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This story is a sequel to House that Heartbreak Rebuilt


Heartbreak, after a roller-coaster ride of an adventure, is finally in a home of her own, and an honorary Cutie Mark Crusader to boot! Unfortunately, her time with the Crusaders and the Summer Readers Club is more than just social calls - it's also a one-of-a-kind opportunity for Equestrian germs.

It's Fluttershy's turn to teach Heartbreak a lesson in friendship, but it will be a struggle to get a real understanding of kindness through to the sickest, most stubborn tan mare in Equestria.

Chapters (23)
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*squee* It's finally up. :yay:

well 11:43 pm and this comes out, well who needs sleep am i right?

Oh yay, even more stuff to send HB through the ringer. She just can't get a break from anything now and there is still more to come with how many needles she'll have to face down.

I have been waiting for this! Looking forward to seeing all the Fluttery x HB interactions. Poor HB really makes these ponies get introspective.

Hopefully HB will teach Flutters a thing or two in return... Like how to stand up to that evil little white rat-bite. Who is meaner? Angel or the Branding?

I suspect Angel is being extra-demanding to keep Flutters from her duty with HB. It sounds like a fair chunk of her month is already gone (I hope not)
Too bad for you bun-bun! Your pet is already getting her protective nurse instincts riled!

*Star Skybright the former human sheepishly rubs his sore, band-aid dotted rump after seeing what happened to HB. "Okay Nurse Redheart... Now I feel a lot better about getting all those immunizations at once..."

more heartbreak woohoo

Well here we go again :D

So it begins, and with a triple chapter start, bring it on!

~Momentai

And thus one of my favorite series continues! :pinkiehappy:
Really looking forward to more Jet!

I'm actually exited about this. :yay:
Probably my favorite series in this site.

Aw man. Fluttershy time.

5271208 Fluttershy "It's Fluttershy time!"
HB "Well... That's way better than Goofy time..."
Fluttershy "It could be goofy time if you want it to be..."
HB "No! No... that's-that's alright!"

5271292 B-b-but I made the front page!

5271318 By that I mean I saw it on the front page but didn't recognize it. But seeing as I've remembered to follow you now that shouldn't be a problem anymore.

WoW, man, as always, Wonderful chapters, somehow your stories relax me to a state of calmness, specially the conversations, those are a delight to my eyes; anyway, I recommend you to put in the description wich series each story belongs to, this is a collection and it should be indicated.

See Rarity? This is why you don't traumatize ponies trying to manipulate them with song. She's practically songophobic now! She's a misongynist!

also NEW CHAPTER BOOK EEEEE

Oh dear, Ghost Writer was channelling Outsiders from Beyond, and because they suck at poetry he doesn't suspect a thing. (No those are good poems actually.)

One thing H.B. has to learn about Pinkie Pie is you always smile at Pinkie Pie, because the longer you don't smile, the more it escalates, and the more it escalates, the harder it is to smile. Pinkie doesn't understand the difference between surface and substance, so instead of working hard to bring you meaningful happiness whether or not it makes you smile, she becomes obsessed instead purely with making the corners of your mouth turn upward, and if that upsets you well, you smiled so it's all good right? She learned a hard lesson whith Discord about how laughter can hurt people when you laugh at them, but she's never learned the lesson that you can hurt people by making them laugh. The people who laugh can be hurting too, not just the ones being laughed at.

saw this before i went to work. had to wait till I got home to read it.
I have to say i noticed a few goofy errors here and there. but you did a *pulls rarity out of a hat* fabulous! *put's rarity back in hat* job!

now HB which shot would you like first? the blue one? the yellow one? the pink one? the orange one? the white one? or the purple one?:pinkiecrazy:

5273074 *uses image of luna and query in socks to distract HB*

5271318
If you set this as a sequel to your previous story, then favorites of that story will get a notification there is a new sequel.

Buuut you did get the front page, so I didn't miss it anyway.

5273137 Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh.

I had read that as "Beware the White Horse" instead of "Beware the White Hare".

Admittedly this book seemed to start suddenly to me, it just plopped me in some time after the last story.

“Butterflies and lights in the sky...” she waved her hoof over the sky. “‘Thank you, H.B.! Signed... Uhm... Everypony!”

~Butterfly in the skyyyy, I can go twice as hiiigh. :yay:

If that foal starts whistling then we're in all kinds of 'nope' territory. You know the foal I'm talking about and you know the tune.

A dog named Nigel? And the story works out with this song I'm posting too, to some degree. :pinkiecrazy:

....:rainbowderp: Holy crud it's early Christmas:pinkiegasp:!

I'd been waiting ages and re-reading the other three stories hoping for a sequel soon. Was honestly starting to fear that the project may have been dropped:applecry:. Glad to see it's still going:yay:.

♫ A Flutterhut! A Flutterhut! Coltucky fledged Scootaloo and a Flutterhut! ♫

I just have to post this video.

Also, here's an analysis of that video as done by an extraterrestrial who knows English.

5291794 I was waiting for someone to pick that up.

Finally caught up with this story, took me a full week to read all of them up to this point and I loved each and every one of them can't wait to see what happens next.

YES!!!!!! Your stories are always enjoyable. :moustache:

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there are 4 other stories, I should know, I've read them all 3 times, they even inspired part of my OC's backsotry

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...ugh! Duh Red:facehoof:! guess I forgot to include the first as it was on a favorites page(my browser's before I got an account) and only saw three on the side:twilightsheepish:.

Awww vaccination time, I remember the first time I got one, the doctor handed me a tongue depressor and said "hold this" I reply "what for" and he said "done" and I give him the WTF face, I did not feel a thing.

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YAY! The Story continues!:yay:

left off at a cliff hanger (my minds trowing a pinkie pie party wonders what happens next)

This begs and the question though if she has no natural immunities then is she going to catch other diseases as the story goes on? Oh and jetblack it's good to know you made it out of that convention safely.:pinkiehappy:

5562954 I'm still working on the chapters. There have been some real life hiccups. A new friend that I was just kinda getting to know died. Went to their funeral. Many sads.

Lol creative monkey team...

Huh... Clearly I missed the memo that this Arc had come out...
HB current condition certainly makes sense... new body no defenses... though why she didn't get sick soon is a good question.
Unless...
I wonder if this Cursed Brand demands HB be social so as to highlight her status as a leper, rather that let her escape into the life of a solitary hermit.
AND...
It does become clear that HB is not a real pony. (The animals, The smells, The brand, The lack of hoof power, the general lack of earth pony vitality...)
She is only a Human Male Twisted into a Pony shape.
All the weaknesses of humans and ponies and none of the benefits...

This most likely WILL end with an Orbital Friendship Cannon to the face... If only to fix her...
Being a horrific pony shaped abomination cannot be good for long term health... and the fae certainly wouldn't REALLY care if she died... as long as every moment she lived was agony. (And considering the implication that her death would be chaotically catastrophic... They bank on even further prolonged suffering in a vain attempt to overcome / fix what the fae deemed an inescapable condition...)
Methinks the hospital is going to wonder why her organs don't look right... And the general stalled plot will finally get its jumpstart...

5601632 Oh EbonHeart, I've missed you.

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