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Desideratium


It's true, you know. In space, no one can hear you scream like a little girl.

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Trixie's mind works in numbers. So, to convey what she really feels, numbers are the best way to go. She just hopes that they'll understand.

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Comments ( 10 )

Well isn't this quaint?

You've done a good job with the redemption short. A like and fave for the gentleman on the other end of the bar!

I always figured Trixie for the cold, calculating type, but I never realized just how accurate that judgment was. :trixieshiftleft:

Reminds me of Statistics by xTSGx with the simple and meaningful use of numbers to help the reader get an insight on what the character is feeling. A well done story, earned a like from me.

This really is a great introspection of Trixie. I love how brief and simple Trixie's letter is, as that is a reflection of her thoughts.

I'd love to give you a nice big review, but the way I do that is for people who have joined this grouphttp://www.fimfiction.net/group/197295/authors-helping-authors
and add their fics to the folder. It looks like this story would fit right in with the group too.

Hmm. This reminded me a lot of another story on this site, Statistics. This one, however, was better--to me, at least--because of its brevity. Short, sweet, right to the point, and poignant as all hell. Quite a nice little read, if I do say so myself.

Well I was half-hoping for Trixie to pop up and start talking to Twilight in binary. (Didn't notice the lack of a humor tag :derpytongue2:)
Either way, this was very well executed. Well done!

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In actuality, Statistics was the story that inspired this one. It was such a well-crafted, unique story, that I had to try my hand at it, substituting Trixie for Celestia, of course. I'm glad it worked out for you two! Cheers! :pinkiehappy:

Not bad. Not surprised to read that Statistics inspired this, I got that same impression as well.

Interesting story. Using numbers to explain her life to Twilight. I will definitely like this story.

Well done indeed. One or two words I feel could have been switched out for something else, but frankly I lost nothing because of them.

Very good insight to a different kind of mind, and this may have given me another angle to approach on my own Trixie fic I have been wrestling with.

Cheers. :twilightsmile:

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