All I wanted was to do art. That's it! Now for some god forsaken reason, I'm slowly turning into a (rather annoying) pony that got stuck in my head after I had dreamed of it for awhile. Could someone please send me a memo or something? Cause I'm completely lost here about everything and keep getting flashes involving more ponies.
This story is a Canon part of the OTVerse.
I really wanna do a story for this now
Gonna watch the fuck out of this!
Come on and make another chapter please
Augh... finally found this after it got lost in the reorganization of the reorganization of my bookshelves... I need a better system.
Anyway; I'm loving Emi (though for some reason I'm picturing Maximato has a cute and somewhat chubby filly with far too much energy for anyone's good). Emi for Best Brony! Um... Pegasister?
And [redacted] got a cameo~
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5347968 Oh god that picture describes every road trip their family has ever been on.
Hmm, this looks interesting.... I'm gonna follow this story to see where it goes. (upvotes it, faves it, tracks the story, and places it in my bookshelf)
Now please write more. Emi has become my favorite character in the story. I hope it's just as good as the first "human-turned-pony" fanfic I read, which is called "Cool Story, Bro. But It Needs More...Ponies?"
Ooooh, I am LIKING this!
Ooo! Such beautiful wings! You handled the 'Telling the Parent' nicely. To be honest, it's given me a block that seems to have extended to all my authorial allotments and frustrates me to no end... But your chapter also motivated me. (Also need to update the timeline.)
Pinkie makes a semi-decent early warning system. If Pinkie is a-twitching, you'd between be running.
Stuff to say after reading the chapter:
-Oh, Emilia. You and your wacky plan to explain the whole situation to your mom. I like her so much.
-My mom is totally like that.
-You can't beat your own mind, Grent. It knows your every thoughts and how screwed you are.
-Wow. Glad Grent and Emi just went straight to the point and showed off their pony parts right in front of their mom. Glad to see that happening.
-If I were Grent, I would totally be terrified about the fact that I am slowly changing into a pony. There is no telling if the transformation's temporary or permanent, so there is tons of worrying and a lot of fear involved in the situation. Adjusting to a new life as a pony is also easier said than done.
Will this mean that Grent will never see the human world ever again as well? That last quote broke my heart a little.
Anyways, keep it up! I love this story! Emi so freaking hilarious! Time to see how Grent and Emi's adventures will unfold after this chapter.
SHOOP DA WOOP DA WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I used pinkie having a doozy as my cut to equestria in the one I'm working on
If you do not have a pre-prepared plan to acquire a squid and make a dress from English flags within ten minutes of any situation, then you are just not living right.
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His mom gets to Equestria.
As Toms brother.
AHHHHH I LOVE THIS STORY >> FINISH IT <<
is this a five score sidefic? im on the fence with deciding. humans changing into ponies. something about Chicago. what makes me confused is the fact that all ponies are still in equestria in those POV swaps to ponyville. no mention of discord. Is this a sidefic? or an alternate dimension sidefic?
5442002 None of that is accurate. This story is part of the OTVerse, which there is a link to in the description if you want to know more about it. Though, this is a side fic to the that universe. I'm pretty sure that the Admins had banned any more Five Score fics from being made when the flood got to big. I remember seeing a site post about that a while ago.
So Damien's turning into either a griffin or a hippogriff... Neat
Now all we need is earth pony and then yours, mine, and grey's fics have all the big races covered
-Well, this is getting interesting. I wonder what the princesses think about it?
-Maybe he was playing boxing with someone and accidentally punched someone.
-...or maybe not. So that means Damien is turning into a griffon?
-Grent's brain strikes again!
-So the changes are starting to affect the characters' sizes and skin, too.
-Three chapters, three stages of transformations. I wonder what the fourth stage will be like? And I wonder...ack! So many thoughts swimming in my head!
So now we have all four of the characters gathered up: Grent, Emi, Damien, and Crystina. We know that Grent's turning into a pegasus, Emi's turning into a unicorn, and Damien's turning into a griffon or a hippogriff. So will Crystina turn into an earth pony? Hmm.... I'm still excited to see how the story will progress in the upcoming chapters. Keep it up!
YAS MAH NIGGA YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!
The woes of a new anatomy.
Im pissed now that the chapter is over. IT was so good i didnt want it to end!! meow...
5442063 Actually, it was just restricted. I think it was something like complete or >50,000 words, but I could be off with the num8er.
EDIT: 5444494 has told me that it is actually 30,000 words.
~Vriska Serket
5444211 Ah, that makes more sense. Thank you.
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It's actually 30k
This story is simply amazing. Keep up the good work!
I knew she was a crystal pony
Just need an earth pony
5476558 Hah! Totally called it! I should have bet you money!
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How we just need a regular earth pony
Thoughts about chapter 4:
-Glad to see Grent and Damien discuss shortly about watching MLP and liking it.
-The whole world knows about the transformation. Oh crap. This is definitely not gonna go well.
Grent has grown: ears, wings, mane, and a muzzle. Yeah, it's gonna be hard covering up the last part if Grent tries to wander around.
So Damien's turning into a griffon. Interesting.
Ah! So that's what Crystina is turning into! I should've known that sooner based on her name. The way Emi said that part made me laugh as well.
So we have:
Grent- Pegasus pony
Damien- Griffon
Emi- Unicorn pony
Crystina- Crystal pony
I'm so glad I'm following this fanfic. The humor, the mystery behind the transformation, and the way the characters deal with it is what entices me.
Loving this story so far! "Patiently" waiting for next update.
5476571 We do... maybe I could write something? But I only have 2 OC and they are an unicorn and a pegasus.
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We have a zebra and a crystal pony with mine and this fic but no garden variety earthpony
Ok, to do list-
1. Argrily say "lucky!"
2. next chapter
3. favorite it
4. yell at author, "Please finish this story"
5. think to self, "Why not me? I have an OC!"
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My response to #5
DO IT!!!!
Ahem, but I only counted three in Emi and Damien, but four in Crystina and Grant. Are there two I'm missing? And in response to:
from chapter 1, Of course I won't judge you! I'm the same way! I normally only express it on brony-filled websites like fimfiction.
I can see grent's sanity dropping like he's a protagonist in amnesia
Also.... you're on the featured list man
5625247 I saw. 24.media.tumblr.com/154366b046daf39c51b8eb01559c7ddd/tumblr_n083dmdAYH1traxjqo6_500.gif
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And there goes his sanity!
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no! NO NO NO NO NO NO I WANT MOAAAARRR!!!!!!!!
also please find a way to make this happen in real life. thank you, that will be all. I want to look like my OC.
also: you are a freaking literary genius.
5625311 I have my best chemists working on it right now. How are we looking Dr. Cel?
Dr. Cel: i.imgur.com/ieOdfWs.jpg
Is that discrimination in turning them away from each hotel, or are they really booked solid everywhere? I'm rather surprised by it if it was discrimination; you'd think greed would outweigh the oddness factor. I'm pretty sure employees at the hotels have probably seen everything imaginable in terms of strangeness.
I'm going to guess that Emi is changing faster than the others because she is happy about the changes and is 'in tune' with her OC. I have to admit I'm looking forward to seeing how far the crystal pony changes go, especially if they try to analyze what the hay they are looking at.
Wasn't expecting a cutie mark to appear so quickly.
Yay, I'm glad to see that you are updating the story again. Anyways, analysis time!
So the younger you are, the faster you change into a pony or whatever creature you're turning into?
She's gonna be like Pinkie Pie!
Brain: OVER 9000!
Grent: 0
Uh-oh! The painting's changing! Quick, Twilight! Do something before...actually, I'm not sure if they are able to do something at this point....
If I were the receptionist, I would be freaking out at the sight of a guy with a long muzzle and a guy with bird's talons in front of me.
Emi's learning how to use magic?!
BSOD protagonist moment right here. But how in the world did Emi know how to use unicorn magic?
Nice to see that Emi's still hyper despite the recent transformation.
Yeah, and you were able to identify some random guy's hair color, which was Aquamarine 155-5, or whatever it was. Looks like Grent's personality is altering. I hope he and the group retains their old personalities while gaining new ones.
So that explains Grent's recent personality change.
So the transformation sequence is:
Grent: Ears; wings; mane; muzzle; and fur + cutie mark.
Emi: Unicorn horn; tail; green mane + shorter height; pony ears + red fur; pony legs + more red and pinkish fur. (Wow, she's changing fast!)
Damien: Eyes; feathers on arm and bird talons; tail; more feathers. I'm not exactly sure whether he grew wings or not, but I'll just assume that he grew more feathers.
Crystina: Tail; dull blue mane and dull skin; sapphire eyes; pony legs. She seems to be the horrified out of the group as well.
I guess next up is either dream time or convention time. Or the group wakes up to find that they are not humans anymore (but the transformation sequence isn't THAT fast, right? RIGHT???)
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Actually Grent made that comment on the guy's hair color before he grew fur, which implies cutie mark. Since he wasn't able to check it previously, it could have been part of a previous change, or only just manifested as soon as he grew fur (the cutie mark is the fur color itself right? Not painted fur, not tattooed skin).
I think it depends on the person; The story Original Complication had them wake up the morning of the convention not changed all the way. In fact, only one of that group started to change upon waking up and was behind the others.
I kinda expect Emi to be a full pony come the next morning though.
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You're one of us now
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I'm not so sure that letting the man-slowly-turning-into-a-pony drive is a good idea...
"Oh dear! I've lost my fingers and we are driving at speed!" *crashes, dies*
No reference to Grent's cutie mark yet, huh? I guess he is keeping it hidden as long as possible.
I guess I was wrong in predicting Emi would be a full pony by now. She is in the dream though, which makes me think the dream references their inner mental self. I guess someone in that group has a kind of foresight to explain why it appears. Emi, having embraced all the changes and looking forward to the rest, would be a full pony there. The others who have to be dragged into it would not.
I wonder how serious Emi was being in saying she is afraid to see if she is crazy.
Whoa, that's a pretty vivid dream.
What does this mean???????
It won't be like that forever, you know....
Listen to her, Twilight. What if the Cloud Cuckoolander is right?
There ya go, Twi.
Oh, that's right. Crystina's legs are now becoming hind legs and her feet are hooves.
Wow! That's pretty impressive!
Hmm, interesting point, Crystina....
Uh-oh.
At this rate, everyone will have finished their transformation by the time the convention starts.
Aww......
I like it. It shows Grent forming a close relationship with Crystina.
I've said this five times already, but I like Emi so much.
And that dog is awesome, too. Emi and Cricket FTW!
Update on the sequence:
Grent: Ears; wings; mane; muzzle; fur + cutie mark; legs.
Emi: Unicorn horn; tail; green mane + shorter height; pony ears + red fur; pony legs + more red and pinkish fur; neon yellow eyes.
Damien: Eyes; feathers on arm and bird talons; tail; more feathers + wings; beak.
Crystina: Tail; dull blue mane and dull skin; sapphire eyes; pony legs; emerald green ears.
Pretty intriguing story so far. I'm loving the bond and the interaction between each of the characters.
5658415 That was some comment!