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pandaxxus


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Applejack and her friends has noticed that their best friend Rainbow Dash has been acting a little different lately. She seems actually happy to come to school!

While the other girls brush this change off, Applejack gets even more suspicious when she sees that her brother has been acting different as well!

Trouble ensues as Applejack is determined to find out what is causing the changes in her friend and her brother, and wonders if the changes could be related with one another.

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Comments ( 147 )
Comment posted by pandaxxus deleted Jan 15th, 2019

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Really? :rainbowderp::rainbowhuh: Is it too similar to another story??

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It's not a problem, it just felt oddly familiar, that's all.

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Ahh okay! Thank you for checking this out though!

Awwww I love this so far!!!! I’m usually a massive AppleDash fan (if you couldn’t tell so far xD), but this was really fun to read!! I love the different style, and I can’t wait for more!!!!

Oh rainbow is teaching big Mac how to play soccer so wholesome

Comment posted by 189360 deleted Mar 16th, 2019

I'm a massive SoarinDash fan,but even if this is going to be be about Big Mac and Rainbow Dash,I still think that this story is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter!☆♛😋

Nice story, wanna see more!.

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Coming soon I promise!! Already planning next chapter! :twilightsmile:

I can see why she stuck with rainbow dash

Awesome chapter!:rainbowlaugh:

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I’m glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

Thanks, new chapter for my story will be up tomorrow, take a look if you fell like :)

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I’ve actually tried to find your story before...but it wasn’t listed under your stories section. Where can I find it?

Maybe you have a blocker active, those block mature contest like sex or gore, if you are a minor I don't recommended then couse my include sex.

Nice chapter, about the length of the chapter I think long or short are both ok as long as you know where to finish them so that you leave the reader satisfied but also expecting more, a good example is your four chapter.

My chapter are from 4000 to 7000 words but I'm only publishing them weekly so that I have time to do adjustments and not interfere with my daily work but sometimes it gets jammed and i leave it in a bad end.

I never really liked Big Mac x Rainbow Dash stories but I decided this one looked intresting so I looked at it and I actually really like this story!

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Yay! I’m glad! MacDash is one of my favorite ships (even though there is abesolutely no chance of it being canon now), and it isn’t that popular, so I’m glad I was able to have you interested!

This was adorable

However, the smile that was spread on her face quickly disappeared as Mac came closer towards Dash and they began to talk. As Rainbow made a comment, she began to get flustered and started to ramble on about nonsense. Applejack watched in horror as her brother cut Rainbow’s rant off with a deep kiss on the lips. Rainbow didn’t seem to mind as she smiled into the kiss and wrapped her arms around Big Mac’s neck.

OH MY GOD.
THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!HOW YOU DESCRIBED EVERYTHING WAS JUT AWESOME!!!

The chapter was ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!:rainbowkiss::eeyup:

This was SO CUTE!!!!!!!

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All of your comments just now made my day :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile: You actually put me in the mood to write more! Thank you!!

Good chapter, if you feel like it I recommend you 'The royal apples' by Radical Gopher.

It only just hit me that both of our stories center around Big Mac dating one of AJ's friends, I remember reading a couple more with the same idea but different character like Twilight in one and Fluttershy in another one, haven't see him paired with Rarity or Pinkie in secret yet.

Finally rainbow tells the truth

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Well...half of it :rainbowlaugh:

Ah the classic "I'm gonna hook up my sibling with someone and see your reaction" move, my sister in law did it to me and I was dumb enough to fell for it. Good times

I am wondering two things

1 why is fluttershy up set
2 what about the pony counter parts

Does Fluttershy's brother appear in this story?

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He hasn't yet, but he might make a cameo in the next chapter :raritywink:

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What would you like to know about the pony counterparts??

Damn only two reasons for Fluttershy to be sad.

* Fluttershy had a crush on Rainbow.
Or
* Fluttershy had a crush on Big Mac.

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Are herds a thing if not then is rainbow dating big Mac if yes who is big Mac with if he is in a relationship

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I still have yet to make a pony related story, but I will let you know that I am working on one. With my ideas, I don't use herds. Big Mac would most likely be with Rainbow Dash in a future pony story of mine, but not all of my pony stories would be based on those two.

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Fair enough just curious

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