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College-going Brony in CA. New to writing fanfics.


After Ditzy has a cordial meeting with her dear friend Spitfire, a friend who believes her memory to be damaged, their worlds are changed when their friendship is no longer secret. Ditzy begins to remember things about who she used to be, while another, more sinister force has never forgotten who she was...

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Comments ( 163 )

I LOVE IT !!! PLEASE update .. if it's not too much trouble

*ahem* Yes. I mean yes. Here, have an update.


Seriously, I will find you and set you on fire if you do not continue. :twilightangry2:

The press?

"Oh, you mean them root weevils that crawl around popping off cameras in your face?" :derpytongue2:

This is really well done, Poinger. Easily one of my favorite Ditzy Doo fics. :twilightsmile:

Definitely tracking this. Quite a nice read and I love this interpretation of Ditzy (though now canonically Derpy)

FFFFFffffffffffffffffff.....why you gotta leave it at that?

WHATS THE DAGGER FOR!?!?:rainbowhuh: WHAT THE DAGGER FOR!!?!?!?!?!:flutterrage:

Hmmm. A look at a Ditzy who wasn't sort of out of it and kinda klutzy makes her current state.....depressing a bit. About the only good thing I'm seeing coming is that when her enemies show up, Spitfire isn't the only pony that's got her back.

That was a nice chapter, though I'm dreading what happened to Ditzy Doo to damage her so much that she's permanently scatter brained now.

this is bucking awesome I want to read more seriously, if my guess is correct then that unicorn stallion in the previous chapter is probably dinky's father and he was the one who caused ditsy's accident. I think it will be quite interesting to see what he will do.

Oh, Dinky, it doesn't work like that! Fillies... :ajsleepy:

Not only was Flash Bulb stupid in his approach, but I think it's illegal. Exploiting information from a child by gaining their trust under false pretenses, I think it's called.

Five dictionaries gave me that sentence. :unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie:

Origin stories and background for secondary characters? I do so enjoy them when they are done well.
And this is done very well. Congratulations on making the EQD cut.

Hey Poigner, I'm looking to become the official spokes pony for the brony community, can I get your support?

Your Timelord friend, The Baron

Oww....17 weeks since the last update? Hope it's not abandoned...

Oh, nononono. You'll see the actual last edit, not last addition, was June 21. It took a fair amount of editing to get it approved by EQD, so energies were devoted there rather than to writing new parts.

Oh boy! Friendshipping! I always love me a good friendshipping story! :pinkiehappy:

Anywho, I really want to know what it is Derpy, er, Ditz, has forgotten. Time to read more!

Derpy is... legendary? What? :rainbowhuh:

Oh Rainbow Dash... Your outburst was a tad extreme :facehoof: But, at least you made up for it, so it's all good, I suppose.

Anywho, time for backstory! :yay:

Ominous unicorn with dagger is ominous... :unsuresweetie:

That mysterious, ominous unicorn with the dagger still has me on edge... :unsuresweetie:

But this story... I like it. I like it a lot. Well done, sir. I look forward to any updates with eager anticipation :pinkiehappy:

i like derpy dont get me wrong but i wana know who Dinkiy's dad is :derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

This is a brilliant story so far! I'm really loving your take on the best young flier competition. But who was Daggers? :rainbowhuh:

I love this story. I don't normally enjoy Derpy stories, but this one actually has plot as opposed to a sorry pile of self-pity. I was just dragging along until Part 3, when I start reading Spitfire's side of it. I never realized this story wasn't complete so I was expecting a standard accident-during-performance-and-that's-it routine, but I can see that there's much more depth to it. Please continue, I'm really curious!! Also I never thought of Dinky's father and now that end of Part 5 suggests that's him and my curiosity HAS BEEN DOUBLED! :twistnerd:

I caught a few times Spitfire misspelt as Spitifire or Spitifre.

997211:derpytongue2: Derp. Misspellings corrected.

Must find out what happens!!!!!:derpyderp2:

Hmmmmm... Dash would be jelly

Hehe Mr Bulb, 3 hours dungeon :twilightangry2:

... Logic would dictate that he's up to no good....

Ok i love this story and want it too be continued but its been a mouth and 12 days has this story been abandoned or do you just have the worst case of Wright block ever.

Story not abandoned: Part Six to come very soon. See blog post here:This post.

Bingo, the villain has a name-o.....(let's hope they nail the lame-o.)

"plebeian"... oh dear he's not just a bastard he's also a snob.... this is not going to end well... for him

this explains a lot but will next chapter explain how she got her disability and how she got pregnent

very interesting name "slate hooves" I wonder what exactly he did to Ditzy

IT UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

... Did he rape Ditzy? The whole amnesia and pregnancy thing is a bad sign.

I hope the next chapter comes soon and not in a few months, this is a big cliffhanger.

We all knew Ditzy was secretly a great flyer. Hopefully there is some redemption for at the end. I would love to a Sonic Muffin boom.

Yes. No.
I'm liking the introduction of the conflict here. Good times!

I saw this updated in my e-mail and dropped everything to read it

Not gonna lie, I'm very interested in seeing where this goes.

Huza an update. I has forgotten about this story, but reading this I remembered why I stared it. Keep up the excellent work.

good chapter one of the best so far keep up the good work Poinger:twilightsmile:

"Spitfire couldn’t quite manage to keep the resentment out of her voice. 'There

'Nothing happened. I’m fine.'"

u wot m8

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