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This is another of my 'twist' stories! You have been warned! Twixie with a twist, so enjoy!

Well, not enjoy, but... Um... Yeah... Let me prepare for incoming hate & rage.

Dramatic Reading by Doom Pie Network

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tears have been shed man good book :fluttercry:

:pinkiecrazy:a great comedy, i was giggling the whole way through


Damn. I started suspecting things right before the reveal, but it still hit me hard when the twist showed up. Have a like, now I gotta go read something happy.

wow....just wow:pinkiesad2: you did not lie.
good story mate... wont say more then that.

:twilightsmile: good story :raritycry:

Wow.... I loved it. Very sad, but that makes it great.:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

Ok, now thats just not fair. I thought it was going to be a different kind of twist, something not like this. :pinkiesad2:

But no, now Im sitting here, with something in my eyes. :fluttercry:

Oh, damn. I remember this one. Still gets me, darnit. :fluttercry::fluttershbad::raritycry:

This would have had MUCH more impact were we not warned in the story description. 3/5 stars.

no lie, i cried

To be honest, you shouldn't hint it in description but now I still have something in my eye as well.

...Ow... this makes my heart hurt. Life really has a way of knocking you down in your prime and then kicking in your nads while you're laying there. While I've never experienced something like that, I see it all the time and thinking about it really can make one feel somewhat depressed.
But, umm, enough about my rantings. Great fic, and while I've been more towards Twinkie than Twixie, is still something I like to come back to now and then.

Manly Tears and whatnot :eeyup:

Damn, you strummed my heart strings. No matter how much times I read this, it always gets to me. Not even knowing the twist helps in mellowing the blow.

Comment posted by Alva deleted Feb 20th, 2014

The signs were there. First the warning, next the story is a tragedy, and finally spike. I still cried.

Wow. That ending. :fluttercry: Well done, liked and faved.

Well, here I am late to a fic as always. I just wanted to say that this was great although I didn't get sad or cry. Don't worry about how I felt, because I've read too many sadfics to cry at this. Instead, know that you've done great and it was a good read.


.........That's a sad twist........

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