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Will Nigel make an appearance?
Please?
this I have to read
Cover art makes me giggle when I see it.
Seriously drop bear what the fuck is wrong with you why would you do this man come on pls.
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This is going to be interesting.
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I hope so. We all do.
Added to "Read Later", awaiting "Completed" tag. Seems quite promising.
Can't wait!
Just a few questions.
What biological enhancements do colonels get when they obtain their rank?
I thought Nigel was banned from all diplomatic missions?
And finally, please answer this question truthfully.
How high were you when you came up with this concept?
The only complaint I'm going to make here is this.
Why couldn't it be a crossover with Supreme Commander? If only so practically everyone in the entire country would collectively shit themselves as a quantum storm lit up in the middle of the country, exploded, levelling a good square mile of countryside, leaving behind a forty meter tall war machine that could construct whole armies in a matter of hours.
But that would be a piss-yourself-laughing fest, and this story needs to be grim and serious. So uneven odds on the part of the hero are good! Well, heroine, rather.
Not to say this is a crossover in the first place. I'm just vocalizing, I guess. Hope this story goes well!
Is this a crossover?
Also, the caribou used the Crystal Heart to put a spell on the stallions, according to Twilight's Fall, which I'm told is canon. Granted, yeah, that's retarded—as is the idea of Shining Armor helping the caribou, or Cadance helping them, or pretty much everything about that stupid-ass universe—but not all stallions are bastards.
Still, as fucking stupid as I think the Fall of Equestria universe is, I'm favoriting because I always love seeing evil get it's just rewards. Retribution is a dish best served by human steel.
Let's see how this one turns out. Hopefully better than that Doctor one, jeez, what a let down that one was.
4133459 given what I read though, it is pretty smart. And given that there are stallions that dont follow the others means that they are exceptionally strong willed, so it may be a good idea to include in the story. As well as the beginning parts of red collar mares falling under the influence of the spell as well.
Really though, I never understood how the caribou can become this mighty slaving race. They're caribou, plant eaters and are the same as pony kind in terms of male to female ration kind of deal in my mind. If it was the griffons or diamond dogs, then yes, I can believe it, but caribou?
Nah, makes as much sense of the universe, and that means very little sense.
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Because they(the creators of this stupid world) needed some random villain Sue who could overthrow the country so they could fap to rape and mutilation and torture.
Duh!
This is making me want to resurrect my old abandoned story idea.
Similar to this, it's a Humans v Fallverse. I stopped writing it a couple months ago, after I stopped being pissed off by the Fallverse.
Somehow, this story makes me want to finish it.
I have only one thing to say... that cover art is of a moose.
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Yeah, someone metioned the fics in thread i was one, I thought 'Huh, slave-taking caribou that use them for sexual S&M? I doubt the UIP would get along with them.' So I did the logical thing that cae to my mind:
Drop a hardarsed UIP army Colonel onto the planet and introduce her to the locals.
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Eh, not my original idea, I just wanted to us the villains.
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1. You'll have to wait and see
2. Alternate universe, he still has a chance to mess the diplomacy up.
3. Not high at all, just had writers block so i decided to write something about the fall of equestria verse.
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Supreme Commander would be over in seconds. As for the un-even odds the ISA is about to get involved, and i'm sure any readers who have read my other stuff know just how that will turn out.
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No, unless you count it being loosly related to Fall of Equestria as a crossover. The UIP don't exist in anything except for my mind. I'll be honest, haven't really read much of the canon fics but I find the idea of a mass mind-control spell a way to explain my most stallions join in, so i'm probably going to adapt the idea somehow. The Crystal Empire is going to be focused on later in the fic.
>Imperium
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It would be over in seconds. But those seconds would be entertaining. Ah well.
Author, you need to get your animals checked. That is a freaking moose, not a caribou.
Caribou is on top, moose is below. Btw, both are tasty when cooked properly.
I just don't take trophy pics. I do live in Alaska and have hunted both btw.
On a different note, bravo on using Caribou in a story. I've used them in 2 of mine because few people know about em. (silly southerners)
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I know, but it came up when i typed in 'Caribou' and I just couldn't resist that picture as coverart.
4134288 lol fair enough. Most people probably can't tell the difference anyhow
Every now and again you see some funny/stupid stuff up here. Like the 57" racked moose that walked up to our campfire during hunting season.
Easiest shot ever 
Downside is that fucker was gristly as hell so it got the last laugh. 
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Eh, I live in Australia so the only things i've ever hunted were rabbits, kangaroos and camels. When i was ten I did help take down a huge Saltwater crocodile that was suspected of taking someone from a river bank. It turned out to be the right one when they opened it up.
4134315 Crocs are mean bastards. They are up there with bears on the Apex predator list. I've seen a few of those videos of crocs on land and for something with little legs, those fuckers can move when they want to.
Relevant.
Orthodox is best lizard. The leprechaun agrees.
So, this United Imperium of Planets... how high would you say they are on the Kardashev scale? Because the implications in this single chapter would suggest they are at the very least a near type-II civilization. This would basically put them in the realm of the major civilizations from popular franchises like Star Trek, Mass Effect, Halo, Warhammer 40k (although they've been technologically stagnant for thousands of years and thus shouldn't be used as a basis for comparison), StarCraft, Stargate SG-1, Babylon 5, Transformers, Supreme Commander, etc. for the purposes of comparison. Of course, many of these examples contain "Schizo Tech", cases of technological levels and applications that appear to be contradictory; Supreme Commander is one such example, considering that you field forces seemingly representative of much less than a Type I resource base to fight over relatively tiny areas of relatively insignificant individual planets in a conflict between several empires that supposedly extend across sizable chunks of the galaxy, powered by nanomachine assemblers that are effectively teleported across interplanetary and even interstellar space onto the battlefield that ought to be capable of much more impressive mobilization by themselves. Hell, if we were to be truly realistic, the bulk of the actual war in Supreme Commander would be fought in high planetary orbit, interplanetary, and interstellar space between fleets shooting at each other from hundreds to thousands of kilometers apart, and any ground combat would be fought with scores of highly sophisticated (yet ultimately cheaper and easier to field en-masse than trained soldiers and war machines piloted by them) remotely-operated AI-controlled UGVs/UAVs—combat drones—sent in to do special missions in critical locations. I believe Supreme Commander at least got that last aspect correct, because I seem to remember that the vast majority of combat units were AI-controlled war machines in that game.
At any rate, what I'm really saying is that any type-II civilization is ultimately gonna be too much for the caribou to handle technologically, even with magic supposedly more powerful than Celestia's (I don't think the caribou can control the sun, actually... I think that was established already). "Oh, you overpowered a being that could supposedly move your stellar body? Well, we have the technology and energy surplus to hurl moons at you. Or push your planet away from your stellar body. Or just melt a huge fucking hole in your planet where your continent used to be. The list of possible ways we can completely obliterate you goes on. Do you feel like cooperating yet?"
Just finished reading all of the Nigel M Chalmers Emperor story and having Orthodox made me laugh my arse off.
Yes.
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Well, the UIP are a bit strange in that regard. I'd say they tend to be a type-III with sprinklings of two and four. They dominated their own universe (AU obviously) and then found a way to branch out to alternate universes with their goal being expasion and control. They still use normal troops, granted their standard armour is powered, as they just have that many. A strict code of unflinching loyalty to the Empire coupled with a large religion that was created to futher control the population ensures that troops and citizens are willing to die to further the goals of the Empire as a whole. They pride themselves on technological superiority and take any chance to icrease their power. They even utilise some more unorthodox methods, dabbling in 'magic' and occult research to give them an edge over their rivals.
They are open to assimilating and co-operating with other species (as long as they don't piss them off) and particulary enjoy manipulating pre-space flight planets. They view slavery as a cardinal sin, believing that it is better to die then to spend a life in slavery. They have forced military service from age eighteen for four years (unless you are disabled/incredibly smart in which case you are assigned another job or requited into one of the many research departments depending. Despite this the military exists to protect their citizens and the majority of the population are more tha happy with the rule. Other species that assimilate are welcomed openly as all who serve the UIP are viewed as brethren.
Tech-wise it tends to be all over the shop, for instance some soldiers prefere to use ballistic weaponry when they have access to energy-based firearms. The more 'out-there' tech tends to be focused in the special military departments, stuff like matter-fabrication, shapeshifting drones, Self-aware AIs, pysonic troopers, necrotech etc.
They are adapt at genetic modification, in fact an incentive for really high ranks in the military is artifical immortality, no aging or disease but still weak to a bulltet to the skull. Other lower ranks get acces to anti-aging treatment (it's not good to have your est soldiers die of age after all) but the higher you go the more interesting changes you have access to, something which drives troops to exel.
Make no mistake, the Caribou are pretty much fucked in this. The point of this fic is not to go for 'Johnson fired his M4D64DJF634348$WAG rifle, his finger depressing the Whilhem and Holmes trigger which activated the firing pin, a 7.62mm round exiting the carbon-fiber barrel to fly through the air as the advanced stabilising grooves spun the bullet anti-clockwise to ...' ect, etc. It, like most of my stuff, is instead just going to be a guilty focus on the mixed bag of characters which hopefully will inspire equal parts love and hate from the readers.
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Yeah, i was trying to come up with a planet name so I started typing random words into MS Word. That came up, I chose it and then googled it.
I kept it, after all it's better than 'Equis'.
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Oh, so they should be closer to the Culture from the series bearing the same name.
...Or more accurately, the Star Wars franchise. Basically, they have access to whatever the fuck they want and don't really have to worry about resources.
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Oh, if you thought Chalmers was bad...
Strip away Nigel's occasional sanity and calmness, add in a grating personality with more flaws then you can shake a stick at and Orthodox is born.
Also, a bit of a heads up:
He hates it when people call him a 'dragon' or 'short', and i mean he REALLY hates it.
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Personally, I prefer to go with 'Tellus'. It's ironic because it's merely another Latin name for Earth, an alternative to 'Terra'... but oddly enough it seems nobody ever picks up on that.
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Well, a little i suppose.
I hate to use this comparison as I can't write a fic without someone comparing it to warhammer 40K but think the Imperium of Man if they embraced technology, wern't xenophobic, wern't ruled by a god-emperor (the UIP emperor is just a very high-up Military Commander who took the throne after the previous one died, he's pretty much immortal due to the denitics I mentioned but the UIP does change Emperors. Sometimes people just get tired of living and want it to end after hundreds of years of rule.
The UIP is pretty much ruled by the military, kind of like Space Prussia I guess.
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So basically... almost nothing like the Imperium of Man?
—LOL.
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Yeah, I guess what the IOM could have been if they weren't backwards space bogens. I mean the UIP aren't good guys, they don't shy away from genocide but they don't just start wars because of minor differences. They just want to expand their own power and therfore the safety of their citizens, if they step on a few toes along the way then that's how it is.
I do find it kind of hard to believe that most of the males of ANY civilization would turn against their females so easily.
This deception shall not go unpunished.
Time to bring down the...
Righteous.....
Fucking.....
HAMMER
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There is mind control in the Fall of Equestria universe, I was thinking of using collars or bracelets that remove inhibitions while increasing testosterone levels.
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Something to do with the Crystal Heart, if I remember correctly. I don't know exactly what the caribou did to defeat Equestria, but what else can you expect from blatant villain sues like them but being inexplicably victorious over the forces of good?
I like where this story is going
4135084 Hmmm...Interesting prospect. Not quite the same as mind control, but still disabling most cognitive functioning while increasing more animalistic tendencies. It could also open up to the prospect of some strong-willed males "breaking free of instinct", and fighting back.
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We all have to remember that it is focused in clop, not really much world-building.
As strange as it may seem that i'm trying to write a (semi) serious fic about a clop fic which i've barely read (I only skimmed to get the gist of things) I think I can make it work. As i've said, I'm mianly interestd in using the villains and the world, the rest i'll just adapt.
4135590 Why do officers get swords,And not chainswords?
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Not really strange at all. Also, you're not really missing much—the original Tumblr had no backstory beyond a barebones "caribou take over somehow and this is what they did to Equestria" excuse to make BDSM slavery porn, while the stories commissioned for it are little better in that regard, making the caribou out to be complete unbeatable Villain Sues.
Well, that period of author-enforced invulnerability won't last in this story. They've caught the ire of the wrong entity, who will proceed to show them exactly how small and weak they really are in the grand scheme of things.
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My assumption is that the answer to that is this is not Warhammer 40,000, so the United Imperium of Planets is not ridiculously inefficient, absurdly dogmatic, or ludicrously sophomoric, unlike the Imperium of Man?
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Well, even in our modern military forces some officers have swords. I think there was actually a british officer in WW2 who captured twenty germans with nothing but his sword.
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If you took notice of the sword when Straken pulls it out it has a powerfield, so it is a powersword.
I've always seen chainswords as quite impractical, while I wouldn't put it past ISA agents (like Nigel) to use one Straken is from the standard army where such things are not tolerated.
Plus, I don't really need any more ammunition to give to the 'the UIP is the IOM!' crowd.
I was debating on writing a short one shot for this universe, since it seems roght up my ally to give it the old "fuck your universe rules and villian, watch me tear it apart"
Did it for Spectrum, maybe I can do it for this one.
short, but brutal one shot.
if I send you a premise on an email, think you can give me an answer on what you think on it.?
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Chain weapons are terribly ineffective weapons compared to the alternative conventional blade. Yeah, they cut through things well enough, but you know what? An impact from a sharp blade can do that just as easily against flesh and bone, and in actuality will usually cut through them faster believe it or not. A sharp blade is much lighter, doesn't have to be fueled or oiled, doesn't have mechanisms that can jam or malfunction, doesn't have to be started up and can't stall; so long as you take care to ensure the blade remains reasonably sharp and clean (which is pretty easy), it will continue to function beautifully. An old fashioned blade is superior to a chainsaw-type weapon in every appreciable way.
"But how do you expect them to get through thick armor with a dinky mundane blade?" You shouldn't use a blade to defeat armor in the first place: it's a waste of time trying to cut through armor when one should be finding weak points to attack around it—the literal "chinks in the armor", so to speak. If that fails, you use blunt attacks, like the awesomely-named mordhau technique for longswords that involves literally holding the sword inverted by the blade and hitting the enemy with the hilt like it was a hammer or mace—no, a properly-made and maintained longsword shouldn't break when used this way—to deliver crushing blows capable of breaking bone and damaging organs through the armor.
Besides, WH40k is absolutely and ridiculously horrible when it comes to efficiency. Why are they focused on using melee weapons when they have so many ranged weapons that are far more effective against armor and don't require that you have to get close to the enemy? That, my friends, is why modern militaries don't equip swords as battlefield weapons anymore—they're obsolete.
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Sure, keep in mind i'm not an expert on this setting and my own ACB oneshot was pretty terrible (I think the idea is good, I just probably should have made a full fic about it where I could add in all of the elements I wanted.)
Sure, go ahead with the PM and i'll give you my opinion.
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Some swords even had pommels designed to crush armour spots. Go for the neck and it's over.
I only mentioned using a chainsword as a loud, brutal weapon designed to provoke maximum fear is something that the ISA is all about. Probably accompained by insane laughter.