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Brawney Hooves


Dash loves her son Clay and a has become a respectable mother. But what were things like before she accepted her responsibilities as a parent? How did she react to raising a foal on her own? How did she come to be called mommy?

This is a in between story of Dash raising Clay in Wings for a pony, taking place after chapter 2 and before chapter 3. Read Wings for a pony first before reading this story for full comprehension.

This story was proofread by: Bookplayer

I do not own the image, nor did I draw it. Credit for image goes to UP1TER, Teh Resistance for clean up and coloring.
Credit for altered image goes to Vidaldas.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 205 )

this is quite interesting... not sure how this is going to turn out but i'm willing to read on.

Interesting idea... Rainbow is a mom now :D

Didn't waste any time, did you?

This promises to be a sweet and heartwarming fic. I can't wait for more.

THIS FIC I LIKE IT ANOTHER *smash's laptop*

immediate fave, without even reading yet. I cant believe its here :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::derpytongue2::yay:

675541 :rainbowwild:

Yaaaaaay! dis story! so much d'aww! :twilightsmile:

673573 And I will try to keep the chapters coming. If you havent already please read Wings for a pony for why Clay is in Rainbows care in this story.

YAAAAAAY MOAR DAWWWW'S!!!!!!! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::yay::yay:

also first :3

so much win :derpytongue2:

676966 im in! i has teh twilight sparkle gatling guns :trollestia: (watch s2 e25-26 A Canterlot Wedding to understand)

679608 Just so you know I still dont want the man hunt. I just know that as soon as I saw that dislike I knew what was coming. Also I know what the Twilight gantling gun is.

679615 lolz i knew that. im not derpy or anything...im fireflash! :twilightsmile:

680806 Yes I did I dont want it to begin, but I know I cant stop any of you so I dont care:ajbemused: I just want to post my stories and let people enjoy them, what you readers do afterwards is your business. Honestly though I dont care about the dislikes, no matter how good or bad a story is people will hate it or like it so I dont need a manhunt.



682768>>682780 Thats the reaction I was hoping for. Also don't forget to read Wings for a pony to understand the events that lead up to this story. Chapters 1-2


688197 Yeah this story will be done soon so I've been working on getting it finished. Dont worry though I'm still working on Wings for a Pony.

This is good. Continue this story, since I am interested to see where things go from here.

692890 I will just a few more and it will be done.

692894 I look forward to reading them. And seeing how the plot develops in your other story.

My previous statement, from last chapter, is also true here. Very true. For a recap:
*Inhale deeply*D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
*Inhale again*wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:heart:
RD makes a surprisingly good parent.

692915 Quite the lung capacity. Do you find this cute or sad?

692931 Cute. Very very cute. And that's great. And thanks for admiring my lung capacity, but that trick isn't often used on guys. I'm flattered, though.:trollestia:
Also, not my real lung capacity.

692945 I'm sorry, but are you a pegasister or a brony?

692950 I personally think Brony should apply to both genders. But to everyone else, who does distinguish, Brony. And I realize now, I shouldn't have been flattered. That is deeply embarrassing.:twilightblush:

692966 Sorry I try not to offend women with "Bro" of any kind

692974 All right then. Meanwhile, I am going to rid the shame and embarrassment from my mind.

692994 I wont say what will happen in the next chapter, but lets say that it will be on Luna's favorite day.

693020 Right. But for my piece of mind, and this goes for everyone, on the matter of the lung capacity thing: Let us never speak of this again.:raritywink:

692894bring on the steam punk is what i keep thinking

Daw. That is all.

693020 You mean Luna's favourite night, right?

697427 Yes thats what I ment to say.:rainbowlaugh: And in regards to chapter 4 now you all know where Clays obsession with flying began.

so much Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :twilightsmile::fluttercry:

sorry, but i gotta do this: “Rainbow, I think might be overthinking this a little.” Twilight said kindly.
there should be a "you" here ^

700166 that was the only even teensy bitty bit that was wrong with anything. this is so dawsome. (sorry lame pun):rainbowwild:

700231 I hope that gives you an idea why Clay is obsessed with flying.

700247 yeah. it made me almost cry. Ive never cried in my life, not even while reading MLD. i was so close though...

700254 I guess that just leaves the question...will he fly in Wings?

700268 Errgggghhhh.....this is the one time i WANT a spoiler and i cant have it :twilightoops::facehoof:

700286 Sorry I want to tell you guys what happens because its taking so long. But it would ruin the story. So we both have to hold on.

I HAVE A IDEA!!! you know tank and his flying machine well...... Clay + Flying Machine = AWESOMENESS!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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