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Pandaxxus


"You gave me the best of me. So you'll give you the best of you. You'll find it in your galaxy." -Magic Shop, BTS

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This story is a sequel to Learning To Trust


Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity have tried their best to help Rainbow regain her confidence after hearing about everything that she had been through in her old town.

Rainbow on the other hand is much happier with her new friends, and is starting to feel like her old self again. Just a few months ago, she didn’t care about herself or anyone around her, now she has three loving friends who are willing to support her through everything. She learned to love herself, and found that she was worth something.

However, Rainbow’s world freezes when she comes face to face with an old friend. The friend that had been the source of all of her pain. The friend that led her to that terrible state she had used to be in. But, Rainbow finds herself missing her old friend.

Is it possible that the two could talk it out? Maybe they could become friends again...

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Comments ( 11 )

Beautiful story. Totally worth the wait.
:yay: :rainbowwild:

Every time I read one of your stories I love them!! This is really good! I can relate to Rainbow’s mindset here, feeling like you have to be strong all the time, as well as feeling like you can’t admit any weaknesses ever.

I look forward to seeing more of these stories!!! :pinkiehappy:

Good job, make more. Don't end it please. Maybe write one of the breakup in high school? 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

9545502
Thank you! :twilightsheepish:
9545610
I remember thinking about writing about the whole break up/Sunset Shimmer incident and thought it would it be interesting to write about what Rainbow thought about and went through during the whole time until Twi showed up. I just thought no one would like to see it :applejackunsure:. But now that someone actually suggested it, I might do it!

9545689
Yes please please please please please please please please please please please please please do it please I MUST SEE THAT NOW!!!

Pinkie Pie was a very energetic and loud child. Over her Spring break, she had just celebrated her birthday on April Fools’.

Worst time to have a birthday.

👏👏👏 It was a good thing you took the time to recharge your creative batteries, because you have made great improvements on this fic. Being your best one so far. Last time, you did a lot of telling and not showing when you did the flashback. This time was different. 👍 You have my praise.

9566603
Wow, thank you! The flashback is what I struggled with most and I still think I could have done better :applejackunsure:. But thank you again for your amazing comment! I really hope I can get the next one out soon!

9545689
Maybe, before the breakup, do when Sunset Shimmer first came to school. How did Rainbow react? When she turned bully, did Dash know? You could turn this into a single story with a flashback or something if you want. I just thought it could be a cool idea.

9593670
I'm taking a small break from writing at the moment, but I am in the process of planning my next story! I was actually struggling to find a way to smoothly introduce Sunset into the story line and your comment really helped. I really appreciate it! Thank you! :twilightsmile::heart::scootangel:

9593957
Of course, of course. Always happy to help out a fellow author!! 🙃

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