Twilight. You look-” She observed the girl before completing her sentence, Twilight was wearing a soft little purple dress and a pair of black flats plus her classical nerd glasses and ponytail, “Amazing today! You didn’t really have to get dressed up like that to come here, it isn’t like we're gonna do anything important. I’m just going to show you how to play a guitar,” Sunset said kindly, but she really wasn’t wanting to complain about it.

She's gonna have to tell her everything eventually.

Twilight gave a little giggle and walked in, “Thanks, Sunset.” She blushed and stirred her hair with one of her fingers and Sunset widened her eyes. Why the heck does Twi always have to do this when someone like me or… Trixie or anyone like that gives her a compliment? My heart's gonna explode if she does that one more time . “You are very kind to me, but Rarity was in my house and she helped me out with these. You know how she is about these sort of things, even when she isn’t the one wearing it.”

That explains why she came in that fancy dress.

“Sun, you're doing it again.” Twilight stopped playing the guitar, “You didn’t even start the music. What is happening with you today?” Twilight frowned. Twilight could swear Sunset was nervous because of her, but she wasn’t really that important. Silly Twilight, you like her but that doesn’t mean she will like you. Unfortunately…

Huh, looks like it'll be an easy go for them to confess their feelings for each other now.

Before Sunset could say something Twilight approached her and gave her a soft kiss on the mouth. It wasn’t a long kiss, it took a minute. But for Sunset it was the longest minute of her life. “You don’t even need to say it.” Twilight stroked Sunset’s cheek with a smile on her face, now her cheek was redder than Twilight’s. “I knew since some weeks ago. It is really good having a love expert in your house sometimes…”

Good for you twilight! Sure did catch me off guard but proud she finally did it. :twilightsmile:

“Cadance? She- Oh damn…” Sunset crossed her arms looking away.

Wow, she knew all along. Didn't see that one coming.

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