Into a Goodbye Sky

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Rainbow Dash shares a few parting words with Scootaloo the night before she ships off to flight school.

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Whinifree

Whinifree #1 · Mar 1st, 2015 · 4 · ·

Meridian Prime

Meridian Prime #2 · Mar 4th, 2015 · · ·

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This guy is right on the money. And I can sympathise so hard with this.

ShiningNova

ShiningNova #3 · Mar 4th, 2015 · · ·

A nice fluffy little story.

Safaia Bara

Safaia Bara #4 · May 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I would love for you to continue this, it looks like a great start to a longer story. Making new friends, missing old ones, learning to fly, maybe even facing off against a few bullies? Or a visit from RD? Who knows? As Scoots would say, "The possibilities are, like, endless"!

RainbowJaxs16

RainbowJaxs16 #5 · Jul 16th, 2015 · · ·

This story was really heartwarming and the characterization was on point. Like others have already said, I would love to see a sequel to this. And on a side note: Cotton Cloudy...that is such a freakin' cute name and play on words! Gah!

Avox

Avox #6 · Jul 16th, 2015 · · ·

6211163 Cotton Cloudy is a super adorable name, but I can't take credit for it. She's actually showed up in the show a few times.

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Most adorable filly, ten times outta ten. ~~I mean, who cares about the CMC, right?~~

Zaid ValRoa

Zaid ValRoa #7 · Jul 28th, 2015 · · ·

I’m sure you've the story by now.

And I think you a word there.

This was some really nice fluff, Avvy. As others said, this could have potential for a small series about Scootaloo's hijinks in flight Camp (with adorable Cotton Cloudy sidekick shenanigans) But as it stands, it's a very nice story about accepting changes.

Four stars, I'd read it again.