Greetings and bienvenue, I am Michael Ravencroft. Writer and artist. From the obscure, to the known, from Comics, to Tokusatsu, nothing eludes my creative eyes. Hark the Raven.
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For years Trixie has been living with a secret that has drove her to challenge Twilight Sparkle for the title of Equestria's greatest magician. Till now, no pony knew what that drive was, and once it is learned, can things ever be the same for them again? Or will this revelation bring about a change? Whether if it is for better or worse is for fate to decide.
My second entry for the Everfree Northwest 2014 Writing Contest
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who won?
I really like this story, but I would like to see what happens when Twilight and Trixie confront their father about why he abandoned Trixie ....
I really liked this story. Have a like and a fav.
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Use you imagination!
JK
But I'm still not tellin'
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When it's these two how can it not be
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I'll probably, maybe, follow up with that. Had to keep it to a certain word count for the contest. And once it's over, I might follow up on it.
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Thank you kind sir/madam/whatever you are!
Sweet story.
You got the emotions down quite well. I too would like to see this followed up on after the contest is over.
I request a sequel. You should make one...
4008459 good job minor word problems but overall great i look forward to future installments/chapters until then have a like a fave a
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That was beautiful, simply amazing work. I would love to see this more fleshed out, but I can live with a one-shot...for now. Again, great work!
I loved this on so many levels. I adore any fic that has these two as the main characters. Have a like, fave and a follow.
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Thanks, after seeing this much feedback, I am seriously considering making a sequel. But again it would be after the contest.
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Thank you all for the likes and faves, and I appreciate your comments! I was honestly 50/50 with this idea, but I'm glad I decided to do it.
this...this feels right i mean they could be sister. this story could be an episode if they ever raised the demographic to teen
I want a deleted scene where all three women of the Sparkle family (four if you include Cadence) kick the shit out of Night Light for not going to find Trixie.
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I appreciate your honesty, thank you.
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I don't know why, but this thought just popped into my head one day. I was a bit skittish about actually writing it, I mean I like Twixie ships, but I haven't seen anything that put them in this light. Uncharted territory, time to blaze a trail.
4009587 and i along for the vapers
4009587 GO NORTH YOUNG MAN! GO AND FIND YOUR DESTINY! AND WHILE YOUR AT IT GIVE THE GOOD FOR NOTHING A SUNDAY SPECIAL FROM YOURS TRULY!*rides into sunset*
Twilight:Who was that?
Trixie:Better question why was that pony riding another pony?
Pinkie pie:What sunscreen.does he use?
This is adorable
can we has sequel
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Yikes, wouldn't want to be around for that. Oh wait, I'm the author, I have to be there for it...CRAP!
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And so I sally forth.
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And Celestia and Luna took home the gold
4009676 )did you get the joke?(
4009669 I want 1 aswell
4008459 I too, would like to see Trixie meeting Shining Armor and Cadance as well as the confrontation with their father... possibly with all three kids present?
Celestia damn it! I was writing story with (almost) same plot!
Good Story, bro!
. . .
Oh well... guess you can always be first one....
I love how Trixie was torn between regretting her actions and wanting forgiveness, and hating Twilight and holding a grudge. I don't know if that was planned or if that was just an inconsistency in writing, but either way, I liked it.
Aaaand... headcanon has been established.
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We did, obviously.
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First off I'd like to thank all of you, for faving and liking this story! And thanks to you all , for the first time since I started writing mlp fanfiction, Michael_Ravencroft have been FEATURED!
I'm in tears, I'm crying on the inside out of joy, but you get the gest.
Also sorry to you MoonWriter, I have had those days too.
MrAskPirate I'm glad I've met pirate approval standards!
Now since everybody has asked me, and probably will keep asking me till I give a definitive answer.
YES, mares and gentlecolts, Hello Sister WILL have a SEQUEL! Rejoice! Rejoice!! Rejoice!!!
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*slowly lifts his coca-cola to his lips and takes a sip before resuming his reading of other stories*
4008294 does it really matter?
Nice, that was a sweet little story.
I loved it, thought, it was a bit TOO fast for my liking, it was an awesome twist! ^^
i've been wondering something for awhile now. how did this "twilight and trixie being sisters" thing even start? i can see how the ship started but how did the sisters thing happen? anyone know where this originated?
4010911 It just sorta happened.
i never thought of them being sisters. Great story
And here we see the reader's happy feels in their natural habitat.
It was a tad rushed I will say, but yeah this was nice and sweet.
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ARRR!! Keep in mind that me piratical standards be more 'guidelines' than actual rules,
Nevertheless; ye done good, Matey!
Amazing story!
Can't wait for more!
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People shipped them at first, then some people decided to subvert it by making them siblings.
A few missing words here and there
"I don’t want to lose you, now or ever! ..."
Altogether a wonderfully cute story.
oh god please be a another chapter or story for this I cant wait
I love this story
Oh god! Now I cant decide if I like this head cannon better of a Twixie ship! You have know idea how much of a problem this is for me!!! This is so great tho! Well done!
this was awesome
nice writing there! I really hope there will be more of this later
4011269 i love your avatar
4011317 thanks, it was fun to make it
should be 'she is, Trixie Lulamoon'.
And also,
should be 'are you ready, my little pony?'
Please tell me there's more to come with this. I mean, there's so many more confrontations to happen.
Trixie meets her big brother and sister-in-law. Once Twilight and Trixie have bonded, Shining and Cadence would want to meet her, too...and would then be firmly in her camp regarding Night Light.
Trixie meets Twilight Velvet. While Velvet might not like that Trixie existed, learning about her mother's death and then winding up in the orphanage would open her heart, and then she'd probably start mothering Trixie to the point Trixie tries to flee to Ponyville.
Then Night Light gets in major trouble from his entire family for abandoning his other daughter after her mother's death...only to learn the reason it happened is because he couldn't find her after her mother's death, and it was his intention to take her in but was forced to assume she was dead. Alternatively, he remains the villain of this episode and winds up in the doghouse and on the sofa for the next several years.
Interesting story, it flowed very nicely. The time skip was something I was not expecting or at least not that big of a time skip. It would of been nice if the fact that they were sisters was not revealed in the title so when she did reveal it surprise would be had all around. There are quite a few mistakes in this story but it is a one shot so I guess they can be overlooked. All in all you get a thumbs up.