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Yoni


Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick

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A human baby, weak and fragile, is found by queen Gaia, the ruler of Equestria.Together with king Solaris, the two adopt you as their son.
Join our little prince in his times of joy and in his times of strife. With friends by his side and his little sisters, our prince will understand that friendship is magic. For he is, after all, the elder brother.

Insipred loosley onThe monster of Canterlot and (very loosley on...) The love of the sun (can't add a link because it's against FimFiction rules, go figure)
A little something I wanted to share, hope you enjoy...

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 1010 )

Please let there be a lot of d'aww moments I needs it.

Sound interesting. I'm interested. Write more, please. :twilightsmile:

4469692 As much as I can spare:twilightsmile:

Oxy

This seems really good, plz sum mor sir

This needs to be more popular

woo an update!
fun begins next chapter! :trollestia:

My heart it's going to melt with this story and I'm usually a cynical bastard.

4497710 I'm glad you like it. If you have any tips and ideas please share them, I always love to read what you guys think:pinkiecrazy:

Not enough d'aww I require more dammit! Anyway keep doing what you're doing also don't mean to be an ass but there were a few misspelled words here and there but not enough to detour the story.

4499813 I want more there better be more god dammit! I require more for my heart to stop!

4499820 Oh believe me... when I'm done with you, your face will match your profile picture:twilightangry2:
:moustache:

4499825 and I accept these terms and will until this story makes me cry and my face turns into our lord and savior Marshall Bowdrie! Aka as you wouldn't shoot a guy with glasses!

I NEED MORE OF THIS DELICIOUS STORY TO CONSUME!:trollestia::moustache::pinkiecrazy:

these chapters feel short, but that is my only complaint. i only have good thing to say about the rest!

So will he be immortal and interact with current ponyville?

4503048 I'm still not sure. I wanted the story to focus on 'your' childhood, but the more I thought about it the more I want to give an excuse for an immortality bulshit so 'you' could have a few interactions with adult Luna and Celestia and the mane six.

My story inspired you? Fecking awesome:pinkiehappy::yay::rainbowdetermined2::raritywink:

4503414 :trixieshiftleft: Yeah I like that Idea but I know it will be hard to give a reason but not make it seem all cheesy and shit. I guess just make "us" deserve it. It would be interesting to be apart of Celestia sending Luna to the moon, as well as the Canterlot wedding and stuff. Plus I really want to see him piss off the main 6.:twilightsheepish:

4509308 I thought so as well... I guess I can always use the elements of harmony as an excuse or some other friendship related bullshit like that.
:moustache:

4512554 Thanks, I got a great idea for the next chapter. It's going to be epic:derpytongue2:

You're going to have to try harder friend. I still only shedded one d'aww so far. :D

Oxy

Oh sheeeeeeeeeeeeeet. It's gun go doooooooowwwwwwwwwnnnn

I agree with Aleksandr Sherbert, But this time I didn't see any signs of tears

over protective mother mode activated

Mommy started screaming all of a sudden during launch time

GET YO BABY GAIA BEFORE ITS TO LATE!!!:flutterrage:

Keep going this update train fucking runs on D'awws

a god like mother loosing her child
choo-choooo all aboard the death train

Most of them lower their heads, but some wave at your direction while other scoffs when they make eye contact with you. It was confusing, to say the least, but you aren't going to let it ruin your fun.

Do I smell racism?:trixieshiftright: Because I love a good drama:trixieshiftleft:

I really like where its going though. I hate human in equestria stories that are all sunshine and rainbows.:unsuresweetie:

I'm liking this story so far, keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

Oxy

Called it, it went down...

Whoa back up there wouldn't the MC be I dunno mad that he was lied to, then again he is a kid but still, but I digress, great chapter keep it up.

HOLY SHITBALLS MUST HAVE MOAR!!!!!!!!!

Just realized that for every chapter I publish I get one more dislike. LOL:rainbowlaugh:

I don't usually get a kick out of bad things, but..... Someone should kidnap him. :)

i have no clue where this is going to go once the main character is fully grown, is he going to just...die? are you going to twist the plot to give it an AU ending so he's immortal? gosh there are too many ways this could end

4526951 I really don't know about the immortality myself. I want the main character to be an immortal but I don't really know how...:twilightblush:

Im loving it I hope when he becomes a teen, he starts kicking asses shit. But I also hope he doesnt become a Blue Blood.:raritywink:

4527025 Becoming Blue Blood... hmmmm...:trixieshiftright:

What have I done?.....:raritydespair:

4527054 I always aim to please, MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA:scootangel:

4527062 Things are gonna get crazy.:pinkiecrazy:

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