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Avox


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Good god.

This was incredible Avox. I was a huge fan of your work before, but this is your best work in my eyes.

I loved it:fluttercry::heart:

I shall read this later.

This...

This...

I just....dammit.

This was beautiful... :fluttercry:

4608146 read it now

It's REALLY good.

4608172 That... is surprisingly fitting.

Man, whoever inspired you to do this was a genius. Lol, this is in my top 15 favourite stories I've read, no kidding.

This was an amazing storyn with a ship rarely explored. You my friend have set the standard for the ship. Well written. You made me feel, something that only happens once in a blue moon. May Roseluck rest in peace until it is time for Spike to join her.

So... beautiful. :heart: Now while you excuse me, I'm going to cry more feels out of my eyes.

He wanted to feel something, anything to let him know that he was alive.

I can, and I think many of us here can not only relate to this line, but the whole story in general. I'm not done with it yet, but boy I'm not interrupting my read through of this story. (So Into it, I'm reading the whole thing out loud.)

4608196 it's rare for to not have a song for the occasion :heart:

You owe me so much Bon Bon and hentai!

I'm glad this got featured. If any story ever deserved to be known, it's this one.

4608291 PM incoming. :rainbowlaugh:

What I learned in boating school today is... This story rocks!:heart:

4608296 IT GOT FEATURED!:pinkiehappy:

4608307 Thanks! :yay:

In all seriousness though, this was a terrific read. I feel like it was a tad confusing at the start, but as it went on it became much more clear. Cheers for that.

I feel like it may have been a bit overplayed, though. Spike cries every day for the rest of his life? I doubt that Roseluck wanted that. She'd love the flowers on her grave, but I doubt she wants a good portion of his life to be spent bawling his eyes out. No decent person expects you to cry day after day, no matter what reason you may have. Its just plain unhealthy.

Overall though, this was a great story. I'm gonna go read cupcakes to even out my emotions a bit. Toodles.

Just finished. I'm going to take a walk after I blog about this story. It deserves every bit of recognition, this is going on my wall.

This story is remarkable: near flawless grammar, familiarity and realism, subtle narration that evokes emotion.

Roseluck turned to him, a delicate pink plush tainting her own cheeks. “D-did you really keep all the roses I gave you?”

Blush, not plush.

He wanted to feel something, anything to let him know that he was alive.

This line right here summarizes why I like this story. It's so life, for lack of a better term.

If I had one criticism, it would be Twilight & Caramel. I'm not entirely sure whether that scene is necessary to the story; even if it is, it feels so out of left field as to be out of place with the rest of the story.

4608376 Nice catch!

It’s for special talent,

I imagine that's supposed to be "It's your special talent," and I don't quite see the need for the Twilight/Caramel dating/sex, which feels slightly out-of-place and tacked on, but none of it detracts from the larger work. In all, this was a powerful piece, and well-deserving of praise. It was a breath of fresh air on a Feature Box that had been smothering under little movement in the last few days, and I'm glad that it found it's way there. Well done!:twilightsmile:

This is...beautiful, flawless. Bravo, bravo.:heart:

Dammit you got me crying.
A truly amazing story.

This was beautiful. I always loved Roseluck, but now I adore her. This was an 8000 word master piece. Well done sir.

This seems to really be making an impact. I don't have the time to read it just this minute, but it's up there on my read-later list, begging to be the first thing I read. :twilightsmile:

This makes my feels hurt so badly.

too much awesome! :heart:

One of my biggest fears is that I will leave this world forgotten. I normally don't go for the tragedy tag, but this hooked me in. I really hate feeling things so you are a bastard for that. Other than that, this remains the best story I have read with the tragedy tag.

:fluttercry:

Beautiful. This story was beautiful, and very well executed. I don't know how to thank you for this, but know that I'll be watching you •^•

To be remembered
Forever:pinkiesad2:

This was one of the single most beautiful pieces I've read in my entire life.
Avox, you cruel, cruel soul, you write beautifully.
:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

"No..." I whisper as I continue to bawl my eyes out.

...

Fuck, man.

Fuck.

4608972 I was literally just reading your 700 follower blog when I got the notification for this comment. :rainbowlaugh:

4608961 Oh, wow. Thanks!

4608984

Of course!

~Skeeter The Lurker

4608980

...People read those?

Anyway, I wanna read this once more before faving it, because usually I don't like sad porn (as in, stories that make you sad, not people rutting while crying) and I'm tired and I've been drinking bear, so let's be sure. Still. Fuck, man.

All these stories about her, I think Roseluck's become my favorite background pony...

It was absolutely beautiful.

Absolutely loved this story. Totally faved and liked.

I have no words.

:fluttercry:

This was incredible. Bravo, sir.

This...This piece of art....:fluttershysad:
You've made me smile, laugh, frown and cry with this one piece and I must say that I do not regret opening this.
I found it on the feature page today and my heart aches right now for Spike. I need to wipe the tears from my eyes. :fluttercry:

Well done.
Very bucking well done. :heart:

The best stories that I have ever read, simple as that!

You just got another follower.

My heart feels clenched... Is this a bad thing?

>Ecocat<

I... I loved it! It had me smiling and then crying. You sir are born to be a writer. I say that because it is near impossible for stories to get a tear from me, but this one did! So bravo, sir. Bravo.

I think that I teared up more than ever with this fic.

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