I am not a bad pony.
I do not do the things I do because I am evil. I do things I do because I used to be loved, and I used to be inseparable to her. She was my everything when I was a filly, the mother I never had, and I imagined spending the rest of my life with me under her wing.
Then she abandoned me, stopped paying attention to me, teaching me new tricks, and spent her time with another filly, a "more promising student," and I was left out in the rain. She never knew how much it scarred me that day.
I do not do the things I do because I am evil.
I do the things I do to get her back.
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Upvote because you have none, and I'm a good guy like that.
I've never been a fan of "Trixie was actually a student, too" plotlines, but that was a sweet resolution so I'm ok with this.
the story itself was really good, but I'm disturbed by the lack of 'genre' tags on the story
those are useful because they give viewers an idea of what they're getting into before they enter. Kinda like putting 'here be dragons' on the dungeon door; that way the adventurers know that if they go through that door, they will encounter dragons
there should definitely be a 'sad' genre tag since the story itself is rather depressing throughout, also there should probably be an 'alternate universe' tag since you're having Trixie as a student as well alongside Twilight.
Just thought I'd let you know
now have an upvote and fav because I did enjoy this story
Could it be?!?! A story with no genre tag?!?!?!
Could have swore I put a genre tag when I first edited the story.... Thanks for letting me know!
And Faust has said that Trixie was indeed a former student of Celestia, though I'm not sure if it was before or after she left. That's kinda what inspired the story, to see why she would no longer be a student under the Princess.
Like I said, thanks for the feedback! Genre tags are now rightfully there, and now people will actually be able to find my story!
2800162 Now it has "sad." I didn't know it was possible for a story to be genre-less!
2802094 I promise I thought I put sad from the get-go!
At least it's there now, I don't know why anyone would intentionally put up a genre-less story, unless it's just a blank page..
Then again, that might make a good story too....
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