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Sharp Spark

Nothing says I miss you quite like war poetry carved in your door with a stanley knife.


Dear Assistant Vice-Principal Iron Will,

I accept that I have to spend my Saturday in detention for what I did wrong. And, you know, at first I thought it would be easy for each of us to write an essay about who we are. After all, the five of us are so very different. The jock and the princess. The farmer and the party girl and the wallflower. I saw it all so clear, the simplest possible terms, the most convenient definitions...

An Equestria Girls fanfiction. Cover art by Violet CLM, editing by Exuno.

Warning! Contents include: Teenagers, Angsty Drama, Dramatic Angst, Bad Words, Lesbians, and Mane-Six Shipping

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 117 )

I haven't read this yet, but so far I don't really have much of a reason to either. The description doesn't really tell me anything about the story except that it involves shipping a few if the mane six in the Equestria Girls universe. Is there anything more to it than that?

Have you never watched the Breakfast Club?

Nope. It didn't even occur to me that this fic was a reference to anything. I guess that explains it.
Is that enough to earn this a crossover tag? I might have been confused less if there has been one?

Yeah, author should probably note that.

I want to know how they got detention and also why is there a romance tag

Oh, Pinkie. :facehoof:

Fair. I didn't at the start as it's in that middle place being more of a thematic crossover than using characters or setting directly.

Good news! Reading the story will answer both of those questions. :twilightsmile:

Yeah, that's definitely a gray area.

This is an awesome book

You are found guilty of not writing more of this. Your sentence is to either write another seven chappie continuation, or write a one shot with Twilight Sparkle as the feature character.

The choice is yours...

So flutters is gay pinkie is an orphan what else is there also flutters likes sunset shimmer

So pinkie went to detention for fun I think aj has the funniest reason

I have a pretty good idea for what rainbow and rarity are doing

Flutters is a criminal

Flutters is a criminal

Love this book

Pinkie hit me right in the feels. Great story!

Any chance you'll finish your 5 score fic, or is that on permanent hiatus?

How did I not realize this earlier?

You mess with the bull, you get the horns!

/favorited instantly

There's only one way to close out this epic story...............

Great little story. It managed a lot of callbacks to the Breakfast Club without ever feeling contrived and made the Equestria Girls crew seem a lot more real. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

So Pinkie are you actually into AJ or Big Mac? Lol maybe the world will never know.

Comment posted by Endless Madness deleted Jul 6th, 2014

You forgot one thing:

She heard Rainbow Dash snigger.

:rainbowkiss: Heheh, heheh, he-

*notices annoyed glances from everyone else*

I'm sorry :unsuresweetie:

Pinkie you really should try the spinach. It can be so good with some garlic and feta cheese (along with some nice herbs and spices).

“Oh, I’m not in any trouble.” Pinkie shrugged. “I was bored! What else am I gonna do on a Saturday?”


I was wondering when someone would get around to writing something like this; most excellently done my good Sir or Madam, :twilightsmile:

This is one of my favorite stories, really well done. The pacing early on seemed a bit quick, but it remains awesome overall. Well done. If I didn't need to buckle down and write I'd re-read it immediately, which I almost never do.

well im crying myself 2 sleep now :fluttercry: buck u author im not even going 2 put ur name buck u:fluttercry: (good writing as well)

Where's the part where they all get high?

No, but this is great. The Breakfast Club is an A-class film and this does an excellent job of blending its tone and themes with the EQG universe. Pay attention, people -- this is how you write a crossover.

:fluttercry: no words on how good this is and tomorrow im watching the breakfest club :fluttercry: no words

Wow... What I have just read is one of the most unbelievable far fetched and idiotic things that I have ever had the displeasure of fixing my gaze upon for an extended period of time. It's probably my own fault, given my own incredible hatred for Equestria Girls and everything that it stands for, but I decided to give this a change due to it's status in the featured box. Boy, did this not change my opinion towards that waste of animation. From the poor understanding of how high school staff members are allowed to act towards students, to the astonishingly amateur usage of adjectives and descriptions, this is simply a mess. It doesn't matter if it's based on a film, it's still rubbish. I am personally ashamed to have given this a view, and to have wasted the two minutes that I spent writing this comment.

Have a nice day.

4649844 So, this isn't Perks Of Being A Wallflower with Unicorns?

Well, this was a delightfully harmless slice of life. Some very nice character building/exploring and just a joy to read from beginning to end.

4649844 Wow that was a bit harsh dont you think? You ranted and yelled but gave no constructive criticism.

The description does very little to actually describe the story.

4649844 The following is unbiased, and has nothing to do with my like for the story.

Sir, this is not how you write a review.

Give the man something to work with. Don't lambaste him. It's called constructive criticism for a reason, and you have done nothing constructive here. This is not a place for you to cast fire and brimstone on someone who obviously wanted to do right by his story. I advise you either rephrase your comment, or not make one at all.

Have a nice day. :twilightsmile:

This was delightful :twilightsmile:

IS THERE MORE???:fluttercry: THERE HAS TO BE MORE!:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: EVEN A SEQUEL???:rainbowderp: PLEASE, I NEED TO KEEP ON READING THIS STORY, IS TOO FRICKIN' GOOD! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:AND ADD MORE RARIDASH PLEASE, IM A GREAT FAN OF RARIDASH:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

EVEN A SEQUEL? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE OF THIS!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Part of what made this work for me was the way the characters paralleled the five from The Breakfast Club (six if you count Iron Will), but at the same time remained true to their own characters. Rarity fit Claire to a T. The rest of the movie's personas were blended using the more believable characteristics of the six... Dash has Bender's attitude, but Andrew's "jock-ness." Pinkie has Bender's familial angst, but Allison's weirdness. Fluttershy has an amalgamation of Brian and Allison's quirks.

It might have been nice to see more Iron Will, because I was looking forward to seeing who would portray the Almighty Janitor in their sparring match, but while those scenes work in the movie, they might have distracted from this story and felt out of place.

4649844 Hey look at that, it's the prejudiced jerk who uses hipster buzzwords and rages like a twit before leaving and getting his comments painted red from downvotes. Every story has that one guy! Congrats on being that guy for this one!


due to it's status in the featured box


4646886 Have you seen the original movie?

I really enjoyed this story and now its actually made me want to see the movie for the first time :pinkiehappy:
Great work!! :twilightsmile:

4649844 Then you my friend, if I can call you that, know nothing about FAN FICTION.
Have a good tomorrow.

4647288 Actually RD is the criminal and F is the wallflower.

4651067 Thank you. I'm very pleased with the reactions that I got.

I distinctly heard a ruckus.
Can you describe the ruckus?

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