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How far would you go to save someone you love? That's the question that Clay must answer as he faces a gauntlet of physical and mental toutures. Clay is now a proud father of two ponies, and is trying to connect with his adopted daughter Evening Star. A gifted unicorn filly who has unstable magic. As he tries to prove to her that he loves her with all his heart however Evening Star is abducted by a unicorn cult, Clay along with his wife Firefly and his friends Dinky and Sky Tearer must face an army that threatens not only Equestria, but the very way unicorn's, pegasi, and earth ponies co exist. Clay makes a vow to bring his daughter back to her familly and stop the uprising...no matter what the costs.

The official sequel to Wings for a Pony.

Warning: It is highly recommended that you read Wings for a Pony first for full comprehension. There will be spoilers for the first story if you have not read it.
Proofread by Starfall and Sharky
Special thanks to Concier for providing the cover art and to cmdrhellyea for the original cover

For Wings for a Pony 1 click here: Wings for a Pony

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 101 )

Glad it's back up! :pinkiehappy:

2154562:yay: glad you can hit us in the feels again

2154591 I think this one defiantly will.

2154562

hey um the links are broken in the description just wanted to let you know

2154609 They should be fixed now

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"that's sweet, reminds me of how your son acted"
"yeah but Jack was scared of his inability to do magic bacause he was a Pegasus"

Welcome back Brawny, excellent feels.

2154639 Happy to see the story back again :twilightsmile: Looking forward to the future of it.

Good to see the story continue. :twilightsmile: And even on a different profile you still know how to smash my feels.
:twilightoops: Whoa, Clay... laying down the law there...

As everypony started eating Comet couldn’t help but notice some tension in the air. Leaning closer he whispered to Star, “Did I miss something?”

Biggest missing of event since Luna at the wedding.

2156603 Clay has really matured over the years. Being raised by Rainbow, gaining magical wings and taking on a Timber wolf will do that.

(clapping) it was beautiful, I love it.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::yay::raritystarry:

2159853 And hopefully it will continue.

:pinkiegasp: IT LIVES!!!!!!!!! :yay:
*pats chest* Yep, my feels are smashed. You've still got it. :twilightsmile:

That was an emotional roller coaster for me.
...
And I loved every second of it.

I am so happy about this update! I love the character building, this was such a touching chapter. :pinkiesad2: Thank you and hope you get the next one out quick.

2723323 Glad you liked it. I'm sorry the updates are taking so long, but Starfall can only do so much. But hopefully the next one will be up sooner.

*sniff* man, the feels.

*sob*"give me a moment"
"pansies, the both of you"

Oh come here you.
"don't you even...gah" *hugs* "I hate you so much"

So Misty Fly blacked out? or did one of her wings just give it out on her? Then again at the speed she was going a simple breeze could screw up her flight pattern.

Too many feels in this chapter.

2794484 It is my greatest weapon!

umm just to make it not confusing why don't you get the chapters from the first one and put on this one?

2809961 I was hoping to get my old profile back and then move these chapters to the old one. But since that is seeming less and less likely, I guess I really should.

What happened to your old profile

2885652 couldn't log back in. And couldnt reset the password.

I may have a suggestion you could talk to an admin about it tell them you cant get into your account tell them the email account attached to the profile and ask them to reset the pasword and send you an email with the new one then you can go back in and fix the password and update the story aswell

2886632 The admins rarely talk with me. But I might try soon. I just want to focus on the stories for now.

Hate to be brash about this but that is kinda their job admins exist to ensure the smooth and continued operation of any website or web game they have codes or access rights to both help the public and inforce the rules.now since this is a free site they aren't obligated to help but that is what their here for to ban trouble makers and help the many grateful patrons of fimfic

Good to see you got the chapters onto this version of the story. :pinkiehappy:
Let the D'awws reign supreme!:rainbowkiss:

2956605 Took me all night but I did it.

this update is worth the wait

This was nice

*pats down body* Yep, d'awws have been fired. You haven't lost your touch.
One thing that kept confusing me though was the first part, as even though Bolt and Star are going to school it sometimes says they're heading home.

2973966 I'll fix that. Was feeling a little under the weather when I posted this and I had to make a few changes.

Cute romances and a very funny Rarity

And thats the art of the dress i wonder where this will end up i can see a very stressed germane in the near future i also believe he may end up as a pin cushion i mean model

This story....man......you,you get dem feels out,DIS BETTER HAS HAPPY ENDING

(Me at beginning) OH OH,what is happening here?:rainbowlaugh:

DAWWWWWWWWWWWW EVERYWHERE MAN!

sniff that ending of this chapter :heart: and DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

This chapter man this CHAPTER DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW EVERWHERE:twilightsmile:

Ow my Gosh Star in that dream Made me cry :pinkiesad2: as away great story so far keep up the great work.

so may daww and fighting lol great chapter and still loving it keep up the great work

I crying too death right now so sad i need a hug :fluttershyouch: fryfly i feel your pain on the same day :applecry: any ways great chapter keep up the great work :twilightsmile:

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