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The mane six are about to find out hard, and how wonderful, high school can be when love is in the air. There will be crushes, heartbreak, shipping and a whole lot of outright strangeness.

So yea, another story set in a high school. I don't know why but I just really love this setting. The only ship that I will reveal at this point in time is Flutterdash. As always, if you ever notice any spelling or grammar mistakes please tell me.

Special thanks to BronyInvestigator for drawing the cover art. You can see more of their stuff here and here.

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Comments ( 190 )

No idea on what any references are... This appears to be a fast paced Flutterdash story with an annoying amount of references to Dash/Pinkie shipping. :pinkiesick:

the only cool thing from that was Fluttershy walking in on them. That could get interesting...:pinkiegasp:

1627350 I have plans to make this Flutterdash but I needed to set up a dynamic with Pinkie that will come in to play at a later date. The next chapter will be mostly Flutterdash, I promise. :fluttershysad:

YES! IT HAS STARTED! :pinkiehappy:

... And I found corrections that I probably should have found earlier. :facehoof: Hey, in my defence, I was pretty tired when I first saw this. Anyway:

She would always tell Rainbow that if she only did something with it she could be stunning

Could use a comma after it.

“Uh, just a lucky guess. Nice meeting you Twilight Sparkle.”

Maybe a comma after you. Though I suppose it still works fine.

“Please just take one Miss Dash, after all, better safe than sorry right?”

Might work better if it was two sentences. “Please just take one Miss Dash. After all, better safe than sorry, right?”

“Oh, would you look at that, miss prissy princess pants, is finished at the spa.

Consider getting rid of the second comma.

“Strait girl,” Rainbow teased.

I'm not entirely sure, but I'm pretty sure if should be straight.

Rainbow looked around to see a tall girl with blond hair in a plat and a Stetson.

I think it should be plait instead of plat.

But, yeah, first chapter! I must sing about this!
It has beguuuuuuuuuun. And it will continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. As long as authour doesn't go eviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiil. Evilness has serious reprecusioooooooons. Cicatrix keeps singiiiiiiiiiing. And speaking it third persooooooooon. Will forever be bad at making song lyriiiiiiiiiiiiics. And then the mob caaaaaame. How did they get in the houuuuuuuuuuuse? No time for questiooooooons. And then they attaakljdasdfgusfhkusdfh

It was a good muffin

That made me giggle :rainbowkiss:
Still, this is interesting. Keep it up :twilightsmile:

Sounds interesting, will read later.

1634276 Yea... sure... tired... :ajsmug:

1634669 Yea, I giggled writing that. :twilightsmile: Glad you like it.

1635558 I'm glad. :pinkiehappy:

Ok, so I've been away for a couple days so I haven't had very much time working on the next chapter and there's a few other projects I want to tackle as well. I hope to have the next chapter up sometime soon with enough Flutterdash to get the taste of Pinkiedash out of FlutterDash7 and Woolfmaster1337's minds.... :twilightsmile:

Y'know, I always figured that the human version of an unicorn would have a jewel instead of a horn. I can't help but think that the horn would cost one too many t-shirts

1646881 I must make a gag of this in the next chapter... you brilliant, brilliant gag idea person.

This appears to be more and more promising. Keep up the good work. Good humanized Flutterdash is hard to find.
Death by indecent exposure... ah.... the wingboner crack. You pulled that off really well. :scootangel:

If you would like a reward... All I can offer is a sneak peek at chapter 7 in crashing Angels (if you follow and enjoy it...)

1737835 That would be all the reward I shall ever need. :pinkiehappy:

I'm glad the sickening levels of Pinkiedash didn't turn you away.

As for the wingboner crack... when it comes to mocking something I don't really understand I just can't help myself, I'm glad you think I did a good job. It's always nice to know I made a mockery of something skilfully. :twilightsmile:

1737854 Well i normally use the wingboner cracks in my works in chosen spots to (hopefuly) great effect. Especially some of the incoming stuff.

:pinkiehappy: I can think of as just being :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile: because after all... she and Dash don't work at That.... level

1737868 No, I'm not terribly in to the Pinkiedash ship (to say the lest). I have plans for Pinkie but rest assured they don't involve Rainbow.

Reward for the awesome chapter...

1739850 Why thank you. :pinkiehappy: Almost makes me wish I could drive...

1739864 Same here.
I can make you a custom car :)
Choices are...

Aston Martin

Aston Martin DB9 (2004)


Audi A4 3.2 FSI quattro (2004)
Audi TT 3.2 quattro (2003)
Audi A3 3.2 quattro (2003)


Cadillac CTS (2004)


Chevrolet Cobalt SS (2005)
Chevrolet Corvette C6 (2005)
Chevrolet Corvette C6.R (2005)


Dodge Viper SRT-10 (2004)


Fiat Punto (2005)


Ford GT (2005)
Ford Mustang GT (2005)


Lamborghini Murcielago (2004)
Lamborghini Gallardo (2005)


Lexus IS300 (2002)


Lotus Elise (2004)


Mazda RX-7 (1995)
Mazda RX-8 (2004)


Mercedes-Benz CLK 500 (2004)
Mercedes-Benz SL500 (2004)
Mercedes-Benz SL65 AMG (2003)
Mercedes-Benz SLR McLaren (2004)


Mitsubishi Lancer EVO VIII (2004)
Mitsubishi Eclipse GT (2006)


Pontiac GTO (2004)


Porsche 911 Carrera S (997) (2004)
Porsche 911 GT2 (996) (2003)
Porsche 911 Turbo S (996) (2003)
Porsche Cayman S (2005)
Porsche Carrera GT (2004)


Renault Clio V6 (2005)


Subaru Impreza WRX STi (2005)


Toyota Supra (1998)


Vauxhall Monaro VXR (2005)


Volkswagen Golf GTI (2005)

1739877 I don't know if I would recognise any of those but the Dodge Viper SRT-10 (2004) sounds cool. What program did you use to make that car and how did you put Rainbow Dash on it?

1740102 I used Need for Speed; Most Wanted (2005)
To do this you need...
1. The game (get a torrent :p)
2. Bintex 0.4 or higher
3. A photo manipulation program that can modify .dds files. (I installed a plugin for GIMPshop.)

I'll try and make a tutorial next time I make one.

My, what a talented artist who must of drawn that cover for ya XD
Sorry, I couldn't help it XD I don't know why, but I kinid of want to finish reading your work now, Lol. I will make sure to read the second chapter later XD

Came for the Rarijack.
Will continue reading in hopes of more Rarijack. :duck::ajsmug:
Will also continue reading cause I'm really liking this.
I don't mind Flutterdash (not that you care about my opinion) but this story is great so far.
Can't wait to read more.

1741322 Quite right it must have been a very clever and skilful person who drew the cover art for this. I can only pray that one day I shall find out who drew it so I can tell them personally how fantastic it is... :trollestia:

If you do decide to continue reading then all I can say is I hope the story lives up to the cover art. :applejackunsure:

Thnx man, i shall...i'm not much of a yuri guy.l.lbut this isn't focused on like hard core porn, so it's a'ight wi me XD
Btw, i believe i have seen this style on deviantart...i believe his name is Imagamaster4....works with a guy in this group called KiteroMiberei....but that is all i knows....i swears.....except the guy is super generous

Do you know hoe terribly inconvenient reading this chapter was? I'm incredibly busy!
Worth it though!

1769824 Glad you took time out of your busy schedule just to read my little story. :twilightsmile:

:pinkiehappy: This is really cute! I'm liking it so far! :rainbowkiss:

Ooh, so TwiDerp? Twerpy? Interesting pairing idea! I'm down with that. :pinkiehappy: I'd sure like to see where that goes, for sure!

I liked the interaction between Pinkie and Derpy too, having them connect as bakers. That was really nice! :derpytongue2:

1810717 Thank you. :pinkiehappy: I really enjoyed writing the bit where they were talking about baking. It's probably worthy of note that I know absolutely nothing about baking so anything I got write was just random coincidence.

as for Twiderpy... I'm a little sheepish about this but I kinda based the Derpy in my story off the Derpy you wrote in Ponyvile High School... :twilightsheepish: I thought that it was particularly cute that she was calling Twilight by her full name while the others were just calling her Twilight (I know she didn't do that 100% of the time but I thought it would be really cute if she did) so yea, that's why she does that in this story....

1811439 Oh, really? :pinkiehappy: D'awww! I'm so flattered that Ponyville High inspired you! :rainbowkiss: Thanks! Derpy was fun to write for that, and it's fun to make her quirky. Go for it! Have fun with it! :twilightsmile:

Ew Xbox. Although everything else is going along fine.

1816757 Yea, I don't like x box nor do I own one, I have a wii but I didn't think Applejack would be in to wii so I gave her an x box to keep her happy... I also gave her a Rarity to keep her happy... :raritywink:

LoL i thinkbyou should upgrade her to wii as a present from her girlfriend element of generosity with a game of apple bucking by karate kicks!!!

Yeah i want to know those inside jokes that were taken off the story!!!

**faint** flutterdash will be apparent and it'll be a happy time for all... not just apple jack lol

And i LOVE THEM as humans with their wings and horns.
And i do like them in the high school settings.

1832425 That would be kinda cute: "Applejack, dear, I got you a new gaming console that I think you might enjoy." :duck:

I can PM you the jokes that I cut out if you like.

Yea, there really is just something about the school setting that I love.


awesome **winks**

It's "area" not "aria"
Good chapter.

1861548 Thanks for pointing that out, where have I made that mistake? :rainbowwild:

1862867 every time you tried to sell "area"

:pinkiehappy: Awww, this was nice. I liked how you built things up with Rainbow and Fluttershy, to really get them closer together. So it would seem that Dash may not quite know what she truly wants from Fluttershy, aside from the very factor that she does want to be with her. It'll be interesting to see them come closer and develop a relationship. :pinkiehappy:

You're forgiven for the little PinkieDash moment. :rainbowkiss: At the same time, I kind of feel bad for the PinkieDash shippers reading this, because that was a bit of a moment of "Oh, you like this pairing? Here's a little-HA! You don't get any! It's THIS pairing instead!" more than anything. But I see what were you trying to do. :pinkiesmile:

1864052 Wow, maybe I should add that to the list of things auto correct fixes. :twilightsheepish:

1864287 I'm glad you liked it, I really enjoy writing Dash's confusion in all things relationship. I must admit I was kind of worried that I would get told off for having Rainbow's "This is how I found out that I'm gay" story be too much like her "This is how I know Cherry" story from IMBTFOLPO. :rainbowwild:

I'm glad you have seen fit to forgive me for the Pinkiedash start. :twilightsmile:

Hmmm, I hadn't looked at it that way... I know: ATTENTION ALL PINKIEDASH SHIPPERS, I would like to apologize officially for getting your hopes up and smashing them like a light-bulb hitting concrete at the speed of sound. :pinkiesmile:

1864775 XD I don't know what you mean...but I see what you're trying to say. :pinkiehappy:

XD It's all good! :rainbowkiss: It was nice of you to apologize. 8D And even so, on another hand, the cover kind of gives away what's going to happen, so I assume that PinkieDash shippers won't get their hopes up, especially since you do reveal in the description about the pairs. But regardless, good for you! It's just something I myself try to avoid, even when I mention what pairs will be present. :derpytongue2: It's pretty much why I used an OC for a relationship for Rainbow to have in "Perfect On Paper" since I would not be hurting any shippers. :pinkiehappy:

1864871 Yay, another chance to thank my wonderful cover artist. :pinkiehappy: Seriously, awsomest. Brony. EVER.

Hmmm, I can't really see Perfect On Paper working with any of the mane six. It might have worked with Spitfire if you kinda pushed the seriously-projecting-a-convenient-personality-on-an-existing-character thing, but on the whole I think it worked better with an OC anyway.

1864902 You're right about that! The kind of character I needed for Rainbow to play off of was somepony just like her. But also with that "new" smell to her, you know? You're right, none of the Main Six would have worked for that. Spitfire, yeah, maybe, but I also know that DashFire is pretty popular, so I didn't dare hurt the shippers of that. Either way, if I used a canon character, even a background character, I would be hurting SOME shippers. And I honestly didn't want to do that. Especially since it's a prevalent pairing, and then they break up for the pairing I want.

That seems assholish, doesn't it? I know a lot of writers do that and I can understand why! It works for their stories and they can do it well. But yeah, it has that stinging. Because what I do is that I think of it this way, by making it that I'M being teased with FlutterDash (or any other pair I like), and then it ends with another pairing and my favourite pairing breaking up? Exactly.

So, I knew it was a far better idea to create an OC. Someone who, yes, the audience will hopefully like, but also won't see as a huge loss when Rainbow breaks up with her.

I now must find some of this :derpytongue2: paired with this :twilightsmile:. I have called upon all my knowledge of chemistry and really do believe that the lithium and muffin thing is the worst idea in the world. I am also pretty sure that the lithium needs to bond with the vinegar to transfer electrons to make a cation of vinegar. For all I know, I may be wrong. There is still more chemistry to learned by me. But still, this fanfiction is the best. I love it when fanfictions take place in school, especially high school.

1875627 Finally someone uses her name right -.-

Nice chapter, I'm guessing that RD will move in with Fluttershy.

:pinkiegasp: Oh my! So her parents are splitting up? That's kind of sad...and yet, well, sometimes that course of action is just for the best, isn't it? Ooh, and now she's moving out on her own! Yay! Good for her! :pinkiehappy::yay:

Awwww...Rainbow had a sort-of-date with Fluttershy, so cute. :twilightsmile: It really is getting to be clear that she wants her! Not to mention she's so considerate in not forcing her into a relationship too, and not making a move until she's sure Fluttershy wants it too. D'aww. :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

1875627 You know, I've actually only seen two stories that even hinted at Twiderpy before, this seems strange as I happen to thing they'd make a cute couple. Thus I have taken it upon myself to rectify the situation. :pinkiehappy:

1876095 From the tiny amount of reading I did it looked like the unstable part of the reaction was the carbonic acid that is created when the vinegar and bicarb are mixed. However I still have absolutely no idea. I'm working with about three classes worth of chemistry and science here. :rainbowwild: Glad you enjoyed the chapter despite how much it flagrantly disrespected science.

1876283 I don't know about that. I did my reading, as I always do (except for the part where I forgot that Rainbows house actually has been shown in an episode :facehoof:) and I found that, while the characters name was originally Ditzy, it was officially changed as a nod to the fans when they started calling her Derpy. I did consider doing both, as in, "Hi, My name is Ditzy but everyone just calls me Derpy, you can too if you like." but i just thought that was needlessly complicated.

1876594 Yes, if she was male, Rainbow Dash would be quite the gentleman. :rainbowwild: I suppose it could be sad but I know from experience that having your parents split is way better than having them always fighting. :fluttershysad: In that respect; lucky Rainbow Dash. :rainbowlaugh:

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