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Brawney Hooves


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Clay has always looked up to his mother Rainbow Dash, even though they aren't related by blood. Yet he can't help but feel that he could only truly belong with her if he was a pegasus instead of an earth pony. Clays obsession with wanting to fly will send him on a journy he never thought possible and teach him that family doesn't have to be blood deep.

This is my first fanfic, give advice and critacism, but please go easy.

Special Thanks to Carnelian for the cover art. And my brother for getting me into fanfiction.

This story was proofread by Tsubaki Rehooved and BookPlayer

MLP: FIM is owned by Hasbro and the HUB

Listen to the audio reading by Mr.Fail55 aka zmuscle

Connected stories are:

Wings for a Pony: Becoming Mommy

Wings for a Pony: Dinky's Sky

Wings for a Pony 2

Chapters (31)
Comments ( 1246 )

Blood is only as deep as you can spill from your enemies :pinkiecrazy:

Look...what you did here with semi-colons? There's really no other way to describe it other than rape. You RAPED this poor little semi-colon. What did it ever do to you to deserve being put through this kind of pain?
Two suggestions:
First, take a remedial English course until you know what punctuation marks are supposed to be used for.
Second, take a creative writing class so you know how to show, not tell.

There's so much more I'm missing, but I can't do this anymore.

what will happen tomarrow

A very heartwarming story. Look forward to more of it.

This story has a special place in my heart, and I hope by the end of it you will have one too.:pinkiesmile:

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I took a look back and realized that there is a semi-colon issue but it is layered down from when I first proofread it, so it is a little better. When I go through the rest , I'll make sure that they get used less

Great story, it's really cute. Can't wait to see where it goes!

You know, being a mother changed Dash for the better. I'm sure parenthood does that to people.:pinkiesmile:

SO FREAKIN' ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!

appon reading this i think something wonderful will happin followed by a calm time then a huge shitstorm :trixieshiftright:

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WHY YOU BE MEAN? THIS IS PONIES!!! YOU BE NICE OR BE SENT TO MOON!!!

well this feels oddly familiar....my little dashie anyone?:trixieshiftright:

I'll admit my little Dashie is partly responsible for this story, but I'm not trying to copy it. I love my little Dashie and have the utmost respect for the author. I know it looks the same now but give it time and you'll see that its not.

wait he isnt a grounded pegasus is he

who wants to go on a manhunt for the bastard that disliked this?

Thank you FireFlash13231, but thats not nessecary, love and tolerate bronies. I thank you for your support though.:rainbowdetermined2:

576064 just overreacting. I'm devoted to the awesomeness that is RBD. Your story impresses me! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm just waiting for my proofreader to send it back I want it up as much as you guys.:twilightsmile:

Ok everypony I just recived word that chapter 4 can be expected around Monday or Tuesday:pinkiesmile: I know you all want to see more sooner, but my proofreader has work of his own so we all just have to wait. I hope this at least helps a little.

588288 Guys I appreciate your love for the story I really do I'm touched. But going on a man hunt wont make those dislikes disapear. The best thing you can do is read the story as it gets updated and give me feedback. I as a brony am going to follow our code "Love and Tolerate the fuck out of you"

>>rainbowdashderp: Im glad you see that the guy who disliked this has no idea what good Rainbow Dash fanfics look like.

>>Brawney Hooves: I totally understand the tolerance for dislikes, but im still annoyed that anyone disliked this. you rule, brawney hooves!:rainbowkiss:

590593 You guys are great.:twilightsmile: Its nice to see someone like my story with a passion. I've done stories for school, but noone has ever reacted so strongly to my work. I apreciate it and I hope to have the next chapter up very soon, and I'm sorry its taking so long.

590721 no problem, as long as you put it up when its done! cant wait!

this is making me daww as much as my little dashie did:pinkiesad2:

595776 You have no idea how happy I am to hear you say that.:twilightsmile:

Haha im glad your happy now make me happy and keep typing this story:P

597223 I'll try to get it up tonight.

man that was to cutesey i urgh .........diabetes keep writing this is awsome

Damn Sky Tearer is an asshole

ohhh sky is so dead

Sky Tearer is screwed now, you don't take RD's child's poster of the Wonderbolts and get away with it.

Poor RD lost her chance with Soarin. But hey, there's plenty of other good stallion candidates for RD's mate. There probably at least a few Wonderbolts who are males :rainbowkiss:

I must have more

I already sent the next chapter, so now I just play the waiting game.601829

ME GUSTA :rainbowkiss:
ME GUSTA :rainbowkiss:
ME GUSTA :rainbowkiss:
ME GUSTA :rainbowkiss:
ME GUSTA :rainbowkiss:
*read the part about sky terror*
@#$%$^^%%$ no me ^%$#%$# gusta
sky terror should be make in to either a rainbow or some cupcakes man what a #!@% he is an @$$$%^&*#&@)$%
that pony is going to #&!! pony #&!!
this story is great but sky terror *loads shotgun* is to be terminated in the worst most painful way possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!

601988my reaction reading that comment
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Both Soarin, Spitfire, and Dash laughed.

Hate to be that guy, but both shouldn't have been used there.

However, this is still one of the best fics I have ever read, keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

602242 Its fine I can take critasism, and I'm glad that you like the story.:twilightsmile:

this is good but i cant keep thinking what happened to scootaloo

602281 What do you mean what happened to Scootaloo?

well it feels weird she isnt in a story about rainbow dash i would expect her to stil be around her but its your story i guess im just used to fanatic scootaloo stories

602401 The cutie mark crusaders arent really part of my story. They make a small appearance in the next chapter, but I will try to squeeze them in later.

Nopony is gonna mess with Clay :flutterrage: RBD is sooooo gonna get him for that.....:rainbowwild:

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